NemesisPon3

BrightFire hung the picture and then proceeded to look over to the DJ's for a second "dubstep??" he said quietly and in horror, He did not like dubstep to him it was just noise "well I guess this job wasn't going to be perfect" he thought to himself.

His frown soon turned back into a grin as he flew over to pesto "Okay that's the first canvas hung up and not leaning over to one side. where is the next picture going to go?"

Nemesis was too focused on the calming green aura to fully notice the message "V....2?" he had no idea what it could mean but then easily figuring it out V2: Version or Variant 2. A second design to be better than the first.

Was he to be replaced with this V2? Was nemesis the V1? Either way it would be hard to replace him. the origonals usually stick around for a looooong time.

Nemesis attempted to back away but he was already caught in this aura of magical energy "hey what are you...." he stopped...the colour suddenly made him feel calm like he no longer worried over his purpose and why he was built...he liked the feeling. A robot who feels....how about that.

Nemesis gazed at amber wands for a full five seconds before replying "I can track the general area where the magic is strongest" these ponies were also after discord? it seems that fate has gathered up its chosen few "I...." he stalled for a moment, he needed to get use to talking in a language they understand "I shall assist you in finding and defeating discord"

Libra so I'm rarity?

that is actually pretty accurate too...its a bit scary lol

Nemesis noticed the two ponies and approached them, he towered over them both ( just slightly taller than luna ) at first he let out a series of mechanical beeps and buzzes before realizing these ponies didn't speak in robot

"he is coming.....the spirit of chaos" he struggled to speak in the ponies language "must be stopped"

"The wing is nearly finished" nemesis sent the message just as his wing had finished repairing itself...faster than he thought for been on the balanced setting

he turned to the unicorn unsure how to answer his question "um....that we can agree on but..." he walks to the edge of the impact crater and looks down to canterlot "I don't know what my purpose truly is yet" when the unicorn noted his blank flank he turned to get a look then back at the unicorn "Those marks are something magical...I am a machine...I doubt that kind of magic works on machines.."

(( OOC: he has no cutie mark. I have posted an image that is awaiting approval. you'll be able to see him soon ))

Nemesis looked at the picture and was impressed "so thats what I look like?" he thought to himself "you did an amazing job here for a rough image and as for my height...um..I don't know either" he looked at the unicorn with puzzlement again and replied "I don't know why I am here...I just ended up here..." he looked down confused by his own words...

he then looked over the reference that grey had sent him and did a check...."oh my" he thought to himself and sent a message to grey which read "um...the voltage is reading at 275v...but I can't feel anything up there..."

Nemesis had enough of his engines been clogged with cotton candy been grounded like this was not an option "energy burst: Initiated!" in a few moments blue energy had surrounded nemesis and in time released it in a burst followed by a small shockwave effect.

He turned to check his engines...no cotton candy clog up. it would take a while for his engines to reach full power to launch into the sky again so for the time being he waited next to his crash site.

Nemesis turned fully to face the unicorn "yes I would like to see this image you have drawn" while he said this he did a full scan like grey suggested.....nothing he found nothing in his scan. He then proceeded to send a message to grey " I found nothing" he simply sent that message and waited.

"sure" he said very casually "send the blue prints and I'll scan them. but to be honest I doubt you'll find anything. Even I don't know what my own power source is...." that was not entirely true. he knew a part of his power came from solar energy during the day time hours but what keeps him running all the time was a mystery....magic maybe?? no that can't be...

He glanced over to the unicorn sketching. watching the magically held pencils dart from left to right, up and down and in several other directions "do you do this all the time?" he asked not moving the rest of his body " is it you're talent??"

Nemesis nodded to the unicorn and added "yes I shall remain here while you sketch me" this was rather amusing to have a unicorn pony actually draw him. maybe this is the first step in getting know through out the land. "the mechanical stranger...no no that sounds stupid" he thought to himself "the mechanical Pony...yes that sounds nice" his thoughts were interrupted by a new message from grey.

"I choose not to use my inner voice thought to communicate with you. It is simply my preference and I find it easier to focus on others around me." He sent the message and remained still for the unicorn to draw him.

OOC: finally back from college lol already lets get back into this. ))

Nemesis looked at the unicorn with puzzlement "you want to draw me??" he was very confused by this request but decided to play along "um...very well I guess you can"

suddenly he heard his creators voice coming through his audio receivers, he replied in text, he didn't want to seem crazy in front of the unicorn " Yes I heard you my eyes are working its just if you were to send a image to me I would not be able to open or see it."

There you go; add that to your application.

And the changes have been made

OOC: this will be my last post for tonight. Need some sleep haha ))

Nemesis responded to grey first

"I'm able to talk to you and this unicorn both in text and speech...I cannot however receive visual images" he then turned to the unicorn and said " magic...An interesting source of power you have there...and in a manner of speaking..I will protect anyone who I consider a friend from harm...even if it means my own death!" he said the last line with the up most confidence.

