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  1. GearShift nodded in acknowledgement to lore keeper and took the book in her magic. "Thank you."

    She listened intently at as Neon explained how to create glowstick gel. "Interesting, I wonder if I could store energy in crystals and create a 'crushed crystal gel' to just as a power transfer medium..." Neon Bright's rant sent GearShift into full inspiration mode. She'd been told by many that the words that started to pour from her mouth when she was excited by a discovery didn't even sound like Equestrian anymore.

  2. I planned on turning this into a thing, a big thing so that Is definitely a possible plot - point.

    As for Sorin, if you mean Sorin Markov the vampire planeswalker, he helped seal the Eldrazi so Im sure he's not evil, morally questionable maybe. But what you did describe sounds like something Nicol Bolas would do.

    All of these ideas being pitched are actually starting to form something coherent in my mind.

    - I would like there to already have been pony planeswalkers before, but they kept Equestria secret for along time (Gives us a reason for there to be ponies on other planes already).

    - Some sort of magical mcguffin in equestria which is the key to our protagonists journey (best thing about MtG books is the planeswalking, they go to several different worlds I want to start outward and come in to equestria).

    - I try to avoid making Twilight a planeswalker, but I might.

    I'm thinking that a planeswalker (probably Bolas, because he has the resources) has several of his agents search for clues to find artifacts called the catalysts (which turn out to be the elements of harmony). The EoH are the keys to an ancient mana vault that he can use to obtain a sizable chunk of power. The story will go across several planes as the protagonists search for clues and try to survive the threats and manipulations that Nicol Bolas throws there way.

    - I have a single OC at the moment (Silver Charger of the Izzet league), but I need 1 maybe two more since in the newer novels the planeswalkers have at least two other planeswalker allies.

  3. Count yourself in then!

    Something from Urza would make a decent MacGuffin. But in the good name of continuity I just couldn't, I've read 5 of Urza's books and I know how the whole thing between him and Phyrexia ended. So, in good conscience, I just couldn't use him.

    It's really is hard to figure out something protagonists and a villian would be interested in. Especially when they are in different realities.

  4. "I'd like to give it a look through first." She absolutely loved the idea of new study material.

    "Hmm, I can see how that would be a problem," she said while tapping a hoop on her chin. "I'll keep you in mind." She said looking at Neon. "Wait, you sell glowsticks?" GearShift's face held a half smirk, she wasn't sure why she was surprised by the information, even though she saw it coming a mile away.

  5. I'd be willing to act as an editor. I couldn't do any writing, since I am unfortunately not too in touch with the MtG universe.

    Also, bear in mind that this is a terrible idea. Just stick to your lexicon.

    Hopefully anyone I worked with would know not to over do it to the point of making a work unreadable. I use thesauruses to help avoid extremely boring words or repetitiveness. That's what I mean by pretty sentences. And the only time I go out of my language is for something like latin, something I can find pre made phrases for.

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    I'll probably have some Idea's but see the good thing about this crossover is that you don't need much in dept knowledge on MtG to make it, which is why I planned on Collab. I I've read 7 MtG books, and have 5 more on my laptop, plus a shoebox filled with cards and I'm not completely confident in my ability to world build it.

    But the same time MtG is an infinite multiverse were anything and everything exists so world lots of prior knowledge is only mandatory when dealing with the situations of already established characters and factions.

    I will likely have some Ideas tomorrow or Tuesday.

  6. I'm asking for help with this.

    Magic: the Gathering is such an interesting universe (well multiverse but whatever) to explore that one cannot imagine NOT doing an MLP crossover with it.

    The hardest part of it is doing it right, I could take the easy way out and say "X character from the mane six is a planeswalker and they blah blah blah..." or do the reverse and have a planeswalker come to equestria. But like i said that's the easy way, no world building really involved and using a majority of already known characters means that not much character building is needed. I also never get the true magic the gathering feeling for any of the fics like that either.

    So here is what I propose.

    - A story that takes place after pony planeswalkers have left the plane of Equestria (1000's or 100's years later so that there is a stable pony population on several other planes).

    - Lots of work world building, so some veteran M:TG players or book readers. The only story i feel got the crossover feel right was Kkat's Fallout Equestria. It would be nice to make the world feel natural and not forced.

    - People who can remain in contact to a reasonable degree(I realize that everyone has a life, im asking for really no more then for us to respond to each others messages at least twice a week.).

    - None of us need to be an excellent, exceptional, or even good writer, just imaginative. I can find editors, that's not a problem and anyone with a thesaurus can make a sentence sound pretty. We just need to get the ideas on paper (figuratively). As long as our ideas are well thought out and flow nicely we can work the rest of it out.

