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Carrot Top looked at the mare near her who was still sleeping soundly despite the arrival of a very clumsy old pegasus, and a familiar blue unicorn who seemed to once again be challenging Twilight to some kind of magic duel. Carrot Top never understood that mare and her desire to be better than all other ponies.

The line began to move but Maple stood in place, still fast asleep.

"Um... Miss," Carrot Top said softly in the mare's ear to now startle her, "You're probably having a nice nap there, but you need to wake up now."

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"Hmm... the vanilla chai. Well I do like ice cream, so yeah, I'll try some. Oh and thanks for saying my name is cute. Yours is too!"

The stallion nearby announced that he owned a business, a department store.

"Oh a fellow business pony! You don't happen to have a store in Canterlot, do you?"

As the tea was being prepared, Sweet Surprise looked over to see the stallion wasn't faring very well with tea either. The stallion's face scrunched up like he ate a lemon upon having whatever tea he chose. She hoped it wasn't the vanilla chai tea.

"One of your favorites, eh," she said looking at the tea she was given, "Well alright then."

With that the chocolate brown Earth Pony took a sip and instantly smiled.

"This is the sweetest most delicious thing I've ever tasted! You have a knack for choosing teas. It that your job, helping ponies select tea?"

Carrot Top noticed something very odd about the pony in front of her. In the short time that Carrot Top found her place in line the pony in front of her had fallen asleep!

"Mommy...?"

"Mommy," Carrot said looking around for a moment with a confused look. The mare in front of her wasn't thinking that the orange manned Earth Pony was her mom, was she?

"Yes, mommy, I would very much like apples and carrots, please."

"Ok then..." Carrot Top said awkwardly at the half asleep mare. She began to wonder if trying to meet a new pony while in line was a really good idea.

The mare who answered the door was quite stunning to Sweet Surprise, like a fashion model. she had trouble understanding her accent as it wasn't one she ever heard before. Thankfully she was able to glean from it what the unicorn was trying to communicate.

"Hello Fleur! I'm Sweet Surprise, candy and chocolate confectioner extraordinaire! Thank you for having this party. It's been a while since I've been to a party. I don't think I've been to a fancy party in, ever!"

She then noticed that there were several tea pots on the table as well as a myriad of sandwiches and cakes.

"Um... Miss Fleur? What tea would you recommend me trying first?"

Hey! That's nice, but I have my doubts, since they're good friends, they won't be really jealous. Remember Cutie Pox? Apple Bloom got hers (by cheating) but the others aren't jealous of her, same case for Twist got hers in Call of Cutie and Apple Bloom didn't complain.

But still, nice idea but there are flaws until I point out the 2 episodes. Nice writing though.

Ok well maybe not jealous but upset that they didn't get their marks when one did.

This is something I'd find interesting:

Sweetie Belle (being the pony who's talent clearly is music but she's afraid to admit it) is singing in the streets and attracts the attention of the townsfolk. She's afraid at first but seeing the crowd cheering her on she continues. In a flash she gets her cutie mark. When the other Crusaders find out they're happy but then turn jealous and eventually kick her out of the club. Heartbroken, Sweetie Belle returns to Rarity in which the unicorn mare and the other Mane Six meet the CMCs and explain that friends should celebrate success amongst each other not be angry or jealous. The three fillies reconcile their differences and agree to make Sweetie Belle their honorary member while asking advice on how the other Crusaders to get their own marks.

With the conversation between Night Watcher and Princess Luna winding down, the jet black Pegasus saw Colonel Ironwing returning from his meeting of friends to relieve her of her impromptu duties.

"It is my honor sir," Night Watcher said with a smile at the chance that she has speaking with the Princess of the Night, "and yes I did have a good time here."

She then stood proudly next to the Princess as several camera flashes went off.

"Thank you Princess Luna," the Lunar Guard pony said with a bow, "Perhaps we shall meet again."

With her task done and picture taken, Night Watcher was about to leave the platform when she saw Princess Celestia appear amongst the crowd! The Staff Sergent didn't remember hearing about both of the Royal Sisters being at this event. Nevertheless, if there was one thing that Night Watcher and other guards were it was being flexible.

"Princess Celestia," the Pegasus said with a bow, "Staff Sergeant Night Watcher of the Lunar Guard. This is where the pictures are being taken Your Highness."

Ok. A couple of things that should be covered here in you application.

First, you should change Character Color to just Coat.

Next, you should expand your Character Summary a little with things like what upsets Dusk Flower and how she reacts to it, what she likes to do besides making cards, and what she is afraid of. Basically the more that you add the better!

Carrot Top stood in front of the archway that led into Sweet Apple Acres, marveling at the sheer size of the place. Sure the orange manned earth pony lived in Ponyville all her life and had made trips to the apple farm, but it seemed that every time she arrived here it was a breathtaking experience. In a way she admired Applejack's hard work and success while admittedly was a little jealous that her carrot farm paled in comparison to the sheer size that was Sweet Apple Acres!

