VinylScratch

Why thanks for making the correct choice on the pony lol

Wow thats really neat. Thanks for the tip

I'm planning on using that later -is trying to hide spoilers- there is a significance to the lyrics, but you don't know much about them at the beginning its all for speculation. It's kindo like George RR Martin (however i doubt youve read A Song of Ice and Fire) but you don't know much wen ppl first say it, but the pieces get filled in as you go along.

1. thanks for the comment 2. i agree with spacing, ill do that later though. I'm workin on content 3. Dastardly culd be changed. I didn't know wut to put at the time so i just filled it in with that cuz i had limited battery, wuld rather work on the overall 1st chapter (ugh im makin excuses XD) 4. italicized parts are a song she's thinking of. firstly, the song is copyrighted by Poison so i shuldve added that... -is sued for his only cardboard box- i didnt rly know how to put that in as such. thats why i get editors any ideas for that?

“Give them back! I’ll tell the teacher on you!” “Ooh, I’m so scared, Nightmare Stare” “Devil Foal!” “Just stop it! Please.” Everything about Vinyl got her teased. Everything about her made them want to make fun of her. Her distasteful red eyes have been the scorn of her ever since she started Foal School. Vinyl’s dyed mane hid most of the fact that she was albino; well, at least until you saw her ruby eyes. The first time her teacher made her take them off in class, after Vinyl Scratch made a huge fuss over it, revealed to the school system, and therefore the bullies, her weakness. Tears started dripping from her eyes as she ran tried to jump up and grab them. Even though Vinyl wasn’t really short, these were burly, older foals she was dealing with. She would never be able to reach up there. After moments, seemingly hours to Vinyl, the leader of the group finally dropped the glasses on the floor and stomped his huge, fat foot onto it. One of the lenses broke and the annoying older foals left her to soak in her sadness. Vinyl held up the bent frames and smashed lens as the autumn breeze blew leaves across her lonely section and moving the strings on her cheap, grey sweatshirt. -Writing in Progress-

NONONO Vinyl should beat Derpy xD -Epic Argument Time- OMG ur from New Jersey too? So sweet! Small world I like cuddling too :3 Welcome even though u hav 180 posts alrdy xD

YES DJ-PON3 FTW. Wonderbolts FTW Thanks for the welcome and compliment

About myself.: Its down at the bottom cuz i dont wanna write it here How did you hear about Canterlot.com?: Bronyville Website (bronyshow.com) How did you became a fan of FiM?: Saw a lot of people talking about it. Figured I should watch it and fell INLOVE with it ;D My one favourite main cast pony?: Rainbow Dash So hi all! I'm gonna probably fail at writing all the intro stuff so ill just do it in epik bullets! k? Favorite Characters: 1. Vinyl Scratch, 2. Rainbow Dash, 3. Pinkie Pie Location: United States Stuff I do: Show dogs, draw, write, read Things I love and Tolerate: MLP: FiM, History, Video Games, Soda Plans on this site: Talk about the show, make some pics and fanfic If u talk to me, I may get kindo random eeyup So hi bronies(and bronets)! I hope u come to enjoy me here