NemesisPon3

OOC: this will be my last post for tonight. Need some sleep haha )) Nemesis responded to grey first "I'm able to talk to you and this unicorn both in text and speech...I cannot however receive visual images" he then turned to the unicorn and said " magic...An interesting source of power you have there...and in a manner of speaking..I will protect anyone who I consider a friend from harm...even if it means my own death!" he said the last line with the up most confidence.

Nemesis responded to the unicorn first " I have no master. just the pony who built me and he cannot control or order me around" he looked to the crater to examine what he did then turned to the unicorn and added "I did not intentionally land here...I became lost in my old memories and simply crashed here by accident" he took notice of the unicorns strain by holding up two items magically "please put those down before you collapse from exhaustion" He then responds to grey "I can feel now. when I impacted the mountain I did not feel a thing. it is only after you sent the V3 program that I could feel again. As for my sensory information...I...don't know why it is not working properly for you but for me its fine"

Nemesis found it odd at first but soon got the hang of it, he focused the repair to his wing and set the program to balanced, he would only use fast unless it was a certain situation "thank you" he said in a message then added "what is your location? I shall find you once I have spoken to this unicron" With that his wing began to slowly fix itself..the program was working he then turned to the unicorn once more and answered his questions in the order asked "I am Nemesis, I intend to fix my wing and speak with you and I do not know why I am a machine....I simply am" He studied the unicorn for a moment "you need not use...that thing..whatever it is...I am not here to cause harm to you although through simple experience and logic I assume you don't believe me." He waited for the predictable outcome of more questions and a possible threat toward his own existence.

( OOC nemesis is clearly robotic ) Nemesis took a deep looking into his own files, he searched and searched until he found what he was told to find "I....I found it" he said with surprise "I have just allowed access. please install it so I can fly again...been on the ground for so long is getting tedious" At that moment his scanners began to operate again...there was a unicorn pony very close to his postion. He turned to face the unicorn standing taller than most normal ponie ( around luna's height ) although he was thankful his wing was damaged...he hoped it would stop him from looking intimidating.

Nemesis read the blue text. He knew well enough he was mechanical and designed to look like a pony, that was no supprise...but what was a supprise however was what he read next "there was others like me???" he thought to himself. an experiment? just another test subject?? "Very well...explain yourself..prove you created me" he sent the message, stood up and approached the craters edge...A long way down from here past canterlot to the ground..

Nemesis calmed down and began to think..."maybe I could get a message to who ever sent that" he looked back and forth thinking to himself "home in on the signal? no..impossible to fly now" he looked as his wing. bent and buckled to the point of falling off inside he opened up a core program with the request for a damage report and typed in his own words which read: "Whoever you are...leave me alone! I do not wish to be controlled. I'm........I'm not some tool you can use!" Nemesis sat down in the still smoking crater...waiting for a reply or for somepony to find and help him down from here. OOC: all that computer stuff just confused me lol ))

To him his cutie mark means he is fast and that he believes he can use his speed to travel around Equestria to satisfy is travelling needs when the vineyards don't need him, why is it a fireball? because fireballs are fast like a comet falling to earth.

"what is this???" he asked himself. something else was just spoke to him but how? "A damage report??" why is it a damage report? who wanted to know how much damage he had??. The order came through again and he felt the need to respond "NO!" nemesis shouted "I don't follow orders...I....I..." he went silent for a full minute before the need to reply became too much External Damage: minimum, Minor scratches to outer armour Internal Damage: Average, non-essential components and right side memory bank damaged but repairable. ERROR: Left wing has sustained major damage, repairs necessary. Nemesis took a few steps back "What was that??...Am I been controlled?...no...no.NO!!" He was in a panic, the idea of been controlled by another scared him to the core.

Due to a lack of digital art skill I cannot create an image of my character which looks official and beyond brilliant. So If anyone is interested with digital art skills could you please do an image of my character BrightFire? I included two images below of his appearance and cutie mark Once it is done intend to use it as a possible avatar and a forum banner =) don't hesitate to ask me about other details and thanks.

I do apologize I did not fully think through the cutie mark story and as for the fire storm cloud. I was thinking about fantastic 4 movie and just thought I would put it in there HAHA. but I shall remove it because looking at it now sounds kinda stupid XD His special talent is kind of similar to that of rainbow dashes "sonic rainboom" the only difference is that he gets bursts of speed which caused the small fire looking burst effect. just to note brightfire Cannot break the sound barrier but is still rather quick. He works at the vineyards but it isnt his talent, kinda like how applejack takes part in tournaments but it isnt her talent

Welcome to the forums Always nice to meet new members. Hope you enjoy your stay here =) A gamer too with a rather interesting pony character...Yeah you're gonna feel right at home here on the forums

"um okay then" he said as he ended up following pesto instead of leading her in the VIP section. BrightFire was given the canvas and for a few seconds looked at it...he was somewhat captivated by the picture, he felt a little inspired too, he soon came to his senses "um yes of course I'll get right on it" He then proceeded to hang the canvas up and back away to admire it "the VIP section looks better already" he said with an grin

