Mistfire

mhm, you're welcome ^^

WAIT ITS THE LONGEST RUNNING APPLICATION?! ._.

Idk if I should feel good or embarrassed XD

And thanks ^^

Anyways.. I'll be a bit inactive like I said, I'll be back this summer around June 14th

Alright made the edit :3

Brian.. *sniff*

That was...Beautiful...

Yeah you're right. I just felt it'd be okay since in Applejack's childhood she was sent off to her relatives, so I felt it was okay. But I'll change that little bit ^^

Hm.. yeah I guess... Then she might spend time at home a few days and then maybe go over to the center of town to sell her art for a few days with her family friend. Sound good?

She'll still be living with her parents too, just live in two places at different times during the week.

You're right... but still, I'd like her to reside in Trottingham

Well yeah.. I guess I can kinda have her grow up a little so she can be with her guardians in Trottingham.

Well the time span wouldn't correspond with what made her a unique sight in the art world with her being so young and talented... She's living with family friends anyway

Ok I'll make edits today, hopefully this one question I have will be answered though

I still want Duskus to have moved to trottingham, is it ok if I just make the whole "family friend" thing a bit brighter with the same reasons?

I'm loving this show, its settled in the same state I live in and admit it, Monroe can't be any more lovable ^^

Anywaaay.. lets talk about the show here, give opinions and talk about what might happen next!

-Mistfire

I think this is gonna last. The fandom just BOOMED a few episodes into the first season, and I'm sure that even with a bad G5 line, we'd still be able to enjoy it by say, idk poking fun at it?

Then there is all the fangames and fanimations. Look, there is just too much to lose just like that! Just be positive and at least hope it'll last

Yup, so I kinda just leave out the "money loss" bit, correct?

Yes, today I have made some edits actually. Sorry to keep you guys waiting so much .A.

The edits follow the advice given to me ^^ I think its good to go

I did some changes. If they don't work, just quote parts I don't need and highlight parts I should change, it'd help in my opinion

Also, sorry for being very inactive on the forum. I am still into the MLP fanbase but I have school and such to worry about. I failed my science test with my first and rather painful 55 percent on it. I've been studying a lot since then and haven't been able to do much online. I hope you can understand my inactivity outside this thread, and that once this is stamped I won't be active up to July 24'th. Thanks for understanding!

Lets get this stamped!

Yes, I'm just planning out Bellosh's advice carefully for the app.

Edits were made!

I have the strange feeling that I left a hole in the edits though.. like something I changed didn't go with something I didn't see

Alright, I'll just leave names completely out of the app and just say how she got to where she was. Edits will be done by tomorrow night

I got the new browser working. I just have one thing, Duskus has roommates (Shade and Yuki) and I enjoy having the three in the same RP. I was wondering, maybe I could have Duskus choose to live with Shade after he came to her hometown for a vacation. They could socialize during the 2 weeks Shade was there and she decided to live with him after he offered to look after her as a guardian while her parents recover from some sort of economic drop. I'll try to keep minor edits until I get a response. A yes is ok too

Sorta worked. How about I just put what I have in another post in this thread?

Edits won't save, I don't know if its my computer but the changes I make won't lemme change the app.. I have it all ready though, don't worry :3

Alright, sounds good. I'll do the working-class family thing and try to make a better reason to connect the nature walk encounter with her new social class.

However, I will keep her stationed in Trottingham mainly because not only is she to live there soon, but the way I picture her is a lot like the ponies from that area

However, it might take me another week (maybe less) to make a smooth storyline for her. Sorry if it takes a while

._. have I seriously been working on this for a YEAR.. dang Duskus, you're complex XD

..oh wow, that last one DID make it to 5..

anyways I have some concepts down, maybe you could give your say before I edit them in?

I was thinking this:

• Duskus could be a filly who wants to do something big in life, but tries too much and tends to be a bit awkward (Personally I think people doing RP can work with a character who is a bit awkward)
  
• (This is an explanation) the markings on her back aren't really markings. I meant to say like spots that a dog or cat might have on their fur, my bad ^^"
  
• The orphanage thing, I think that with the "aspire for greatness" thing it could work, and the reason she's there is because although I didn't specify how many siblings she had, her parents weren't about to have their own kids look after Duskus. They would have looked for help, but I feel that if you look at it form their point of view, you can't focus on paperwork or meeting when you have kids running around.
  
• Her life in the orphanage.. Well you got me there.. I guess that if its going to be the "aspire for greatness" kind of story I should just write down that she won many contests that the kids had between themselves, and enjoyed some private time out in the woods. Now i don't know if you read this in the app but she eventually got out and lived with Shade, she isn't at the orphanage anymore
  
• Her cutie mark was what it was because whenever she took her "nature walks" she loved drawing what she saw. I feel that this would be a good place to bring back the meadow painting. The butterfly, well I see butterflies as the embodiment of nature art, so I felt that it would make sense to make that her cutie mark. Also, the reason i'm changing her look at things to a more positive, hopeful kind is so It can kind of show that because she was so focused on doing bigger things, she didn't exactly have time to look at her cutie mark all the time. Yes she was happy, Shade and Yuki were too, but she is just caught up with other things.
  
• And lastly, you were right, it was pretty dark. But I think that if I keep the same interests and such but make it more positive, it can work.
  

Phew.. spent all night thinking about what to do.. I'm gonna sleep.

Tell me what you think before I edit the app, thanks!

Hoo.. yep. This thing has been collecting dust for DAYS *cough*. I'll think about what to write then have it edited by tomorrow around 3:00 P.M. pacific time