Nemesis responded to the unicorn first " I have no master. just the pony who built me and he cannot control or order me around" he looked to the crater to examine what he did then turned to the unicorn and added "I did not intentionally land here...I became lost in my old memories and simply crashed here by accident" he took notice of the unicorns strain by holding up two items magically "please put those down before you collapse from exhaustion"

He then responds to grey "I can feel now. when I impacted the mountain I did not feel a thing. it is only after you sent the V3 program that I could feel again. As for my sensory information...I...don't know why it is not working properly for you but for me its fine"

Nemesis found it odd at first but soon got the hang of it, he focused the repair to his wing and set the program to balanced, he would only use fast unless it was a certain situation "thank you" he said in a message then added "what is your location? I shall find you once I have spoken to this unicron"

With that his wing began to slowly fix itself..the program was working he then turned to the unicorn once more and answered his questions in the order asked "I am Nemesis, I intend to fix my wing and speak with you and I do not know why I am a machine....I simply am"

He studied the unicorn for a moment "you need not use...that thing..whatever it is...I am not here to cause harm to you although through simple experience and logic I assume you don't believe me." He waited for the predictable outcome of more questions and a possible threat toward his own existence.

( OOC nemesis is clearly robotic )

Nemesis took a deep looking into his own files, he searched and searched until he found what he was told to find "I....I found it" he said with surprise "I have just allowed access. please install it so I can fly again...been on the ground for so long is getting tedious"

At that moment his scanners began to operate again...there was a unicorn pony very close to his postion. He turned to face the unicorn standing taller than most normal ponie ( around luna's height ) although he was thankful his wing was damaged...he hoped it would stop him from looking intimidating.

Nemesis read the blue text. He knew well enough he was mechanical and designed to look like a pony, that was no supprise...but what was a supprise however was what he read next

"there was others like me???" he thought to himself. an experiment? just another test subject??

"Very well...explain yourself..prove you created me" he sent the message, stood up and approached the craters edge...A long way down from here past canterlot to the ground..

Nemesis calmed down and began to think..."maybe I could get a message to who ever sent that" he looked back and forth thinking to himself "home in on the signal? no..impossible to fly now" he looked as his wing. bent and buckled to the point of falling off

inside he opened up a core program with the request for a damage report and typed in his own words which read:

"Whoever you are...leave me alone! I do not wish to be controlled. I'm........I'm not some tool you can use!"

Nemesis sat down in the still smoking crater...waiting for a reply or for somepony to find and help him down from here.

OOC: all that computer stuff just confused me lol ))

Oh I understand that, I am just wondering about what he thought of it? Or in other-words, what does he cutie mark mean to him and does it make him wonder if he as any sort of destiny involving what it represents?

To him his cutie mark means he is fast and that he believes he can use his speed to travel around Equestria to satisfy is travelling needs when the vineyards don't need him, why is it a fireball? because fireballs are fast like a comet falling to earth.

"what is this???" he asked himself. something else was just spoke to him but how? "A damage report??" why is it a damage report? who wanted to know how much damage he had??. The order came through again and he felt the need to respond

"NO!"

nemesis shouted "I don't follow orders...I....I..." he went silent for a full minute before the need to reply became too much

• External Damage: minimum, Minor scratches to outer armour
  
• Internal Damage: Average, non-essential components and right side memory bank damaged but repairable.
  
• ERROR: Left wing has sustained major damage, repairs necessary.
  

Nemesis took a few steps back "What was that??...Am I been controlled?...no...no.NO!!" He was in a panic, the idea of been controlled by another scared him to the core.

Due to a lack of digital art skill I cannot create an image of my character which looks official and beyond brilliant.

So If anyone is interested with digital art skills could you please do an image of my character BrightFire?

I included two images below of his appearance and cutie mark

Once it is done intend to use it as a possible avatar and a forum banner =)

don't hesitate to ask me about other details and thanks.

Greetings!

This is a pretty good and solid application overall, although I still have a couple questions/inquiries that when answered, I believe will help your application greatly.

It is a cool cutie mark, but the cutie marl represents one's special talent, so what is his precisely? Is it the ability to attain great speed in bursts or short periods of time, or something else? Does he feel he has a special talent in regards to that and does he plan to go anywhere with it (since his current main love appears instead to be involved in viticulture.

Without some sort of specialized unicorn magic; I cannot see how it would be possible to create a fire storm from a cloud (given what a cloud is, condensed water vapor; even the magical pony world appears to follow this fact of physics).

I do apologize I did not fully think through the cutie mark story and as for the fire storm cloud. I was thinking about fantastic 4 movie and just thought I would put it in there HAHA. but I shall remove it because looking at it now sounds kinda stupid XD

His special talent is kind of similar to that of rainbow dashes "sonic rainboom" the only difference is that he gets bursts of speed which caused the small fire looking burst effect. just to note brightfire Cannot break the sound barrier but is still rather quick.

He works at the vineyards but it isnt his talent, kinda like how applejack takes part in tournaments but it isnt her talent

Welcome to the forums Always nice to meet new members. Hope you enjoy your stay here =)

A gamer too with a rather interesting pony character...Yeah you're gonna feel right at home here on the forums