The earth pony mare was on a mission to buy some apples as she found her supply low. Farming carrots was great, but when she needed something else besides the orange vegetable she had to seek out other places. She then spotted a rather unusual sign as she passed deeper into the farm. "Sweet Apple Acres First Annual Apple Kiss!"

"Apple kiss," the mare said wondering who was giving the kissing. Her question was answered seeing a brown stallion receive a kiss from none other than Applejack. Carrot felt a little weird kissing a mare for apples, but for the sake of getting those yummy red, green, and yellow fruits she stood in line and waited her turn.

"Hi there," she said to the mare in front of her, "Guess you're craving apples too. I'm Carrot Top. What's your name?"

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Lore Weaver was returning from lunch back to his bookstore when he saw a notice on a bulletin board about a matchmaker service. The stallion knew that ever since moving to Ponyville his life was successful with his business and making friends, but now he had the desire to find a love interest.

"Guess I'll try this out," the unicorn said as he entered the shop and walked to his desk. With a flicker of his horn he dipped a quill into an ink pot and began to write.

Hi there! Thank you for choosing One Plus Another, Equestria's choicest blind-date and matchmaking service! Just a few minutes of your time, and you'll be on your way to finding that special match chosen just for you! Please answer the following truthfully, and to as much detail as you think is necessary!

Name : Lore Weaver

Gender : Male

Gender preference (Optional) : Young Mare

Location : Ponyville

Age : Young Stallion

Species : Unicorn

Species preference (Optional) : Unicorn, but really open to anypony

Cutie-Mark (Optional) : An open book, quill, and ink pot representing my talent for studying and writing.

How would you describe yourself, physically?

I'm not a very athletic pony, but I do like to have fun outdoors and play the occasional sports or explore. I have a purple coat, a blue mane and tail with my mane cut short, and blue eyes.

How would you describe your personality?

I guess you can say I'm kind of an egghead as I love to study and learn new things. I'm a fairly levelheaded pony who tries to see the logical side of things while not rushing to conclusions. I do care about other ponies and try to help them when in need and try to meet new ponies in my travels throughout town.

What things in life are important to you?

Well, the things i feel that are important are making friends, learning, sharing knowledge, exploring, meeting new ponies, and being happy.

What's your idea of the ideal first date?

I guess it would be a nice dinner where I could get to know my date more and learn about their life, likes, hopes and dreams. Afterwards I could take my date to a hillside where we could stargaze and just enjoy each other's company.

What are you looking for?

I'm looking for a young mare who will love me the way that I love her, who will be interested the value of learning and discovery, and who will take me as I am. Basically somepony who will not complete me but love me completely.

Anything else you think we should know?

I live and work at a bookstore called Textual Treasures which is located in Ponyville across the way from the Golden Oaks Library. Just look for the house built into a tree and you should see my place nearby.

You're done! Just mail this to Matchie at One Plus Another, 413 Saltyhoof lane, Fillydelphia, EQ, and we'll get back to you as soon as we can! Have a wonderful day!

With the application filled out the best he could, Lore Weaver slipped it into the mailbox, waiting to see what would happen.

Well, I know Tara Strong (voice of Twilight Sparkle) has done many other voices like Raven from Teen Titans, Timmy from Fairly Odd Parents, and Bubbles from the Powerpuff Girls to name a few.

Holy Sonic Crossover Batman!

Sky heard a strange buzzing sound coming close to where he stood, like a giant bee. It was familiar sound, as if he remembered hearing it when he was in Ponyville, but who or what made it was the question. Then he saw an orange filly riding a scooter, using her wings as a propeller and remembered seeing her once passing by along with two other fillies her age.

"Hey there Scoots, I'm Sky Flare, but you can call me Sky if you want," he said with a chuckle. The way she greeted him made him smile as it was clear this filly had spunk!

He hoped that Scootaloo wouldn't call him Mr. Teacher as it reminded him of being in school and made him feel like some old stuffy stallion rather than the super agile and super cool pony that he was!

"I have to say that I like how you use that scooter to get around," the white Pegasus said pointing to her ride parked by the tree, "You're the first I've seen to use your wings like that. I bet you get some serious speed on that scooter! Anyway, you're the first one here so I'm going to wait a bit for anypony else who wants to join. So while we're waiting, how are you at flying?"

Here's round two of my opinions:

• I'm not a fan of crossovers. I believe that MLP stories and what should remain just that, related only to ponies.
  
• I don't like the eyes of foals as it makes them look like creepy dolls.
  
• Each pony type has their own place in society.
  
