BlindJester

I'm looking forward to your revisions.

I wish to give this application the go ahead(stamp), but I can't do that because it's still tagged WIP

For future references please do not bump your application it will most likely make your app be looked at last since a lot of our staff members start from the bottom of the list and up.

Now onto the app I absolutely LOVE this app! The only issue I have with it is that everything is bold if you could please just bold the fields then this application will be good to go!

Okay, this is a good start to the app, but I would like to know more about her personality. What is her life's dream? What are her hobbies?

You also have the same paragraph down twice.

So, does he have any hobbies other than being a pyrotechnist? Seeing as he's already living the dream it must be a pretty dull life and I'm sure he gets tired of selling his devices sometimes. It seems like we know a lot about his professional side, but not a lot of her personal side. I understand that pyrotechnics is a huge part of his life, but there must be more to it than that right? Mind giving us a bit of that?

How is this app coming?

Hey Jaded, how is this app coming along?

How is this app coming along, Val?

How is this app coming along?

How is this application coming along?

Locking, if you wish to continue this character please contact me and I will happily unlock it for you.

Sorry about the wait!

We've been sort of everywhere.

Anyway, if you wish to have a pony who is a mechanic that works with steam you must know how it works first.

Also I would like to know more about her personality.

I LOVE this, Arty.

Well I always enjoy your work, but still this is amazing. Great job

Yup, that's purrfect.

Be sure to change the title<3

Sorry, but we already have an approved creature with the name Snow

It's nice to see you back, Strawberry! (Even though we talked on Ponysquare )

Anyway I love this app just like before, so. . . .

33 dollars for 6 dolls one of them not the mane six so expect me to spend about 10-20 more dollars.

How is this application coming along, hun?

Crystal looked at the wave in amazement "Wow, that's amazing what such a small creature can do" quickly she began to scribble down notes of the little dragons ability. She watched Blue Bolt surf for a while, watching the mare the glide across the wave was a most thrilling site, Crystal drew a small sketch of the two mares for future references writing down the names under each picture.

She looked up at the sky to see where the position of the sun was, seeing it was almost sun high Crystal quickly put her stuff away into her saddle back. "I'm sorry to leave so suddenly, but it seems as if it's almost time for me to go to my other arrangement. Do tell Blue Bolt I hope to see her again near these islands real soon! I also enjoyed our little chat and hopefully you will come down from Cloudsdale to visit me at the Hoofington dock sometime." and with that Crystal dragged herself back into the water and swam off with her best friend Gel right beside her.

If a comment is not made saying you'd wish to keep this character it will be locked within the next 5 days.

The number of syllables isn't a problem at all! I just find it hard to believe that somepony would name their foal Finder you know? I'll ask the other staffers what they think and I'll be back to you asap

Sorry I do nitpick sometimes although the words wasn't enough to keep this app from being approved I just thought it would be nice to point it out to you.

EDIT: Had a chat with the others and the name is good to go.