ShadowSound

Shadow sat up some and looked in the direction she left and then to Angle. [colour=#0000cd]"Should we go take a look?"[/colour]

Shadow helped with the boulder as best he could before he yawned as took a place near the wall smiling as he felt the fires warmth. He looked to Angle and tilted his head [colour=#0000cd]"Hey, you doing any better?"[/colour] He asked curiously. After a short time he began to hum a upbeat tune to himself not realizing its echo within the cave.

Your awesomeness knows no bounds

Shadow made his way through the forest occasionally shaking his head to throw the water from his eyes. He then raised his wing to cover his head a he walked. He had found a few larger branches that he stayed relatively dry under the downed leafs, and dry leafs aswell, not much but what he could. His best find was a large pile of branches that had fallen, at the bottom there were many dry branches that could be broken to make a nice fire. With the smaller wood in his pack and the larger branches on his back he soon made his way back to the cave dropping them on the ground as he sneezed shivering a little. [colour=#0000cd] " This was all i could find, hope itll do. " [/colour]

He nodded as he walked twords the caves entrance but stopped as he thought.[colour=#0000cd] "Well, it could be rather diffecult to get good wood with this down poor, i looked earlier when i was with Flashbomb and Marble, they are in a cave up the river themselves and in need of wood aswell" [/colour][colour=#000000]He shrugged as he stepped out[/colour][colour=#0000cd] "I'll see what i can find though" [/colour]

(Haha no worries )

Shadow sat as he shook off some of the water from his coat before ringing out his Mane some. He stayed with Angle when the Pony named Lyria left to get Aloe leafs. When she returened and began tending to the colt his ears perked up with the question. [colour=#0000cd]"O..oh Im ShadowSound, Nice to meet you."[/colour] he stood and walked over tilting his head. [colour=#0000cd]"Is there anything i could do to help?" [/colour]

(aww but i was there Lyria )

Super epic!

Thank you very much Shen

Heya, i love your work your really good ^^

Mind doing one for ShadowSound?

Yaaay Thank you !!

[colour=#333333] [/colour][colour=#333333]Gomennasai, i red over that. Fixed it now though [/colour]

Ah oops i thought i had gotten that part, i think i fixed that now as well

Fixed

Shadow was moving twords the tree when the filly came out no where and lifted it making him blink and run forward to help. he jumped back when the tree fell back to the ground. He looked around and then to the two as they spoke. [colour=#0000cd]"Im glade your both okay,....more or less"[/colour] he smiled shyly [colour=#0000cd] "But the weather is getting worse, Flashbomb and Marble are in a cave a while down the stream, but the cold temperatures are getting to everyone, and the lack of dry wood we can't make any fire"[/colour] he walked quickly to Angles side and helped steady him when he heard the grunt of pain. "..i[colour=#0000cd] don't mean to sound cowardly, but would the current situation call for someone to get help, seeing as our survival proctor is hurt himself?" [/colour]

ShadowSound nodded as he followed Flash and Marble keeping quiet as he looked one way and another for the missing pony. The rain was indeed irritating and the dropping temperature cold. His two toned mane soaked as he shook throwing some of the water from himself before he heard the two muttering about the rain. He walked away into the forest finding a large branch and kicked it from the tree the leaves staying mostly in tact he then picked it up and trotted back over with it holding the branch in his teeth before he held it over them to advert the rain. When they came to the cave and the words of marble were heard he shook off more of the water and trotted out. [colour=#0000cd]"Im ganna see if i ca find anything, there has to e something we could use, besides Angle and other pony, Lyria i think it was, are still out there." [/colour]

With that he went back out into the rain and began to sprint along the bank keeping his eyes open for any possible well heated spots or dry wood. He had ran longer than he thought when the stopped to catch his breath, he then heard whimpering and looked around his ears twitching. He followed the nose and gasped to see Angle pinned under the tree running over. "[colour=#0000cd] Dear Celestia, Angle how long have you been here!?" [/colour]

He smiled as he trotted over to the group and heard the question blinking some.[colour=#0000cd] "That's good to hear, oh me?"[/colour] he smiled as he answered the question his blue stripped hair swaying some. [colour=#0000cd]"Names ShadowSound, nice to meet ya" [/colour]He looked Flashbomb over and tilted his head some[colour=#0000cd] "Are you the one named Flashbomb?" [/colour]

