Acynder

Your story was pretty bad. Josef clearly has the I.Q of a sperm bring his IPad to school when a bully can take it. Bryon's heel face turn came outta nowhere and had no real motivation other than "Generic as hell" bully. Leonards heel face turn came outta nowhere. And I hate High School drama.

And what the fudge was with Leonards speech pattern? He sounds like Twist if she was doped on crack.

Angie Cakes, yes. Just yes.

Well, I propose we all help each other. Everyone read each other's. Colton, tell me when you finish your story's next chapter. Everyone else who has a story or part of one that they wish to be read and reveiwed unprofessionally, gimmie. Also, hurry, because I'm leaving in a half an hour or less. Expect reviews tomorrow.

It'd be nice if you'd review my stor--

Hell, I'll quit damaging my pride and ask plainly, would someone if you have a while, read my wall of text in my signature?

Your story was pretty bad. Josef clearly has the I.Q of a sperm bring his IPad to school when a bully can take it. Bryon's heel face turn came outta nowhere and had no real motivation other than "Generic as hell" bully. Leonards heel face turn came outta nowhere. And I hate High School drama.

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Sent from my DROIDX using Tapatalk lol not really

Was that becuz of nastywasty?

I doubt it but nonetheless, let us rejoice! What I think everypony (it felt so right saying that) needs is a review person/station/thread/everyonejustrevieweachother'sstoriesforthelulz. Something that'll kick writing into shape. Because we all want people to read our stories, but we don't want to prance around and burden people to read it because it's a thirty-some page story that no one has the time to read (my situation)

But who would be up to such a task?

I would do it. Tearing fanfics a new starfish is my awesome talent.

A new sypnosis has reared it's head. This one's a bit more detailed. Source is a bit questionable, however.

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Applejack has a bad day when she accidentally causes mistakes that get her friends mad at her and be hard on her, but the next day, she goes missing. Her friends think that she ran away in sadness due to their anger with her. So they set out to find their cowpony friend and make amends before she gets hurt.

Gah! Why can't AJ have an episode where she's just being awesome? Why must screwing up be a part of all of her episodes?!

Well that's a a shame isn't it?

Edit: At least you clicked the link

Course I clicked on the link. I had to tear this new fanfic a new starfish. It's my job.

Okay...here goes

Chapter one: https://docs.google....?hl=en_GB&pli=1

Chapter Two: https://docs.google....g/edit?hl=en_GB

Work away everyone....I'm ready

Well appearanly It's so bad that my PS3 froze when I clicked on the link. Thats new.

You're right Normandy....

It's just I need time to work on it is all....

In fact..I have an idea to help me with that

How about I show you guys chapter two now, and you tell me what you think?

Oh and if you hadn't read the first chapter I strongly advise doing so first....

So what do you guys say? Will you do this for me?

O how I hate fanfics. Nothing but some cliche storys with mary sue characters or the occasional shameful self-inserts. Or completely changing the mood and atmosphere of things there writing on to make it seem cool(Ex:Grimdark MLP FIM stories). And the shipping. OH!! The shipping I can go on about for centuries.

True

EE nope

Mmm.... the supportive kind?

Some what. And the occasional troll. (Like me)

ICO

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I'm not familiar with FIMFICTION.

Is it like... a FiM writer's community?

</p>Sadly yes

Riki can solo bosses apperantly

I'm gunna go 2 bed. Remember as long as you don't clop. I'll love guys forever. Nighth.

Will try my best.

List of people:

Fawkes

Penumbra

Acynder

Connor Coltan

Prince Heru

Sulvass

Angie_Cakes.

Thats all I can think of. You guys can update it.

Will we make onionbro jokes?

Ah but you see Acy...I have my deadliest weapon right here

*Holds up pen*

......Ha! I'm kidding

*Pen turns into machine gun*

Transforming pen. Seems legit.

Weapons? Anyone?

C'mon this storys gunna need conflict.

We'll need to assign weapons for everyone. I call dibs on the Monado.

Then why you even here then...

Cus I like MLP FIM? Theres more but I'm too lazy to post.

NO NO NO TELL US Fawkes, just ignore the hater over there. He just won't be a part of it.

Is there anything you don't hate Francis?

Well we're on a forum for MLP FIM. Take a guess and go from there.