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Haserman

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  1. Looking like a fantastic application so far, only one or two criticisms to mention. Has his experiences during his foal-hood effected him in away? Does he not like to talk about his family? Does being an Earth Pony hinder his performance as a cook making cook slower or more clumsily? It would also be nice to see his personality come to life as well because so far it is describing his past life, so just place things like his possible interactions with other ponies and other things like his viewpoint towards his condition (whether he likes to avoid the topic, finds it awkward when it happens when he's talking to another pony or is in public).

    Anyway besides that, this application is looking really good it's refreshing to see a pony from somewhere different *puts hipster glasses on* those other places are far too mainstream for me ... so yeah, goodluck can't wait to see this application passed.

  2. I don't believe in anything except two things, one there is always some good in every person and two your never too old to grow up. I believe being childish keeps us sane, I don't know if I would sane if I wasn't immature sometimes and I don't really care if people call me childish or immature. As for good in every person no matter how angry or insensitive they may be there's always something, often it's just a facade that person had put up for some reason or another and that we should try to always look past these small things.

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