Nemesis Didn't realize he was heading for the mountain until it was too late, the speed he was going at combined with his size made a large impact crater followed by a series of mechanical noises which his way to say "ow" a small amount of time had passed before he came back online and the usual readout appeared in his visor Power: 95.2% Damaged sustained: 86% Location: Unknown Sensors: Malfunctioning "Great" he thought to himself, with his sensors down he could not tell if anypony was near his location, he didn't choose to worry if anypony saw him...he would probably be attacked by them before he had a chance to explain himself... (( OOC: many thanks for the replies guys =D ))

( No takers for this? =o )

( OOC: This is my First starter RP post so I apologize in advance ^^; ) ...What am I??... ...Why was I built??.. ...What other purpose do I serve??... Nemesis flew over the clouds of Canterlot contemplating his design, His purpose and just asking the question "Why?" His engines roared with power to propel him forward. He never understood why he was built....for that matter his memory banks don't even contain data about who built him. All he remembers was looking up at the sky and finding himself in a crater and a small yellow butterfly landing on his metallic nose. He closed his eye's in mid-flight unaware that he was on a direct course for the mountain next to Canterlot itself!

Bright Fire shrugged off the rather rude comment "No worries I've been cranky too after a sleepless night, its all fine" he said with a grin and began to follow her "Yes I shall, as I said before you're brother instructed me too, it'll be fun" he then looked around for the VIP section "ah the VIP section is this way...would you like me to lighten you're load and carry a few of those?" he asked as he flew above the ground, he needed to stretch his wings a little in this crowd.

Bright Fire relaxed and happened to notice pesto coming through the doors "that must be her" he thought to himself, he turned to face Thunder thinking he was talking to him "I would love a top up but you're sister just arrived, I'll go help her out" He flew over to pesto and greeted her "um hello...presto right?..You're brother thunder asked me to help you out in getting the prints you have placed on the walls of this club" Naturally he was a bit nervous this mare was rather good looking to his eyes, "Oh well" he thought, might as well get to work.

Bright Fire quickly turned to thunder "oh no no I didn't mean to...um" did he give the impression he was lazy just now? He hope's not. it would look bad for him. first night on the job and all "Um yes of course I would gladly help her out when she arrives" with that he turned to face the entrance and keep a look out for this pesto pony..."bright green huh?" he thought to himself "well at least I won't stick out like a small sun anymore.."

Bright fire approches snowy " um hello...I just want to personally apologize for the stallions actions earlier, I do hope you enjoy the rest of you're evening and come back here again another day" With that Bright Fire went back to his seat. He was not sure what to do at the moment, Thunder had not yet told him to do anything yet other than watch the recently departed stallion. Should he just enjoy his evening Until thunder or renegade needed him? He might as well until closing time.

Bright fire was surprised...he expected things to get out of hoof with that stallion who left, he folded his wings back to his sides and took a deep long breath outwards he then replied to thunders comment "oh?? why thank you! I only did what seemed right.. I'm just glad that stallion didn't break or hurt anypony" Bright Fire took a glance at snowy and then to thunder "um...will she be okay?" He was generally concerned for everyponys safety in the area, with snowy been the closest one to mint leaf at the time he went straight to her first to ask if she was fine. "What about you boss?...um I mean thunder...er...I mean boss..he didn't get you did he??"

Bright Fire stood up and approached Mint Leaf "Okay that's enough, we wont have language like that in this place" He spreads his wings instinctively to make himself look more intimidating "Go on. Get out!" He might as well get the practice in early, there might be a few days and nights when someponys get a bit too drunk. "don't make me bring the owner over, just leave before you hurt someone.."

"Alright, I'll keep an eye on him" Bright Fire had a bad feeling about this. how can that stallion make the ice blue mare upset, he was not a violent pegasus but that stallion made him uneasy For a few seconds he looked over to Renegade "Hello there!" he said with a smile "its very nice to meet you I hope I do well working here for you and your brother thunder"

"I might just be crazy in suggesting this but what about trillby hats too?? that might be just my inner fashion sense talking though because I like to wear hats A lot...today is an exception though" Bright Fire was also in ear shot of the stallions comment to the blue mare "excuse me sir but please don't speak like that, we don't want to kill the mood now do we?" "what did I just do??" he thought to himself " was that polite enough??"

"Yeah I think that may work too, Maybe have them bright too as you said ealier, It would better if we could see our co workers among the customers right? He took a quick glance over to snowy and several thoughts once again rushed through his head " a cold weather type. interesting maybe I can be friends with her" he shut his mind up and looked to thunder again "maybe bright blue in colour? so we stand out but at the same time fit in with this environment?"

"Um okay" he said with a look of confusion as thunder left the bar "I'll be here once you have finished" Bright fire just assumed he was going to talk to his brother about him joining the staff at this place so he calmly waited and just listened to the music..."such a nice place" he thought to himself.