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  1. Steel looked over to them argue, he couldn't help but let out a chuckle, he decided then he was going to sit next to fluttershy... He'd feel proud of himself even if he could just get "hi" out. He sat down next to Fluttershy, trying not to show his bashfulness

    "Um.. H-hello..." He said with a thick accent to her.

    (Anyone mind doing Fluttershy please? :3 )

  2. Steel then returned to Silver and sat down with his cola, letting out a relaxed sigh as he sat

    "Hey, Deus wanted me to tell you that he was sorry. Though I personally feel it's better for you two to come face to face and talk things out." He said, taking a drink as he stood back up and pondered whether or not he was going to try and talk to Fluttershy.

  3. (omg....this took off like wildfire. Serves me right for sleeping.)

    Silverbolt had mostly stayed quiet during the whole class. He had written down several notes and had done the small assignment that Discord had given them. He had overheard alot of Chatter between A girl named Scribble and Winter. Then out of the blue Scribble had gone up and wrote a Equation. How in the world did she know that he did not know but it made his head hurt. After her dissmissal He Went back to his writing, he began to find himself drawing now on a seperate piece of paper. He had Drawn myth Creatures, he Drew a cyclops, Giant, And A Pegasus....... A pegasus. He held up the paper and examined it Closely, why did he feel a connection to the Creature? He watched the paper for a while Before their papers were called back to the front. He handed his paper up and rested his head on his hand. He listened as Scribble was dragged from the room by winter. He laughed slightly and the silliness. He looked to Steel who seemed red with embarrisment. He had some sort of crush on the girl with Pink hair. Fluttershy was it? Before he could ask the bell rang to which he cursed under his breath. He grabbed his backpack and put his Grey Hoodie with a Silver lightning bolt on. He grunted walking out of the room. His Class went better than he expected. He continued to walk down the hall until he Found himself In the Cafeteria. Their were a good ammount of people there, most were just Conversing. He looked around trying to find someone but all of his friends were off doing their own thing. He rolled his eyes, Alone again.

    He Walked through the chairs and tables till he got to the lunch line. He grabbed a tray, he tapped a steady rythym until he got to the front of the line. He put his tray on the slider and grabbed items as he went. Sloppy Joes seemed to be the meal of the day today. He smiled as he grabbed his food, he was starved. After awhile he walked to a table nestled somewhat in the middle and sat down. He began to eat, taking in the buzzing of the room around him. He wondered if he would be joined by someone until he heard footsteps.

    [colour=#0000FF]"So now your here in my seat." [/colour]Deus spoke to Silver as he placed his tray next to him.

    Silver kept to himself not even responding.

    [colour=#0000FF]"Uh.....Hello! Your in my seat! Buzz off." [/colour]Deus chimmed.

    Silver got up and turned to him.

    [colour=#A9A9A9]"Deus cut the bully act. Your no bully." [/colour]

    Deus grunted and looked around the room, A few people were looking. He had to keep a reputation up.

    He took Silverbolt's Plate of food and flipped it sending food crashing to the floor. A few people stopped listening and looked over.

    Silverbolt became slightly Annoyed again. [colour=#A9A9A9]"That was uncalled for, i was looking forward to eating that." [/colour]He said.

    [colour=#0000FF]"And what are you going to do about it?" [/colour]Deus mocked. He placed his hand of Silverbolt's shoulder.

    Silverbolt whipped his and sideways knocking his grip clean off with intense speed. Deus yelped slighly holding his hand. Silverbolt had taken some self defence courses and had Improved with his speed of his reflexes. He stepped forward looking at Deus. [colour=#A9A9A9]"Leave me alone Deus.....I didnt do anything to you......The past is done.....Go away." [/colour]He said.

    Deus gulped and looked around the room. Several were giggling, he had lost and he knew it. He swallowed his dammaged pride and ran off.

    Silverbolt sighed, he looked back to his ruined meal before picking it up. He sat it back on the table and sat back down. He leaned his hand on his Chin. His stomach growled.

    Steel watched as it all went down. He was still too embarrassed to do much anything. Afterward, he walked up and gave Silver twenty dollars.

    "Here, go buy yourself more lunch. I'm gonna go chat with deus... Not hostile of course." He said, he then walked to Deus, "hey, sorry about earlier... I kinda got a little carried away and didnt even bother hearing your side... So a card went missing huh?" Steel asked and fished out fifty dollars for him. Yup... That was the rest of his allowance... "Here... I know they might not have the same sentimental value to you as the ones your father gave you... But hopefully you can go take this and buy a few to replace them..." He said, handing him the money.

    (It's a humanized version of a ponified version of Nightwing because I do what I want)

    ((You're playing a humanized version... Of a ponified human... The cycle only goes back to you're a human... I doubt the others would really like much of the real human names unless they're historical figures, such as my reference to Stalin earlier... However I can't speak for them... Names such as what everyone else is using is fine. However don't use anyone else's OCs because they will complain and start alot of chaos... And that's discord's job... Please change your character so it goes smoothly with the others here. I'm afraid you can't do what you want just because you can because this isn't your RP. However, you CAN open up your own if you want to do whatever you want, whenever you want. There's nothing stopping you from doing that.

  4. Ok I like the overall feel of this app. Just a few problems and half of them are partly my fault.

    1. You have 36 points in your Special stats. 1 too many. I wasn't really strict on this before, but there was a debacle over another players characters stats so I had to reign it in. Also, you can't have a 0 in a special stat.

    2. You are only allow to have a 100 in four skills. Then after that you have 350 points to do what you want with.

    3. Your perks: you are allowed 10, if you're having trouble thinking of some fell free to ask me for help. Alternatively you can go to the fallout wiki, other players might be willing to help as well if you ask. On the subject of your perks, targeting computer is much to vague. We have a system for combat and that perk needs a value for it to work. And since gun fight have been categorized as close, mid, and long range we need so percentile modifier values like: 10% accuracy boost for long range, 20% accuracy boost for mid range, and 30% boost for short range.

    4. What does a photon grenade do?

    5. They dont have jets in Fallout Equestria, but the do have flying vehicles. In FoE vehicles and most energy weapons are powered by magical batteries called spark engines. Also I've never seen a flamed in FoE so I have no idea how they handle that. So I guess you could use spark engine for magically generated flame or you could keep the fuel canisters, but it wouldn't be jet fuel.

    6. You character is a bit too much of a robot, not physically. What I mean is with the way he has to be programmed, doesn't speak, and only really responds to a master i don't see how he would interact in any meaningful way with the other OCs. I see what you were going for, but your character has to be enough of a character to engage the other players.

    7. According to his history he hasn't been discovered yet. Well, he has to have been reactivated at some point for us to meet him. Once again feel free to ask for help here.

    8. Stalliongrad is correct.

    9. His cybernetic leg: you have to tell us the tool configurations. Just a precaution against swish army knifing your way out of everything.

    That's all I can think of. I hope I didn't sound to harsh.

    No, in fact, it was very helpful! I really loved how it was all constructive and you gave advice in how to reconstruct my character! :) anyway, I touched him up a little. How's he looking now? :D

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