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"Bye." Acrylic said a bit in the daze and then after they left Acrylic then said "I didn't know that Luna had a daughter." Acrylic smiled a bit to himself and then turned to the painting.

After setting up his painting supplies Acrylic then looked over at Neon who was eyeing the basket that he got from Sugar Cube Corner. Getting the idea, he then set out the blanket and food and said "Go ahead eat and then you can go play." he said before turning back to his canvas to paint.

"Thank you." Acrylic said smiling before the moon came up. "P-Princess Luna!" he exclaimed bowing lowly, being a servant at the palace he was expected to do as such.

Before long Acrylic was finished with the painting, which surprised him. Usually it took him longer, but not with this one, and he couldn't believe how well it turned out too. "I'm finished." He announced to the mare.

Acrylic followed Delilah and then sighed exasperatingly, if he knew he was that close to his place he would've already gone home. "Thanks." he said turning around to Delilah.

Acrylic smiled then got his things set up as his eyes lit up. He quickly got to work on the painting fearing the moment wouldn't last forever.

Acrylic looked over and smiled "Thank you." he said then eyed the pony before circling around her with a spark in his eyes. "Can I paint you?" he questioned suddenly getting very close to Dawn's face.

"I'm sorry Acrylic, but I didn't mean to, the ponies basically carried me away when they were going out of Sugar Cube Corner." Neon explained as Acrylic sighed. "It's fine, you're okay. Let's just head to the hill side so I can paint Ponyville as a whole. You can play with some of the Colts and Fillies at the park nearby. Where I can see you." He said before adding the last statement stressing it to the young filly.

War Paint let go grinned, "Yeah I'm straving!" She said as her brother gasped for sweet air in the back ground.

Acrylic flushed and nodded "Yeah," He mumbled "Mother must be worried out of her mind by now. I sent her a letter telling her I would be home by this time." He said turning around and thinking about his mother. "Never mind War Paint, who's probably already sent out search parties through the gaurds looking for me." He mumbled mostly to himself

"Oh sweet Celestia!" Fresco shouted before galloping out of the room to head to the park. A giggle was then heard and a pony that was pure white sitting in the back turned into a brown spotted pony with blue goggles. "Fresco's so funny to watch panic." She said laughing a bit then her ears flattened to her head. "I just hope I don't worry Acrylic too much." She mumbled to herself.

"Thanks mister!" Neon said grinning then she heard somepony call her name. "Acrylic?" She shouted just as Acrylic rounded bout the building, Neon ran up only to grabbed by Acrylic "Never run off again!" He shouted before hugging her. Neon smiled and hugged him back.

"My place, it's near the palace, it would be easy to find if I knew what street I'm on. But I can't hardly tell where I am." he said narrowing his eyes as if he was trying to look around to see where he was.

Neon brightened up a bit and then adjusted the bright blue goggles on her head. "That's great I'm sure Acrylic's freaking out by now, he may not look like it but he can easily get panicked over the littlest of things." She said laughing a bit.

After getting the order Acrylic trotted around outside of Sugar Cube corner, "Neon!" he exclaimed looking for her. He didn't know what he'd do if anything were to happen to her, never mind her mother killing him. The guilt alone for losing Neon would be the main cause of death for Acrylic.

Acrylic flushed slightly for being caught crying, then he looked away and mumbled "I just came back from a trip from Fillydephia. I spent all day trying to make it back in time so I could put this up in the castle before my dead line was up." He said rumaging around his saddle pack and pulling out a rolled up canvas that fell open to show the main streets of Fillydephia painted with the locals walking the streets.

"Wait what?!" Acrylic questioned as he was pulled into an alley way by Delilah. His over active imagination swarmed with different things that this mare could do with him, and none were all too pleasent. 'I'm too young to die! I just want to go home!' he thought interally crying

Neon tucked her tail inbetween her legs when Thunderbolt approached her. "I-I can't find my cousin." she said trying to make herself as small as possible. She was afaird that the large stallion was going to hurt her. "We were at Sugar Cube corner and I was looking at the cool stuff on the shelves when a bunch of ponies ran out the door with their stuff and accidently pushed me around until I got here." She said looking every which way except for at the stallion.

When Acrylic finally made it to the front of the line he sighed in relief. "What would you like to buy?" The cashier questioned him without even batting an eye lash about Acrylic's apperance. When you lived with the craziest pony in Ponyville one spotted stallion was nothing. Acrylic smiled akwardly and then said "I'm here for the order under the name of Paint. I ordered ahead from Canterlot a day ago." He said as the cashier smiled brightly, "Alrighty then Sugarcube! I'll be back with your order." She said before trotting around back.

Acrylic stood there and then he remembered his little cousin. "Now Neon I know you've been good but we're here to get the order and nothing else." He said looking to his side and expecting his little cousin to be there but she was missing. "Neon?" he asked looking around the shop and his eyes widened when he couldn't see her.

Neon looked around town square confused, she wasn't sure how she got here. She just got caught up in a crowd of ponies running out of sugar cube corner with their orders. "Acrylic!" She said looking around scared and confused.

So far it has been, this is a great site and most of the people I've met on here are great as well.

Acrylic rolled his eyes as War Paint grinned at his comment, "It's only because I luv my little brother so VERY much!" She said grabbing him and hugging him so tight his face turned blue. "W-War Pa-Paint!" he wheezed

Fresco stumbled into the room looking every which way around. "Ok! Has anypony seen a little brown spotted pony with blue googles! It's very important that I find her or her mother is going to kill me!" He said looking around in a panicked state.

Acrylic looked around Ponyville for a nice spot to pick out to paint. he huffed a bit when he noticed that the places he liked were completely empty of ponies or too crowded for him to even set everything up and paint in peace. So he kept looking around hoping to find some sort of spot to paint the pony locals..

Acrylic Paint paced back and forth on the streets of Canterlot, he did something he never believed he could and that thing was, getting lost in the very city that he grew up in. “I can’t believe I’m lost!” he exclaimed and then lowered down shivering and breathing heavily almost hyperventilating. “N-Now is not the time to panic Acrylic…” he mumbled to himself but then jumped when he heard some crashes and bangs.

He lowered down further and tucked his tail in-between his legs. “I can’t help but panic, I have no idea where in Canterlot I am!” Acrylic exclaimed looking around, but it was hard to tell because it was the dead of night and the soft light from the moon didn’t really help him see everything around him clearly. “I just need to find some pony to help me and give me directions and then I can go home and this will be all just very bad memory-.” He said to himself before he heard another crash and the sound of cats fighting, which startled him and caused him to scream like a young filly and gallop off.

It's my pleasure!

Everything you've done works for me! So I'm going to send this up for final review.

The only thing I can foresee that might give issue is the tragic back story. However, I feel like most things had a point. While they might not all have been necessarily needed they work for the story you crafted and isn't sad for the sake of being sad.

However, we'll see what the SRPHS have to say

But really fantastic work! You've done an excellent job of building up this app!

Thanks, if there is any more problems I'll be happy to fix them.

Dearest Blacksheep,

Out of morbid curiosity, where did you find this particular application form before you filled it out? Any information would be deeply appreciated. Thanks!

Well mostly I just wrote it myself and then I took some of the things from Rarity's app tutorial, like occupation and so on.