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I got Pinkie Pie, which is odd because I'm the most antisocial person I know.

Sorry if this post is more worthy of an edit than a second post, but I've decided I'm going to have my character a work in progress again. I think there's plenty of criticism and feedback to be taken before I decide that my character is finished.

There are quite a few problems with this application. One, you shouldn't have kept the bb code and color. The full application needs to be black. Two, you're crossing over The Legend Of Zelda with My Little Pony (even if it is slightly), and I'm pretty sure applications aren't used for crossovers. I could be wrong though. Third, some of the answers filled out on the applications are either undescriptive, or answering the wrong thing alltogether. For example, your occupation is your job or career, not your residence. It's okay to say that your origin location is unknown, but you also have to put where you are now, and you put it in the wrong area in your application. You're also unspecific about your motivation. How did your parents die? Does he want to avenge their death, Or is the character's motivation is to kill his parents? Lastly, you forgot to type in your character summary that should be below motivation.

I heard about it a few weeks ago from a screenshot on memebase. It makes me feel dead inside that a parent would be so ignorant, and so harsh, legitimate or not.

Heh Heh. I bet that village isn't too happy that they're getting overshadowed by a large fan community. And to what Angie said, I wish I could live in a village that small. Those two must have the perfect life.

Also, I love the edit on the wiki page that links to the internet following passage on MLP FiM's wiki page.

I reeaally want to go. But I have no way to drive there, and even if I did, I wouldn't be able to afford the gas, let alone a plane or train ticket.

^Okay. Will do.

Edit: Alright, I made the edits to the Application. I made the vocabulary fixes, as well as adding onto the character summary and motivation. Thanks.

Meh, it wasn't my favorite episode, but it was good. Tad too much Rainbowdash though.

^I'll edit it. I didn't really notice because I have a ponify filter on. Lemme fix.

And to answer those questions, Most of his personal traits and the way he acts comes out of mostly a lack of socialization and being used to saying the wrong thing. He was born awkward, but It's uncertain whether It's a mental condition or not. Having little to no interaction doesn't help either.

He dreams to get out of the house he is always in and make use of the skills he's learned (cooking, crafting, writing .etc). He also wants there to be a close friend with him that doesn't make him feel uncomfortable, but he's pretty much given up on that ever happening.

He enjoys cooking and crafting because It's something that benefits him as soon as he finishes each meal or item. Cutesy Blue never liked having to work hard only to be benefited long after doing the deed. Drawing and writing is something he does occasionally and enjoys it very much when he gets into it because it puts all the temporary ideas gotten from walking alone in wilderness around Solstice Heights on paper.

Cutesy Blue does practice and study magic, but not excessively. He believes he might even be behind from the other unicorns who are in school. He can lift objects up to twelve pounds currently, start a fire, and shatter glass and clay, which he accidentally discovered he could do when he was practicing lifting objects when he was younger.

I wish I hid my broniness. My siblings make fun of me about it all the time, and my dad tolerates it, but doesn't exactly approve. My mom doesn't mind it, but she doesn't understand it either. But I can live with that.

I don't think lengthiness is a must as much as it is being descriptive. As long as the posts are descriptive and easy to understand, I think no one will complain. I could be wrong though. My application is still awaiting approval after all.

I'm not sure I understand your question, but as far as I know, there is one board for crossover roleplaying that is a little less restrictive, and Main (or World Of Equestria) roleplaying that is required to only use knowledge of Equestria from canon episodes. I'm not sure if your character is the same character with same experiences for every roleplays just set in different time periods, but they could be.

Welcome! I'm glad you're happy to be here. I hope you won't be disappointed.

There's a whole board for making applications. You should find on the index page.

Hey James! I'm glad you could make it. Let me know when you finished your application.

^Yes, I was indeed in the IRC. It's a pretty nice place; plenty of kind and silly people.

I'll edit it to Young Colt. I don't really see a problem with saying World Of Equestria though.

To answer your unrelated question, no. I'm from United States Georgia. I probably should've been more specific. The scarcity of bronies there is probably the same here though.

EDIT: I'll probably finalize it tomorrow. It's practically finished, but I wanted a bit of a critique before I make it final.

^I heard Holland is also really muddy and soggy. You you wear wooden shoes often?