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    Like the planeswalker novels I'd like for there to be more than one OC main character so everyone involved will likely get a character.

    So who's interested?

  7. "Pinkie Pie you say. I know of her, I pick up a lot of information during my travels." she said.

    "Ah, yes I do believe that does fall into techno magics field doesn't it?" GearShift nodded in acknowledgement. "Storing energy in cystals is quite tricky, that I know from experience." She trotted alongside Lore Weaver as he searched for her books.

    "Nice, I bet that's really convenient. Techno magic tries to bring convenience like that to everypony." said looking into the light Neon Bright created. "My talent is methodology meaning I can quickly comprehend and apply things through study. The talent lead me to my career and even it's what allowed my to build these." She said excitedly as she motioned towards her goggles.

  8. "Nice to meet you Lore Weaver, My name's GearShift." She with a smile. "Hmm, well you see I'm a techno - magic engineer so if you have any books on advanced mechanical engineering, harnessing and storing natural energy, and the interactions between magical and natural energies I would love to get my hooves on them."

    GearShift turned to the other pony who had joined her and Lore Weaver, the introduction she gave made GearShift giggle a little in her mind. "Nice to meet you Neon Bright. So if you are the second bet pony in Equestria, who's the first?" she asked with a small laugh.

  9. My little dashie was good indeed, but I didn't hit me with me feels. It simply wasn't long enough to get invested in.

    Now Device Heretic's Eternal had me wiping stray tears from my eyes. I wasn't even aware I was feeling what i was feeling until I felt the wetness on my cheeks.

  10. I just recently through a new Legacy Deck together that is protee boss. it's a Fair to Play deck, because it takes a couple turns to get started, but it works very nicely

    Deck Name: Dragon Swarm:

    Creatures:

    |4x|Dragonbrood Mother

    |4x|Balefire Dragon

    |3x|Mordient Dragon

    |4x|Dragonmaster Outcast

    |4x|Dragonspeaker Shamen

    |4x|Sakura-Tribe Elder

    Artifacts:

    |4x| Quicksilver Amulets

    Instants/Sorceries:

    |4x|Rampant Growth

    |2x|Harrow

    |3x|Cultivate

    Enchantments:

    |2x|Crucible of Fire

    Land:

    |4x|Copperling Gorge

    |4x|Rootbound Craige

    |6x|Forest

    |9x|Mountain

    This is a really fun deck to play and normally by turn 7 I'll have 20 dragons on the field because of Broodmother.

    Oh my god Id love to play against your deck.

    My dragons

    Deck Name: Dragon surprise

    Land

    20x mountains

    Creatures

    4x Flameblast Dragon

    4x Kilnmouth Dragon

    4x mordant dragon

    4x Hunted dragon

    4x Zirilan of the claw

    4x dragon speaker shaman

    Sorceries and instants

    4x rite of flame

    4x seething song

    Enchantments

    4x braid of fire

    2x electropotence

    2x crucible of fire

    At first I was scared to use only 20 lands but because of the way the deck works it turned out to never be an issue.

  11. NPC Stats

    Black Raven

    Sex:Female

    Age: Young Adult

    Species: Unicorn

    Appearance: Wears black custom stealth power armor.

    Physique: Muscular

    Origin/Residence: Born in the mountains outside of Stalliongrad. Currently lives in the Stalliongrad Steel Ranger base.

    Occupation: Steel Ranger special contingent.

    Motivation: Keeping the Griffon Commonwealth from taking over Equestria

    S.P.E.C.I.A.L.

    Strength - 10

    Perception - 10

    Endurance - 10

    Charisma - 7

    Intelligence - 5 (+3)

    Agility - 5 (+3) [stealth Power Armor]

    Luck - 2

    Skills:

    Explosives - 15

    Energy Weapons - 15

    Repair - 75

    Science - 100

    Unarmed - 100

    Barter - 15

    Guns - 15

    Lockpick - 100

    Medicine - 50

    Survival - 15

    Sneak - 100

    Speech - 50

    Melee Weapons - 15

    Perks (individual):

    1, 2 yall: High speed jab combo with a 50% chance of stumbling.

    Ranger Training(3): +1 point to any special stat.

    Power Hoof Mastery: Power Hoof weapons ignore DT.

    Get Rocked: Power attacks have a chance to instantly cripple limbs.

    Stealth Takedown: Can instantly kill unaware targets.

