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  1. I asure you that this is my own story. I wrote it on paper and transfered it to my computer today. Myrin is my character he is in many of my stories and this is his story I created for MLP. The Fire that is talked about in the story is my idea. The Fire is the cause of the pain that Myrin feels. He blames himself for everything that happened. Before he was born the herd lived in safety and harmony, after he was born a strange fire fell upon their home and took their lives, but left him alive. Unfortinately I cannot use him in the World of Equestria RP because of the rules. He really would be the perfect character to represent me as a person.
  2. Fanfict Idea Myrin, my character, is an orphan unicorn pegasus after his parents and all the herd perished in a mysterious fire that came with his birth. Princess Celestia and her younger sister Princess Luna are out on a stroll when they come upon the smoking ruins of Mystic Forest, the home of the Twilight Herd, Myrin's family. The wind blows and the golden mane of the fallen herd rustle in the wind. Their snow-white forms are silent and still. Their eyes are closed and their wings are folded at their sides. The sisters are devestated by this and start searching the place for clue to what may have caused the fire. Princess Luna is looking under the debri and sees a small foal untouched by the flames of the fire. The foal's hiding place however is covered with piles of burned branches that fell in the fire. Princess Luna calls to her sister and Princess Celestia joins her. Seeing the foal Princess Luna and Princess Celestia quickly remove the branches and come face to face with the last of the Twilight Herd. Shivering with fear and with tears falling down his face, Myrin gazes up at the two but says nothing. Princess Luna leans down so that she is level with the young foal, while Princess Celestia, her big sister makes sure that it is safe. "Its alright we're not here to hurt you little one, we're here to save you," Princess Luna says as gently as she can. Myrin looks up at her and with tears in his sparkling sapphire blue eyes he speaks. "They're all gone. The fire...it was horrible," he says trying to be brave but still shaking like a leaf with rivers of tears falling down his cheek. Princess Luna gently wraps Myrin in her wings and tries to soothe him. "Shh, its alright little one, you're safe now." Myrin collapses in Princess Luna's wings and falls into a restless sleep plagued by memories of the fire. Princess Luna stands up and looks at her sister. "What should we do sis, this one is the last of his kind and all alone now?" Then an idea pops in her head. "Why don't we adopt him, sis? Then he wouldn't be all alone anymore he would have two big sisters that he could call his family. Don't you think that the palace could do with a little prince? Princess Celestia smiles and says, "Yes, I think this little one will make a fine addition to our family. Now the question is what to do about this, she says pointing to the smoldering ruins. Princess Luna looks at her and says, "It would be best if it was never seen again. The painful memories that sight brings are just too much. The little one must never know what happened, or this would surely break him." Princess Celestia nod and using her magic with the help of her sister they create a new forest. Then Princess Luna and her sister with the help of their guards gather the bodies. They take the unicorn pegasus and bury them. Then they create a thick and high walls of thorns around the place, before walking back toward the palace. Princess Luna turn toward her sister. "What are we going to name our little brother sis," she asks. Princess Celestia smiles, "What do you think of the name, Myrin, sis?" Princess Luna smiles. "Its perfect sis." Princess Celestia smiles again. They enter the palace and Princess Luna lays Myrin onto her bed, then she drapes the covers over his body and kisses him on the forehead. "Sleep well, little brother." Then the story begins.
  3. Hello my username is WhiteSpirit. I am a writer and a poet. I have a large collection of poems that I have written and am currently working on a story. I have 50 pages already written and everyone who has read it loves it. My creativity allows me to write in a way that so many find difficult and even annoying. All my stories are written as in the first person as I write from the heart. I love stories about animals and magic so as soon as I started watching MLP there was no doubt that I loved it.
  4. Hello my username is WhiteSpirit. I am a writer and a poet. I have a large collection of poems that I have written and am currently working on a story. I have 50 pages already written and everyone who has read it loves it. My creativity allows me to write in a way that so many find difficult and even annoying. All my stories are written as in the first person as I write from the heart. I love stories about animals and magic so as soon as I started watching MLP there was no doubt that I loved it.
  5. Hello my username is WhiteSpirit. I am a writer and a poet. I have a large collection of poems that I have written and am currently working on a story. I have 50 pages already written and everyone who has read it loves it. My creativity allows me to write in a way that so many find difficult and even annoying. All my stories are written as in the first person as I write from the heart. I love stories about animals and magic so as soon as I started watching MLP there was no doubt that I loved it. I am currently writing a story about the romance between a unicorn stallion and a young woman.
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