PrinceHeru

Hey every brony whats up?

I'm afraid I'm not familier with the characters, and the setting of them suddenly appearing isn't really...interesting, if there was more of a reason why they appeared or why they have come here or where they came from would be most appreciated before giving my answer to the idea.

take care nasty

Well random as ever, Fawkes will love this of course

Well then perhaps I can show you guys some TF2 MLP videos from youtube. There are some pretty good ones.

Your always bored.

If you say so lol

Oh I thought it was someone you guys knew, never mind. lol

Wait who's cat?

bad luck?

ah well I'm sure it was a good idea at the time. Who knows you might go back to it

its because we are all trying to win the last post so we are having a friendly sporty chat together.

Awesome can't wait to see the new chapter as well, its just so random it feels like I'm reading sponge bob.

Yeah barely guh that game is so evil but its finally done, specially my new chapter. Anyways whats new?

Ug finally back from Skyrim and writing my second chapter to my story. I hope I did a good job. How is every pony?

Chapter 2: A New Name Twilight just stares at the princess in shocked, unable to believe what the princess had just asked of her. "Princess, you can't be serious of what your asking". But Celesita was quiet straight forward with what she had told Twilight, she gave a nod and said "and why would I joke with you Twilight?". Twilight responded trying to be kind as possible "Princess Celestia, I respect your wishes all of your commands but...this....THIS!... How do you expect to teach someone like...like...him?!" The Princess spoke softly once more "That is because you have the most experience, learning about friendship, and would make the best mentor to teach someone like Michael to learn the meanings of friendship. Besides one of the many meanings of friendship is teaching others about it". Twilight remarked "For those who wish to learn it". Celestia replied "Patients Twilight Sparkle, he just might yet surprise you". Twilight was confident that she wouldn't be see anything in Michael but she couldn't find the words to talk her way out of this "I...he...GRRR............sigh, yes your majesty..." Twilight spoke in defeat. "Thank you Twilight, now then I must go Twilight. Royal duty calls, *giggles* do try to get along you two, fare well" She said softly leaving the library fallowed by Rarity "well now I wish you luck Twilight, I'm sure you will be able to teach him much". Twilight stops Rarity before leaving "Wait your not going to stay and help?" Rarity replies "well um...as much as I would love to stop and help you Twilight I um...have my mats to clean, yes very very busy as you see so I shall see you around" without another word she was gone out the door. "Yeah um...I have cloud duty to do so see yeah" Rainbow Dash fallowed soon after. "Well ya know I love ta stay and help but ah, Fluttershy looks like she needs more help." Apple jack was next to leave who was carrying Fluttershy, who was still shivering and clench to a broom unable to say anything. Pinkie Pie look around the room for a moment to see she was the last one around, but out of thin air she said "Bye!" and dashes out of the door. "I don't blame them, if I had the option I would ditch you too" Michael commented. Twilight just sighs out of agony, slowly making her way towards the door saying "come on, no point wasting a good day like this indoors". Spike opened the door with a large slam saying "Twilight I'm, oh there you are, are we going anywhere?" he asked. Twilight suddenly took Spike's tail into her mouth and while saying "we are now". "But what about the the check list" Spike asked. Twilight sighed as she used her magic from her horn to pull a scroll from the pile and wonder out the door. Michael soon fallowed after. As the three of them wondered through while spike rides on Twilight back. But suddenly Spike asked "So who are you, are you from around these parts?" Asking Michael these questions "nope...And they call me Michael, Michael heart and...keh...you would be...Keheheheh" Michael couldn't help but stare at Spike, giggling to himself. Spike spoke out with pride as he said "I'm spike, Twilight's assistant". Michael continued to giggle and laugh as he said "really... keeh so then....hpf...Are you...keh... related to...pfhhfhhfhf. Barniey the Dinosaur because you look just like his son. BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA Or He finally got himself a dog! BAHAHAHAHAHA" Michael was laughing like crazy. But Spike wasn't amused and just turned towards Twilight shrugging his shoulders not understanding. Twilight replied "don't ask, it must one of those, 'human' things". Spike asked Twilight "Human? Never heard of them before, are they a new type of pony?" Spike then examines Michael and said "Well he certainly does look a little different". Twilight comes to the park on a hill side and bumps Spike off "Come on Spike I need you to help us with the quest paper" Spike said "Quest paper?! REALLY