Roleplay Type: World of Equestria RP

Name: Cutesy Blue

Sex: Male

Age: Young Colt

Species: Unicorn

Eye Color: Dark Brown

Coat Color: Light Blue

Mane/tail/coat/style: His mane is the same color as his eyes, dark brown. The mane is also unkempt, and slightly long. His tail is the same color, and quite shaggy compared to a more commonly seen tail.

Physique: He is rather skinny, but is showing signs of growing out of this body type.

Cutie Mark: Currently Blank

Origin/Residence: He was born in Trottingham, but his family moved to a more rural area known as Solstice Heights, and has lived there his whole life.

Occupation: He has no official occupation, not even school.

Motivation: Cutesy Blue yearns to be independent. He doesn't care much of what he does as long as It's under his own will, and benefits himself and optionally the others around him to make a good living. He dreams to get out of the house he is always in and make use of the skills he's learned (cooking, crafting, writing .etc). He also wants there to be a close friend with him that doesn't make him feel uncomfortable, but he's pretty much given up on that ever happening.

Likes: Cutesy Blue doesn't interact much to have any likings other than the obvious, such as magic, cooking, drawing, and crafting.

Dislikes: Though Cutesy Blue doesn't usually hate, he has a few dislikes. His dislikes include intolerant ponies as well as ponies who don't mind their own business.

Overall Personality: Cutesy Blue is a very awkward, and usually shy pony, and has a hard time standing up for himself. When he is around people, he acts modest to avoid any humiliation, though in all truth he doesn't really think that highly of himself in the first place. He doesn't know how to react most of the time, and has a habit of pressuring himself.

Character Summary: Cutesy Blue was born and raised in Trottingham as an only foal. He has always been and probably always will be an awkward pony. He oftentimes wandered off into the city several times, sometimes without even his parents noticing. They noticed most of the time however, and it grew to the point, that his parents wanted to move somewhere safer to keep his son out of harm. They decided to move to Solstice Heights despite the large expense. When Cutesy Blue started school, he was one of the black sheep in the crowd; stuck out like a sore hoof. He always got into trouble with other foals as well as the teachers who were very impatient. Cutesy Blue ended up transferring to many other schools until he and his family decided to just have him teach himself at home.

Cutesy Blue's parents always worry about him. His life was and still is very different from theirs, and they're worried if he will even get a good living. It didn't help that he was almost a Stallion and still didn't have his cutie mark. Cutesy Blue never did well around strangers, especially in public. He always felt that whenever somepony talked to him, they were treating him as a minority. Cutesy Blue however has more time on his hooves barely having any excuse of a social life. He loves to have strolls in the forest, and draw when he feels like it. He also reads and writes when he isn't distracted from something else. He is shy to most ponies other than his family. He's also occasionally paranoid and anxious.

Most of his personal traits and the way he acts comes out of mostly a lack of socialization and being used to saying the wrong thing. He was born awkward, but It's uncertain whether It's a mental condition or not. Having little to no interaction doesn't help either.He enjoys cooking and crafting because It's something that benefits him as soon as he finishes each meal or item. Cutesy Blue never liked having to work hard only to be benefited long after doing the deed. Drawing and writing is something he does occasionally and enjoys it very much when he gets into it because it puts all the temporary ideas gotten from walking alone in wilderness around Solstice Heights on paper.

Cutesy Blue does practice and study magic, but not excessively. He believes he might even be behind from the other unicorns who are in school. He can lift objects up to twelve pounds currently, start a fire, and shatter glass and clay, which he accidentally discovered he could do when he was practicing lifting objects when he was younger.

Welcome Wulf! I hope you like it here. I had an old friend from the Netherlands. She left a long time ago though. I really like your art.

Thank you. I'll have to do a bit of research on how role playing works on this site. It seems a little different than the role playing I used to do. I'm looking foreword to role playing with you if I get the chance.

Thank you everyone. You all seem to be very nice. I'll make sure to take any suggestions into consideration. I'll also think about role playing seeing that this site seems pretty dedicated to it. I used to role play all the time too.

About myself.: I'm a self educator. I study independently. I'm leaning towards being an indie game designer, or artist.

How did you hear about Canterlot.com?: A close friend told me about it. He might be a user here.

How did you became a fan of FiM?: I heard about it on another forum I go to back in early Febuary. I gave it a chance, and I ended up loving everything about it.

My one favourite main cast pony?: Fluttershy

Hello everypony. It's nice to be here. I've been meaning to get closer to the brony community, and actually interact with bronies for some time now. I'm glad to be here, and I hope I'll meet both intelligent and creative people here in this community.