BlindJester

The cutie-mark story is a little confusing for me. At first it says

Ah, Dynamite's cutie mark. It came to him during what most of Trottingham calls a freak accent, although Dynamite says it was "destiny".

Then it goes on to say that Dynamite snuck onto the train. How could it have been a freak accident if Dynamite was deliberate in his actions? Another part that confuses me is

Dynamite snuck into the train in the dead of night. He was able to slip in and out of the shadows with his wiry build, and eventually found what he was looking for. Dynamite hastily collected the goods and rushed off the way he had came.

It talks about him getting onto the train and taking the 'goods' but do not say exactly what they were(Although I know what you mean it would be nice if you cleared this up.) The last part of the story seems a little jumbled together he's running away from the train, yet he ends up at a cave he knew, then he unpacks his 'goods' next thing we know there is an explosion and he finds gems.

What was he doing near that cave that he's loved so much? Where did he put the 'goods' and when it exploded did the cave collapse? How did he know what the train was carrying what he wanted/needed? I'd like to know a bit more about this story.

How is this application coming along?

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Sorry, we already have a pony named Blossom.

Looking good! I have a few more points to point out first like; why was the final scene of that play so important that he gained his cutie-mark? Why not the first time he started? Instead of using the word cross dressing please say "Dresses up as a mare/lady". I believe everything else is a-okay! Keep up the good work n_n

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Same question as before does she have any other hobbies? Does she have any personal flaws that might get in the way of her writing? What is her relationship with her parents like? Does she hate/blame her mum for the way she is now? What is school like for her?

These are just a few more questions to help give me a better grasp of your character.

Poor thing might as well be a earth pony!

Everything looks in order here so

If you need help don't be afraid to ask

So he has chipped his horn more than once?

If you could just clear that up then that would be great.

wow....and to think, I've been working like three weeks on a Surprise app.....and still haven't finished it....crud. cruddity crud.

I mean, she was in the show (at least in my opinion.) I was plotting out her entire LIFE. XD

You can still apply for her as the window of time this app has to wait is still open.

Can you please tag the title as [WIP] or [Final]?

Also I'd like to know who currently takes care of her? Does she hope to figure out her past? Even though she cannot remember anything has she set any goals for herself?

This is just some food for thought n_n

How is this application coming along?

Everything looks good the only thing I want to know is what do you mean by

She got it when she realised she could see time scenario's in the future or past

Other than that this is a really good application.