WHERE!!...Wait a minuet, you didn't replace me, did you?" Twilight simply explains "nope for its not mine, its Michael's here. The Princess gave it to him while she was here" Spike then panic a little as he said "THE PRINCESS IS HERE?! OH MY GOSH!! How am I looking? Are my Scales alright?!". Twilight then stopped spike "she's gone already spike, there is no need for you to worry". Spike then seemed a little disappointed "oh...well...wish I was there when she was". Twilight then snapped Spike back into the task at hand "Focus spike, what does the quest paper say?". Spike then took the quest paper in hand and said "Oh right um...hum...lets see here" he said opening the quest paper as it show a list of what to do first, the first set of list saying "First thing to do is come up with a name for...Michael, why do we need to come up with a name for Michael?". Michael added "I second Spikes logical answer, my name is just fine". Twilight the respond "Well if you want to explain everyone how you got your bazar name and where you came from". Michael saw the reasoning by is "fine..." Michael continued "So what name shall we come up with, I'm guessing their are rules to naming someone". Twilight respond "well names are given by their talents or given names after families like Applejack's family for instant, their entire side of the family generally deal with apples so Apple might be part of their name. Or even by their color. But there are many ways to name someone". Michael didn't have a huge understanding "so I could be named anything, sort of like a super heroes name". Twilight didn't know about that but it was alright "well yeah I suppose". Michael then instantly blurred out a name "Even names Wolverine or Batman?". Spike remarked "Um, no offence, but you don't related to Wolverines or Bats for that manner, nor look like one so how about something more simpler". Michael then gave a long thought and looked at the color as his fur "How about Flash". Twilight responded "um, you don't look like the racing type of pony, besides such names would be given after Sky Ponies or other wise known as Pegasus" Michael was having a tough time as every idea he thought of was shot down, then he came out with one "Darkfire?".Twilight was about to say something then gave it some thought, as it had a good ring to it and seem to be fitting for Darkfire "hum...yeah...that could work, alright then Darkfire it is then, Spike check it down if you could". Spike was already on it, checking the box and writing Darkfire on the list. A new objective appeared on the quest paper, Spike read the objective out loud "Ah something else came up on the paper, lets see here. It says 'Find a job to do in ponyvill". Suddenly Darkfire got excited "Wait... a job, you mean I'll be able to do something?! You mean actual work?!". Twilight was a little surprised "um, well so it seems". Darkfire burst out with excitement as he was jumping for joy "YES FINALLY! I GET TO WORK HA HA! And by the looks of this place it seem like I could do just about anything. So then what kind of jobs are there?". Twilight was rather surprised but was glad to see Darkfire getting excited about something "well I'm glad to hear it, its lucky for you I know the town so well, here are the list of jobs that you can do". Darkfire's rudely interrupted "Dargonslaying?"; Twilight was a little surprised "um...no we don't have anything like that". Darkfire asked "Bounty hunter?"; Twilight again said "um...no". Darkfire was getting rather disappointed "Goblin Exterminator?!"; Twilight once again shakes her head side to side not saying anything. Darkfire got frustrated and disappointed "ug I though this place might actually be exciting but of course I was wrong...sigh...I suppose having Blacksmith wouldn't be on the list either". But Twilight gave a cheerful and delight "Yes we do, we actually have been needing a local Blacksmith for sometime, are last one left 20 years ago, most of are metal is imported out of town". Darkfire was rather surprised about this but felt a little delighted "oh really, good at less this place has something. I'll take that then". Twilight looked towards Spike feeling like they were making progress, Spike was already making a check mark in the box writing Blacksmith next to the box. Suddenly the paper flashed and disappeared, leaving a trail of magic behind. Twilight responded "hey that must be the trail the quest paper left behind, it must be leading to the abandon smelter". Twilight and spike quickly chased after the magical trail, Darkfire was also a little surprised but seeming someone happy about this, he commented "Wow, this takes be back to the days when I was playing Fable 2 and 3. Not bad games but they could have been a bit better". Twilight and Spike had no idea what he meant but didn't really care as they would soon come to the old smelther and wondered inside. Twilight asked "Hello?"; but Darkfire rudely stated "why are you saying hello there will be no one here-". A Voice called out from the darkness "hello there". Darkfire panic "What