RarityDash Posted September 14, 2011 Report Share Posted September 14, 2011 I announced this story some time ago in this topic, even got some of you onboard for some OC cameos. I thought I'd leave that one for that sort of stuff in case there's anypony who still wants to let me include their ponies and what not. :smile:This topic, on the other hand, is for the story itself, which has now started. My Little Pony: Darkness and Dawn is an original MLP:FiM adventure story focused mainly on my original characters. Primarily it is the story of Dazzle Dawn, a cheerful unicorn pony who leaves on an adventure to uncover the truth behind dark happening throughout Equestria and how they're related to her childhood friend, Arcana who vanished about a year before the story.You can find the first chapter on fanfiction.net and on deviantART.I'd appreciate any feedback. The first chapter does already include a couple cameos from some of the characters I was given permission to use. :wink: 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bronies For Life Posted September 14, 2011 Report Share Posted September 14, 2011 Ah, a well written story! you'll find my little tips toward Aqua, should you use her, on the Deviant Art page. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RarityDash Posted September 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 15, 2011 Thanks a lot for reading! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bronies For Life Posted September 15, 2011 Report Share Posted September 15, 2011 And you're very welcome!Oh my, I just thought up something cool for Aqua.In my mind's eye, she could be like an old RPG's merchant. Maybe going out of her way to find supplies for Dazzle and her quest, should she befriend Aqua. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RarityDash Posted September 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 15, 2011 Heh. I could maybe try and work with something like that. :smile: 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bronies For Life Posted September 15, 2011 Report Share Posted September 15, 2011 Yay, my idea just might not go to waste.it probably will, but theres still hope now! :grin: 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
daftBLUE Posted September 19, 2011 Report Share Posted September 19, 2011 I read the first chapter just now. It's a good read so far. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RarityDash Posted September 20, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 20, 2011 Thanks a lot! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Appliance Posted September 25, 2011 Report Share Posted September 25, 2011 May I just say this was really nice! I especially liked the beginning, I hadn't expected that to happen. :3 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RarityDash Posted September 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 25, 2011 Thanks for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed it. And just so everypony knows, I am working on the second chapter. It will be out in a couple days. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ginger Mint Posted September 26, 2011 Report Share Posted September 26, 2011 hi hi*sniff sniff* W-why is everypony fighting? 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RarityDash Posted September 30, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 30, 2011 Just finished chapter 2 (which took longer than anticipated ).Read it either on:fanfiction.netordeviantART Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
daftBLUE Posted September 30, 2011 Report Share Posted September 30, 2011 Great chapter again, Phil. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RarityDash Posted September 30, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 30, 2011 Thanks a lot! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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