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Smartbrony

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  1. "Yes, this should do nicely," Sky said, tossing in a few leaves. A few seconds after the leaves landed on the surface, the water began to bubble and turn green. Sky thought he would explain what was happening while they waited. "The dry leaves have an exothermic reaction with the water, which releases the healing nutrients from the leaf. It also heats up the water, so don't worry about cold water Silver." Sky smiled at Silver, and the bubbling began to die down.

  2. (Sorry guys, I'm still here. Just don't get notifications like I should sometimes.)

    Hammer could feel his jaw drop at the sight of the unicorn becoming an alicorn. He had never heard of such an event before. And he talked of two princesses? It was a lot to take in at once. "Even if what you say is true, and even with your being an alicorn, we have no way to decipher that book, nor the pony-power it would take to defeat Sombra in battle." Hammer shook his head. He had been foolish enough to charge blindly into battle once, and he would not make the mistake again. "If we could free some of the prisoners, safely, then maybe.....just maybe. Tell me, Vision. What do you know of the Crystal Empire, or how to fight? If you're going to help us, you'll need to know a lot about both." Hammer said with gusto.

  3. (Well, you don't have to stop, just, I read you're character's submission, so I could get a better understanding of who I was looking at, and this doesn't sound like the Vision you submitted at all. While I know in this FFA role-play you don't have to follow any particular guides, you're playing like you have everything in the world with your character right now. You started off good, but then the fire crystal started to make it a bit rocky, and then the weapons just seemed to completely dismantle your story. Just my perspective, but, yeah.)

  4. "Cyprus," Hammer called back over his shoulder, "glad to hear you're okay." Hammer, too, felt the sadness that tinged the stallion's voice. At that moment, Hammer's forge sprang back to life, and across the forge was a unicorn! Instinctively, Hammer grabbed his, well, his hammer, and growled "You! Who are you, and how did you find this place!?"

  5. As Hammer looked around the cave, he noticed that none of his comrades were around. "Hmmph." Hammer grumbled to himself, "They better be out finding us more food! Otherwise, there's no way we'll retake the Empire." At that point, a strong wind blew through the cave and put out his forge. Muttering under his breath, he attempted to relight it, but the fire crystals Hammer used for his forge were being especially troublesome. "Blast!" He said angrily. He would have to go deeper into the cave to mine more for his forge. But, he just wanted one last look at that grey sky first. "Don't worry, I'll save you..." He said, staring at the sky, before going to retrieve his pickaxe from it's resting place at the forge.

  6. (I agree with Lightning Streak. You need to start your character off away from the group. Heh, my character hasn't even been introduced to Caymellow yet, doesn't even know her name.)

    Sky's attention was diverted from the fuzzy creature Jogurt as Sapphire and the other pegasus left the tree. "Oh, um, good morning." Sky said, "I....I don't think we've been introduced. My name is Sky Blue." Sky managed to do a somewhat awkward bow, but a bow nonetheless. "So, are we ready to head out now?" Sky was starting to get anxious. As beautiful as the forest was, it was still the Everfree forest, and he was starting to remember the howling he heard last night.

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