    Unblockable: Blocked melee strikes cripple limbs used to block and 50% of the damage still goes through.

    Feathered Nemesis: +30% damage against all winged creatures.

    Never Forgive, Never Forget: +20% damage, DT, attack speed, and crit chance against Commonwealth forces.

    Stealth Mage: Advanced knowledge on stealth based magic like sound dampening, invisibility, X ray vision, night eye, and ESP.

    Advanced Magic:Well versed in unicorn abilities such as telekinesis, scrying, teleportation, heating, cooling, transmutation, rune transfixion and conjuring.

    Perks (group)

    Stealth Field: The party is harder to detect.

    Inventory:

    Customized stealth power armor.

    Two power hooves when not expecting combat. Four when expecting combat.

    Rations

    Material for repairs

    Likes: Relaxing, reading, chatting, and training in martial arts

    Dislikes: The Commonwealth, braggarts, disloyalty.

    Personality: Tries to remain stoic, but the truth is she is still just a fun loving young mare. Scarred, though she may be.

    History: Black Raven was born in a small unnamed settlement in the mountains near Stalliongrad. The little filly lived with her parents there until the encroaching Griffon Commonwealth took over the town and killed or drafted all of the ponies there. Black Raven managed to hide from the Commonwealth for a while but she was eventually captured. About 6 months later Stalliongrad's Steel Rangers got word noticed the Commonwealth's forward advance and purged the settlement. The Steel Ranger squad responsible for the purging found the filly cowering behind a weapons crate and decided to bring her back to the base where she was raised and trained as a Steel Ranger until being placed in Star Paladin Strawberry Twists special Task Force.

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    Sugar Song

    Sex: Female

    Age: Adult

    Species:Earth Pony

    Appearance: Wears brown customized destroyer power armor.

    Physique: Muscular

    Origin/Residence: Born in and raised in the Stalliongrad Steel Ranger base.

    Occupation: Steel Ranger special contingent.

    Motivation: Keeping the Griffon Commonwealth from taking over Equestria, Avenging her parents murder, becoming a Star Paladin.

    S.P.E.C.I.A.L. :

    Strength - 5

    Perception - 10

    Endurance - 10

    Charisma - 2

    Intelligence - 7

    Agility - 5

    Luck - 10

    Skills:

    Explosives - 100

    Energy Weapons - 100

    Repair - 75

    Science - 100

    Unarmed - 15

    Barter - 15

    Guns - 100

    Lockpick - 15

    Medicine - 75

    Survival - 15

    Sneak - 15

    Speech - 25

    Melee Weapons - 15

    Perks (individual):

    Destroyer Mode:Your armor can divert more power to weapons and E.F.S. systems. - 3 Agility, no rolling or jumping, and 40% movement speed penalty. + 30% weapons damage, +25% weapons capacity, +35% fire rate increase, +25% accuracy. Increase E.F.S. range, and detect stealthed enemies.

    Experimental Hexagonal Shielding: Your power armor has an energy shielding unit. Energy shield has 500 hp and recharges every 10 seconds when not being shot. If the shield is taken down by gun fire it will short out the extra function of the power armor.

    Power Armor Mastery:Power Armor doesn't decrease your agility.

    Walking Tank:+ 10 DT when advancing on enemies.

    Stream of Carnage:+10% weapons damage, fire rate, and damage penetration per second of continued fire.

    Enhanced Targeting: +25% crit chance.

    Mobile Turrent: Plasma casters can in any direction except straight up and down and adjust firing angles. They can be set to automatically seek and fire on hostiles.

    Fortress: +10 DT when standing still</span></span>

    Perks (group):

    Bullet Sponge: Most enemies fire at you when in a party. +10 DT

    Inventory:

    Customized Destroyer Power Armor

    Two shoulder mounted plasma casters

    Minigun

    Anti material sniper rifle or Grenade mini gun

    Rations

    Material for repairs

    Likes: Practicing on the shooting range, music, the sound of bullets bouncing off of her armor.

    Dislikes: The Commonwealth, laziness, cabbage, pegasi, and rad crocs.

    Personality: Extremely defensive. She never lets her guard down, emotionally or physically. Though she talks to ponies like she's trying to push them away she's actually pretty fond of most she meets. She's loyal to a T and wouldn't hesitate to put her life of the line for the mission.

    History: Sugar Song is Steel Ranger through and through. Born and raised with the contingent she like most other foals aspired to be like their parents, sadly for her he father and mother were the two most well respected scribes. She didn't like the idea of scribes work as evident by her over fascination with every massive gun in the armory. So she decided to become a knight, and oh boy did she excel.