Alright i will do that later on today. Thank you for pointing out those rough spots ^^

(O.o i missed so much lol slow post is slow)

Shadow had been walking along the forest looking for this pony by the name of Marble. He began to hear the ruckus of screams and roars from what sounded like an Ursa. "[colour=#0000cd]No way...it cant be" [/colour] He said this as his black ear flicked while he turned hearing more screams before he began to sprint through the woods his raven coloured wings spreading out as his hooves left the ground swaying his way through the trees, he than saw the many ponies flying the other way.[colour=#0000cd] "Eh!?"[/colour] He did indeed see the Ursa's paw before he spun around and landed bit from the camp site and stream walking his way through the woods till he came to them all.[colour=#0000cd] "Eh? Hey there, is every pony alright?" [/colour]

Awesome Sauce!

ShadowSound blinked at the names as he tried to recall the faces to match shaking his head not seeing them.[colour=#40e0d0] "S..sure, i don't mind helping out, after all thats what the Wonderbolts are about" [/colour]He smiled as he looked around and then back to Lightning dust[colour=#40e0d0]. "Ehm, should we split up then, and we can meet back here as its a place that is easily noticeable? " [/colour]

The black coated pony shivered his body and tail as he threw the water from himself. He had taken a quick dip in a stream he had found within the forest. He yawned as he looked around hearing occasional voices from different areas of this final training phase. So far he had managed a single night alone, though he had to admit he was growing rather bored being on his own. Even at the academy though he passed all the test some near the top of the class he never managed to meet any pony his social awkwardness keeping him from doing so. He walked through the forest before he sighed and took to the skies his black wings flapping out as he soared swerving through the trees looking through at the ground noticing many campfires then noticed something he could only count as a tree house, and two ponies talking to one another, he landed softly as he walked over. [colour=#0000cd]"Hey there, did i hear someone was missing?"[/colour] he asked curiously before he spoke again. His tilted his head his black mane with natural blue highlights swaying as he looked on them with his yellow eyes.

(Heya, is it to late to jump in?)

Lol. Thanks for taking care of our newcomer, Quill. I've been stuck outside shoveling snow off the back of trailers all day in the cold and wind. Pleh. But I digress...

WELCOME TO CANTERLOT!!! It's always nice to meet and greet new people. One of my favorite things to do, in fact! ShadowSound, I like the name, and the avatar is awesome. I hope you have fun here with us! Oh, oh, I just thought up something... If the shadow falls in the forest, and nobody's around to hear it, does it make a sound? Lol. Sorry, but the name was set up so nicely, I had to do something with it. Anyway, if you ever have any questions that require a quick response, you can always try out the chatroom. There's always nice people there to help you out. And me, but you can generally ignore most of the stuff I say. See you around~!

Haha thanks for the welcome and interesting little pun. I look forward to rping with everyone once my app is accepted.

No problem!

I hope the changes were acceptable.

Hi Shadowsound! Looking over this app, overall it is strong but there are a few issues I can see from the start. First of all, you left the 'Residence' field blank. Your pony has to live somewhere, as a Pegasus, he could live in Cloudsdale, for example. Second, in your pony's background you mention his father guarding the Moon Palace. THEN you wrote later on that Shadowsound FOUND the Moon Palace and decided to live there. Then you mention his dream as a colt was meeting Princess Luna. Well, since the defeat of Nightmare Moon/Return of Princess Luna is a fairly recent event, he couldn't have had those dreams as a colt. Also, how could his dad be a guard at the Moon Palace when Princess Luna had not returned yet? You just need to rewrite these sections to reflect these facts. Also, just to let you know, it's against the rules for any OC to have a relationship with a FiM Cast character (unless you have the permission of their RPer). Still, overall, this is a very good start! Keep working at it!

Haha alright thanks for the tips. I wasn't sure if the moon palace was an acceptable place to be residence and didnt know whom to ask. Ill get to fixing this right away. Also i didn't relize that was a rule or the time line of the rp world Sorry.