• I don't really give much attention to background characters (does the fact that I RP as one make me hypocritical)
  
• I'm glad that Celestia got defeated in the Canterlot Wedding episodes. Don't get me wrong, I like Celestia, but having her defeated eliminated the idea that she and Luna were god-like beings who could not be hurt. It showed that Celestia, like other ponies, is imperfect.
  
• I don't think that Lauren Faust's ideas are the end all be all of how the show should be viewed as. There are other writers putting their two bits into the story and with Faust not in the show's creation those writers will be the ones shaping the lore of MLP.
  
• I liked Equestria Girls as a great side trip movie. Does it affect the canon? Not really, but it was still fun seeing Twilight try to adapt to a human world.
  
• I liked the Flash Sentry idea for Equestria Girls. Let's face it in high school teens will learn, make friends, face bullies, and yes fall in love. So Flash helped out by making an innocent crush for Twilight.
  
• I would like to see one of the Crusaders get their mark as it would be interesting to find out how the others would react.
  
• I believe that part of Scootaloo's inability to fly well is due to perhaps not feeling that she will be as good as Rainbow Dash. Once she sees herself as great in her own way, it will help her to fly.
  

Sky Flare stood on a section of land overlooking Ponyville. It was a great place, with lots of open space, few trees, and even with a little bit of slope for aiding in taking off and landing. The fiery manned young stallion had always envisioned one day teaching other Pegasus ponies how to fly, just as he learned when he was a little colt what seemed like an eternity ago, to give back to others. Now he felt he had both the time and the plan to literally get this training off the ground.

He wanted it to be simple, getting down to the basics of flying, especially for those who were just learning or were even struggling to fly. Taking off, landing, avoiding obstacles, stopping, all he wanted to cover in his impromptu class. He wanted it open to fillies and colts but he didn't mind if a few ponies his age joined. With the idea set into motion, he sent out a flurry of fliers in both Cloudsdale and even Ponyville and nearby Trottingham to try to attract as many ponies as he could. Who knows, maybe word would spread to places like Canterlot and beyond.

"Alright everything looks ready to go," Sky said looking around the area, "The ponies should be coming here any moment!"

Guiding Light paused while separating the gifts from the other debris. He ad been through the repetitive motion of separating the gifts that he forgot about the reason he was doing it in the first place. Purple Haze's question returned him to the purpose of the task as the colt tried remembering what Cheerilee said.

"Err... I think that it was this big," the yellow unicorn said making a motion with his hooves to show the length and width, "Oh and it had a red bow!"

His mind turned to trying to get to know the filly who assisted him in finding his teacher's gift for Apple Bloom.

"So what do you like to do for fun Purple Haze, you know, besides trying to find presents at a party?"

Ah I see. Yes, you can use your World of Equestria app to play in Canterlot Chronicles, just as you could use the same app for Free For All.

If you're interested in updating your character, I'd recommend the following:

1) Private Message a moderator to request to have your WoE application placed back into the area where characters are created since you want to update it.

2) Update your pony and it will go through the review process again to get reapproved.

3) once Ice Storm is Updated, you can request that this application be deleted and then you'll have only one app you need.

Hello.

I know Ice Storm is in World of Equestria already. If you want to do both World of Equestria and Canterlot Chronicles, you can use the original app rather than this new one. The only reason you'd need an app for CC is if the Ice Storm for there is different.

I don't see why not. Really every town seems to have weather, so I don't see how Cloudsdale would be excluded especially since it is where weather is being made. If we say that Cloudsdale has no weather it would really be out of place as the seasons would revolve around it and the cloud city would have no seasons or weather. Basically it would be like the city is in a bubble.

It is kind of hard to say seeing as we only had a few episodes in Cloudsdale, but logically there's no reason why a few rain or snow clouds couldn't be placed above the city and caused weather. I guess the main thing is (puts of Helpstaff hat) is having snow in Cloudsdale acceptable in the Lore of this site?

Also, I have finished the app so it's ready for review!

Yeah, sorry for dragging my hooves. I'm almost done with the Character Summary then I'll be able to set it to Ready.

Sweet Surprise was walking along the streets of Canterlot, humming some merry tune she made up when she suddenly stopped. It was her Party Sense, something she liked to tell others she had when it came to detecting nearby parties, and right now it was going off! Of course it could have been the fancy sign and the wonderful smells beckoning her in too!

"Oh! It's a fancy party," she said peering into the room, "Gee, I haven't been to a party like this in... ever! I hope that I'll fit in. I'm not really a fancy pony. I don't even own a top hat or a monocle!"

She began to panic, thinking that those inside would see her as a complete silly filly, but then she regained her composure.

"Why am I so afraid of this. a party is a party right, no matter how fancy!"

She then stepped over the threshold and into the unknown world of fanciness!

Most technology is fairly low tech.

You see ovens and lights in a pony's house and the occasional machine like a train, but fairly everything is low key.