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BlindJester

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  1. Yes Roughriders Ridge is an actual place in the Mane RP it is located in Greater Equestria in the Borderlands.

    And the maps are fairly recent so carry on <3

    I must point out though I do not believe you can keep the name After Burner as his original name, but he can keep it as a nickname. We do not know much about your character at all does he have any dreams? Why did he choose to move towards Roughriders Ridge? Does he still keep in contact with his family? I wish to know more about how he acquired his cutie-mark, not just the short version. Did he grow up with his parents or with his uncle? What exactly is it that interested him about the west and not just the rest of Equestria? These are just a few questions to help your app along. :)

  2. Crystal scribbled down what the mares were saying, adding the occasion head nod or saying 'Fascinating'. She looked up at the pegasi and said "You know one time I was visiting these lovely lakes called Nimbusgait Lakes, and while I was there I met this lovely pegasus stallion called Mobius and he had a rather large set of beautiful wings. Although I look at yours and they seem normal sized. . . . how interesting I will have to give that stallion a letter sometime." she started to ramble on until a little dragon thrummed onto her fin.

    She turned to look at the baby dragon interested "Oh my I've seen sea serpents before, but never a land dragon how interesting. . . ." she started a little sketch for it until the blue pegasus named Blue bolt asked of her fin. Flipping her fin about she giggled "Oh no, no, no, my good mare, see I am a hippocamp we are ponies with fins! No magic required it was how I was born just like how you were born with wings. I must ask though how do you surf the waves and is it something all pegasi do?" she looked at Flareworks as she asked.

  3. Crystal Glow dragged herself up to the shore following the pegasus, she felt a little out of place seeing as she's the only non-pegasi among the group. Flipping her fin idly she replied "That sounds pretty nice, but I don't need any armour, plus it would be hard to swim about under water if I was weighted down by the metal. Thanks for the offer though."

    She sat quiet for a second thinking of what to say "So. . . uh what brings you two down here to the Islands? I thought all pegasi lived and stayed in Cloudsdale" she asked genuinely curious. Crystal has never spent much time with the other species of ponies other than earth ponies, instinctively she grabbed her pad and pencil preparing to write down any of the things she might discover.

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  4. "No injuries here, just a bruised nose from the collision but that's just minor." Crystal replied happily swimming circles around the pegasus getting a better look at here. "Although I'm inclined to ask why a pegasus such as yourself was so close to the water. I thought you creatures preferred to stay high in the sky" stopping in front of the other mare at the end of her sentence, her violet eyes wide with wonder.

    Crystal Glow was about to say something else when she heard shouting coming from the shore, turning towards shore, Crystal waved a hoof at the orange coloured mare "Yea everything is fine!" she shouted back turning back to the pegasus "I guess we should head back to shore, huh? My name is Crystal Glow by the way, but Crystal or Glow will do just fine"

  5. Today was a great day to be in the water at Gallopocus island, the water was warm and the waves were fun to ride in. This was Crystal Glow's most favourite vacation spots in all of Equestria; the sun was always shinning, there was always some sort of wave to ride on and the ponies were so relaxed! Even her best friend Jel the jellyfish enjoyed the islands almost as much as she did.

    "Hey Jel watch this!" she called over her shoulder swimming towards the surface of the water planning to ride the wave. Crystal breached the surface a little too fast and collided with somepony her and the unknown object crashed into the water with a huge splash. Rubbing her sore head the hippocamp apologized "I'm so so sorry, I had no idea that anypony was riding the wave and I should of paid attention and I'm so sorry!"

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  6. Beautiful!

    One thing about her cutie-mark story I'm not completely sure about it being so extravagant to make even for a first time. Maybe she could create something a little less complicated, also I hope she was supervised when she started being a blacksmith!

    Other than that this is great work! (Can you make the text black? Please and thank you<3)

  7. Name: Blueberry Blossom

    Stage Name: Midnight Dove

    Position: Starter

    Speciality: Precise Agility

    Motivation: To live the thrill of a dangerous life.

    Character: Laid back sort of pony she doesn't find much excitement in almost anything most think she's cold and heartless because of this, Blueberry doesn't care about what other ponies think of her and never tries to go out of her way to please anypony.

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