who's there?! Show yourself?!"; the voiced called out once again "relax dear boy, I'm over here by the anvil". Darkfire wondered over to the anvil, looking all around but seeing no one. The voice called out again "down here youngster"; and Michael looked down to see a glowing hammer for when ever it spoke the glow would grow bright"Ah finally you know how long I've been-". Twilight freaked out and ran behind Darkfire "OH MY GOSH ITS A GHOSTS ITS A GHOST!!" The hammer spoke "Wha- I'm no ghost, I'm an enchanted hammer!". Suddenly Twilight's fear turned into shock "wait...a enchanted hammer?! But aren't you suppost to be a soul trapped inside an object, the only reason why they would do that is because they have unfinished business, much like a ghost". The Voice spoke out again "I'm not a ghost for a last time but you are correct little lady"; Darkfire then asked "and what is such a item like yourself doing in such a place like this, and for that matter what is your purpose?". The voice called out "I'm glad you ask wipper snapper for you see, I've been stuck this old shack for the last 20 years, waiting for an appearance to come and learn the ways of the forge". Darkfire's eyes grew with awe as he felt like this was a grand adventure "really...oh my gosh this feels just like an actual adventure! So let me guess, you'll be teaching me how to forge weapons to slay the greatest evils of this land". But the hammer was blunt and said "um...no..."; Darkfire's heart sunk as once again he was disappointed. But the hammer spoke once again "but I will be teaching you how to forge some of the greatest steel and metals in all of Equestria. For I'm the one they call 'IronForge'". Darkfire rolled his eyes as that was the simplest name he ever heard, but Twilight on the other hoof was surprised "Wait IronForge? Weren't you just Ponyvill's blacksmith? I thought you left town?". IronForge was a little shocked "What? Well of course not dear child, I embed myself in this hammer to carry on my legacy and my teachings." The three of them just stare at Ironforge, IronForge spoke "Well um...I maybe a common blacksmith but I knew the secrets to forging some of the greatest metals in all of Equestria, I just um...never...got my hands on the...better...metals........BUT THATS BESIDE THE POINT!! Look I know why you've come here, you want to learn the ways of the blacksmith yes". Darkfire softly nodded "Thats correct"; IronForge spoke once again "Then I shall teach you how to become one of the greatest forgers in all of Equestria and teach you everything I know my dear Clot, but first things first, we need to fix up the shack". The three ponies looked around the shack to see it was old, rundown and breaking apart, Darkfire commented "yah think". IronForge spoke once again "well nothing will get done by standing around, lets get hopping to it, it may take all day but I'm sure we'll make this shining like new, or at less, working. So Get on it sonny". Darkfire then stopped for a moment "Wait where is my Quest paper?!". He looked around all the room thinking it maybe here. IronForge spoke "what you mean this thing underneath me?". The Quest Paper was laying underneath IronForge as they didn't see it there before, IronForge spoke "it woke me up from my delightful slumber, but it told me that you would be coming". Darkfire took the quest paper back into is mouth and said "wait, it spoke to you?". IronForge spoke "sure did, now lets stop wasting time you got yer paper, lets get working!". Twilight spoke to Spike "well lets get working nothing will get done around here, Spike lets go back and get our stuff shall we?". Spike was quick to respond "Yes sir!"; quickly the two of them rushed off to grab their basic repair gear. IronForge spoke "well lets get to work!". DarkFire sighs to himself unable to believe what was happening to him. Too Be continued

oh my god where do I start, all I can say is simply love it.

that is ironic, maybe because its after Christmas and everyone is doing their own thing

skyrim is so distracting

sleepy sleepy, finally on

hum I see then, alright then can't wait, alright then please let me know when your done editing and thank you so much once again

COULD YOU!! OH MY GOD YOUR A LIFE SAVER MAN! Thank you thank you thank you! Oh man you've saved me at less 15 hours of editing lol. Please do help me when you can, I'm most likely be writing the next chapter after new years day. Again thank you if you could help me. As long as it doesn't change the story or change any of the events I would love to them to be listed.

Thank you, but I'm not really sure how to do this correctly tho which is the issue and I've already spend 6 hours writing it and 3 hours editing it. What I really need is an editor to help me, I'm doing everything I can to fix everything but I some how continue to make more mistakes then fix them.

Rocky and Angie sitting in a tree, K.I.S.S.I.N.G. First comes love, then come the marriage, then comes the baby in the baby carriage.

Fawkes, could you sing that very special immature song for us?