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Soarin

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  1. (OOC: Nice name for Nipton, and that would be a great idea to use Poniton! Just one question, though. Are these supposed to be written in first, second, or third person? I wrote the intro in 2nd person, but the last paragraph I was kind of giving people a starting point? I think I'll take that out and just have the explanation of the surrounding areas and clans. Do you think this should be moved into the +18? New Vegas, I mean PonyVille, does get gruesome here and there. I assume your supposed to write in present tense and 3rd person, right? Also, I am a bit nervous about moving it to the 18+ section. The other ponies already have a pretty solid foundation, but I haven't seen very many aspect of New Vegas in either of them expect for one paragraph about a reference to Mr. New Vegas and his talk show.)

  2. Patrolling the dunes of rubble and scraps, Midnight Blade came along a damaged fountain that may have previously belonged to the town before the explosion. His limbs ache with every step, but his thirst propelled him onward. When he reached the fountain, he dove into the shallow water and began to cleanse himself of any dirt and grime. He stepped out of the makeshift bathtub and drank for almost five minutes. There was never a more satisfying feeling than that water hitting his dry, cracked tonge.

  3. The sun was harsh, but the land was even more so. A baren wasteland now lays over the once sprawling town of Ponyville. Tribes of ponies have gathered together to survive, and battles between them arose. A new republic was first formed by the higher authorities after the bomb went off, but many other tribes rival them for supremisy. The Pony Republic is one of the better suited tribes trying to hang onto any old aspects of life. They constantly try to overtake other clans and bring safety and constitution to the encampments. A large empire closely related to cannibalistic Indians are the Great Hooves. This tribe has chosen a dictatorship over a democracy, and the supreme ruler, Caeser, has not been seen for years. The last substantial group are the High Rollers. They dwell in the parts of town that were not completely decimated in the blast. They have a moderately stable economy, and they are considered the medium between the Pony Republic and the Great Hooves. The High Rollers remain neutral, but some of the members side with a certain group whom they feel will prevail.

    (OOC: I understand that this is similar to Fallout: New Vegas, and that is what I'm going for. The technology level is based on the one shown in game *stimpak (health pack) irradiated items, laser weapons, guns, melee weapons, explosives etc.* If anypony has suggestions to better this thread, message me or post OOC.)

  4. Midnight Blade was lying in bed pondering ideas for the next day. He was feeling lonely at the time, so he thought, "What better way to have fun with other ponies, other than to have a party?" And with that, he began gathering suplies for the coming evening. It was a short while before the party started, and Midnight Blade was finally done preparing, when the doorbell rang. (this is just one of my first rp posts, feel free to criticize)

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