CrescentBlaze

Hi, I'd like to address a few things here.

The immediate issue is the concept of "lunar pegasi." As far as we know there are no ponies living on the moon itself. This seems like an extra bit that could be removed without harming the character himself.

There are a few nitpicks I'd also like to point out.

Swearing is not allowed in the general audiences areas of the boards and we would prefer that even implied swearing is kept to a minimum. If you're addressing someone unpleasant or being someone unpleasant as part of RP, we encourage creativity with your pony puns rather than merely crossing over directly from our human vernacular. This is not enough to prevent approval, but it should be noted as an RP style pointer.

Also, while combat training is not unheard of (we have the Royal Equestrian Army after all), the RP is largely social and slice of life with some adventure-quest type deals thrown in for a splash of flavor. Generally speaking, your character will not be engaging in combat of any form in most RP threads and violence is frowned upon unless the thread specifically calls for it. Even in such cases it is conducted as cartoon violence and not detailed descriptions of the horrors of war and violent crime. Again, this will not prevent approval, but should be noted as an RP style pointer.

thank you very much for your input! the issue of a lunar ancestry will be addressed, not too much harm done i suppose. And i have no problem with the mane threads being a more social medium than an adventurous one, Crescent's combat training is more essential to his personality and heritage than what he actually does anyway, being a racer/factory worker, so there shouldn't be a problem with that. Of course any violence would be kept light, humorous, and appropriate, and creativity in less than polite language is always fun to work with anyway. thank you once again for the advice!

just did a little check and i looks like the name flash fire, which i used for one of crescent's friends, is the name of someone's OC, this has been fixed.

thanks! a few ideas about what would have happened in his childhood popped into my head today so figures i'd squeeze them in.

I loled tales. i loled so hard. (princess luna you so crazy!)

Not quite correct. This is an example of what you SHOULD do. If you're planning to play a character in Crossovers.

*facehoof* good gracious, whatever you say.

not in mane rp but its usually ok for crossover characters. also i'd like to see i bit more in the ways of what he set out to do when he was still normal and how he ended up a crazed skeletal overlord.

HOLY GEEZ sorry for the perpetual unending sea of text this app has somehow mutated into.

also just saw the rainbow factory pmv...i know its not canon but i still could help but imagine crazed crescent working there maniacally cackling his brains out...nightmare fuel.

yup its all there just thought i'd leave it in a comment to make it clear. also grammatical errors have been addressed.

love the organization here. it really makes it stand out from other apps ive seen. then of course the depth of personality you provide is rather stunning. fantastic job.