    During her tours as a knight she would constantly take up point positions and push forward in battle often leading to the success of her squad and her incapacitation. Eager to find a solution that would benefit everypony she began to study and modify her own armor making it sturdier and adding better battle-saddle rigs.

    During a fierce battle with the Griffon Commonwealth she used her modified armor to push into a heavily defended facility and rescue several of her brothers and sisters. This action put her in Star Paladin Strawberry Twist's sights. Twist offered Sugar Song a spot on her spec ops squad with the condition that Sugar Song work with the scribes and knights to make her power armor an impenetrable fortress.

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    Name: Gerrad Hawkeye

    Alias: Agent Shadow-wing

    Sex:Male

    Age: Adult (actual age unknown)

    Species: Cyber Griffon

    ​Appearance: Wear a black cloak to conceal himself, yellow eyes, silver feathers, heavy augmentation. Everything below neck is covered by tough synthetic muscle with armored plate. Has a Katana magnetically connected to his back and several throwing knives magnetically held on to his flanks.

    Physique: Muscular

    Origin/Residence: Gyphos.

    Occupation:Commonwealth Agent.

    Motivation: The rebuilding of Equestria, proving the best world he can for his family.

    S.P.E.C.I.A.L. :

    Strength - 10

    Perception - 10

    Endurance - 5 (+3)

    Charisma - 7

    Intelligence - 7

    Agility - 10

    Luck - 5 (+5)

    Skills:

    Explosives - 15

    Energy Weapons - 15

    Repair - 50

    Science - 100

    Unarmed - 75

    Barter - 15

    Guns - 15Lockpick - 100

    Medicine - 50

    Survival - 15

    Sneak - 100

    Speech - 75

    Melee Weapons - 100

    Perks (individual):

    Tempest Blade: You can spin your sword fast enough to block bullets.

    Cyborg Assassin: +10 DT, +3 Endurance, +20% resistance to poison and radiation. Enhanced vision + 50% movement speed.

    Clean Cut: +5 Luck, +25% crit chance with bladed melee weapons

    Bullet Timer: Brain implants have increased your reaction speeds past that of any normal creature. Fast enough to dodge bullets when fired at him from the front.

    Mind's Eye: Brain implants allow you to sense sneak attacks. 75% chance to avoid sneak attacks

    Bonecrusher: The Commonwealth's intesne training has taught you to turn your opponents strength against them. 25% chance to counter melee strikes (deals melee damage x1.5).

    Kuzu Ryu Sen: Strikes all of the opponents weak points seemingly simultaneously. Attack deals 200 dmg(.5*Endurance) multipler can go no lower than 1.

    Bushido: +50% damage, DT, attack speed, and crit chance. -50% damage, DT, attack speed, and crit chance against none combatants and totally unarmed opponents.

    Iaido: The moment you unsheathe your sword it the most dangerous time for your opponents. Enemies with less than 50 percent stat scores in agility, melee or unarmed are instantly incapacitated. Other enemies who are hit take lose 65% hp. User is left vulnerable for a second though.

    Shunpo: Cybernetics and sword mastery allow you bursts of speed so fast that you appear as a blur.

    Adamantium Skeleton: Bones are nearly indestructible.

    Inventory:

    Adamantium Katana that can be coated in plasma.

    Mono-molecular throwing knives.

    Cloak

    Built in pipbuck.

    Built in advanced stealthbuck.</span></p>

    Power Cells

    Wet stones

    Likes: Being with his family, martial arts, reading fiction novels, cooking

    Dislikes: Pepper,and chalkboards

    Character Summary:

    Personality: Dedicated provider for his family and loyal Agent, he's been with the Commonwealth since before the war and plans to remain in their service until he dies. Though he refuses any jobs that are too heinous.

    History: Gerrad has been a loyal Commonwealth agent since before the war started and was one of the original griffons chosen to be their first cyber agent. Now he lives in Gryphos with his wife and daughter. As a Commonwealth agent he specializes in stealth, melee combat, and diplomacy; he mostly carries out hit and run attacks, assassinations and negotiations with selected parties. Even though he disagrees with the way the Commonwealth are going about the reconstruction of Equestria, he believes in their goal. A griffon ruled Equestria might not be Ideal to the ponies, but it's better than the burned wasteland that they have now. Plus he has to put food on the table for his family.

    In the days prior to the detonation of the mega spells, he was recalled back to Gryphos and placed in cryostasis, at which point his transformation into a cyber griffon began.

    [post got murdered, i'll clean it up later.]

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