Huscarl

That sounds fair enough. I am going to assume you intended that the Site's Map is the official one for role-playing applications. I have made edit's to my characters residence. Hopefully this will be enough......

Welcome to Canterlot, I'm sure you will fit in here!!!

[colour=#FF0000]Do You Like Scary Movies?, You have to have a favorite.... >:}[/colour]

Welcome to the nicest place on earth! Canterlot!

With all due respect, I do believe this is the canon map of Equestria, Foal Mountain is not a fabricated place, I did my research before making this application.

Other than that, All changes you have suggested have been made. I changed his personality into wanting a friendship, but doesn't have a clue what it is about, also all prejudice has been removed. I hope these changes are according to your specifications.

Hi there! Welcome to Canterlot!

You up north in England?

Hi... Uhhh Welcome to Canterlot?

Got a very nice beat to it, I will admit, I like what you did at 0:43 to 0:50 for example, sounds like something from Mass Effect

Overall, It isn't groundbreaking. But I really like what you have done in some places, Very good song Imo

[colour=#ff0000]"Really would think I would leave you? You are my ticket back to the top!" [/colour]Saxon replied as he continued playing on his violin to Forte's trombone.

CUTP Hallway towards briefing room

Marcian walked past Tank just as if he was a ghost, not even noticing him, as he continued his thunderous steps into the briefing room. He continued towards the end of the corridor, passing a whole bunch of ponies he couldn't name, or he simply had no care of, until he reached the entrance to the briefing room. His head was almost touching the ceiling as it is, so in order to enter, he had to lower his head, something that always got on his nerves, then again most of the stuff in this place got on his nerves, he was surrounded by pansy ponies after all.

Looking around the room, he saw Fyre sitting at the front of the briefing room. With that stupid grin, no doubt... ​He thought to himself as he continued his thunderous steps to his chair, His chair was obviously bigger than all the others to accommodate his large size, it was the seat directly to the right to Fyre, grunting slightly, he slowly sat down into the chair letting his wings rest on the back of the seat, and folded his arms in pretentiousness. He looked as if he was in a horrible mood, (What obviously isn't a surprise), a stark contrast to Fyre, who almost always had a massive grin on her face.

Welcome to Canterlot! The land of affordable bath-mats. Hope you enjoy!

It turns out to be Saxon, with a new Violin in hand. Just like old times, he walks out on stage as the crowd reels back in awe. This isnt part of the brass band, but people surely wanted to hear it.

With Forte's solo playing, the rest of the band leave stage.

​You hear a strikingly presumptuous violin playing in-sync with Forte's Trombone from behind the stage, It was a sound that hadn't been heard for years.... It was a tune thought lost in time.

I went as a south american dictator to a party......

Great night.

(CUTP Headquarters)

Marcian was at the other side of the lunch hall. Being his somewhat usual self, chomping on a few gemstones and sitting in solitude. He was a Dragon, he didn't need to mix with these inferior ponies, He thought to himself as he slid another ruby into his mouth and continued chomping, as he heard a familiar voice in his head.

[colour=#ADD8E6]"Will Tank, Livewire, Fyre, Storm Hammer, Marcian, and Discharge please assemble at the briefing room. Again, Tank, Livewire, Fyre, Storm Hammer, Marcian and Discharge please come to the briefing room."[/colour]

Marcian grunted, What in Equestria do they want me for?. He stood up, almost flipping the table that he was eating from and slowly started walking toward his destination [colour=#ff0000]"This better not be a waste of my time!" [/colour]He shouted to nobody in particular as everypony in the lunch hall looked at him, as he made his way towards the briefing room.

Take all the time in the world mate. I know I kinda came into the RP at an awkward time....

I'm up for this if you would let me

[colour=#282828]Character Name: Marcian[/colour]

[colour=#282828]Race/Species: Dragon[/colour]

[colour=#282828]Physical Description: A big hulking brute of a dragon, with huge teeth and is almost out of his teenage years. Red scales and dark green spikes on his back[/colour]

[colour=#282828]Power/Skill: Super Strength and Regeneration (can grow back lost limbs and heal very quickly in comparison to others)[/colour]

Weapon of Choice:[colour=#282828] Uses his natural dragon abilities. such as teeth, fire and claws[/colour]

[colour=#282828]Background (Before the Sunburst): Lived in the Badlands, really just hanging around with his friends and doing pranks like all dragons of his age do, was hit by the sunburst and decided to leave his peers in the badlands to seek out answers to how he received his new found power, from here, he discovered the [/colour][colour=#282828]The Coalition of Unusually Talented Ponies. Though disgruntled about the name, he decided to check it out.[/colour]

Personality:[colour=#282828] An arrogant dragon with a chip on his soldier, Impatient and has a short temper. Is also somewhat overconfident in his abilities, and can be a bit of a coward when being matched or outnumbered, Does enjoy a good fight though, and will stand by any friends if his life truly depended on it. Likes showing off and having his ego boosted too.[/colour]

Everyone's got neat looking desktop computers.

Fail! Where's the pasta and tuna?

Sorry buddy, I had curry today

I watched the first two episodes and hated it.

Came back and gave it a second chance in a few more episodes, and liked it.

I appreciate the kind gesture >.>

I approve of the pasta and (tuna?)

Hello there! Welcome to Canterlot. It is VERY nice!

Hi there, welcome to Canterlot. It's a very nice place!

Hmmmmm. I dunno... This could be VERY bad, or VERY good.

Old Republic movie would've never been made under Lucas. Now, the money making potential of that entire series can come to light with disney...

But I think we know what Disney can do.....

Yes description only is fine, and I've done pretty well with them so your good. Like I said to SRG, there's no rule against request back to back, but people tend to wait a few days before requesting again.

Thanks buddy, I appreciate it very very very very much so I wont request for some time after this one I bet, but your art is a treat to my eyes