Noctriix

The question's approach really worked for me , thanks for getting that out of me! The only thing now is to convert it... re-wording is always annoying >.> ... Ill get on it.

1: Stagefright is a bit more elegant and reserved than her big bro, she loves having calm relaxing tea parties, and just enjoying a calm do-nothingy day. She's more advanced in her manners as well, and enjoys forma occasions, masquerades are her favorite.

2: Stagefright is an anti-pervert, she's the kinda girl that can't stand to be around overly flirtatious males. She and her bro often are known for comic bits in which she does her best to reprimand his "Suave" ways.She Could never be in anyway, a flirt, an escort, or anything that involves being seductive or manipulating the mind of a male.

3: Honestly? I think I mentioned this before, her brother is her bbbff, there's truly no other pony she loves in all of equestria than him. However, if it were to be a mare.... Probably someone who's a bit more open and adventurous. She's got a personality slightly similar to Fluttershy, and mixed with Twilight as well, however I'm not saying they're exact copies, they are SIMILAR. JUST SIMILAR. So, She'd need a Pony like AppleJack or Dash to compliment her on personality. That's what I think at least.

Limelight waved Pinkie Pie a pleasant goodbye as he and Rarity walked out of the doorway. As the door clicked, Limelight looked at Rarity, [colour=#40E0D0]"Now, before we can get to your boutique, i need to deliver some of these cakes to my driver, he should be done by now with the preparations." Do you mind a breif detour?" [/colour]Said Limelight. He had already explained this to Raity early on, so he figured she wouldn't refuse, however he said it again, just in case.

Sure enough in the distance Limelight could see a fully extended gleaming trailer, sitting and standing out like a sore thumb in the middle of an open acre in Ponyville. His Driver was nowhere to be seen, which meant he was probably waiting within the cart. Seeing as the Carriage was no longer attached either. Limelight made sure to decide which of the cupcake's hed give to his driver, divying out a majority of the octo choco cakes and a few of his Hazelnut millet. Satisfied with the end result, he closed the newly decorated boxes with a sigh of contempt. He looked at Rarity again,[colour=#40E0D0] "You know, I was thinking about eating these right now..." [/colour]He said, with his stomache giving an slightly audible confirmation. [colour=#40E0D0]"... but I think i'd rather wait till we got your boutique, we could all sit, have some tea, and enjoy them as a group!" [/colour]Said the Stallion. He was rather curious as to what Rarity's younger sister would be like, seeing as how refined Rarity was herself. [colour=#40E0D0]"What do you think?" He said, hoping for her double approval.[/colour]

I figured that'd be the common response.... why i didn't work on it? Beats me, I'll add when I can get the creative juices flowin

To your specification's, all nit's have been picked

Typo's fixed, all system's go.

Made final

Proceed to nitpick!

A friend let me rent his Psp to play BBS. I said, I'd pay him 20 bucks for every week, gave it back to him in 2 days.

Despite zerging through it, i cannot even hope to explain through words how good it felt to know that DDD is the only game I've yet to play.

Aqua, marry me?

Finished the Bio-sumamry, gonna re-edit so that her pic come's up naturally, then making final. Any typo's or grammer suggestion's you could give would be wonderful! I'll wait for a final imput from you before marking it final however.

BTDUBS, IM A PARASPRITE NAO MUTHABUCKAS

I do enjoy your nudge's trilo, and I thank you deeply for caring this much, as sometime's the only time's I remember are because I think to myself "Oh hey, I wonder if he's wondering if I'm getting stuff done" You've been a god send

Limelight watched as Pinkie gave her own performance, tapping his hooves and grinning like a madman the entire way through. He genuinely was in love with this little town, and he knew that thing's would only get more exciting when his plan would begin to unravel. He gave a small bow to Pinkie as she packed up his cakes and pushed the two bundles towards him. He accepted them great thanks as he positioned them across his broad back.

Limelight decided it would be best to let the girl's here speak, as he didn't wish to interrupt the two mares who were enjoying a gab.

"He's fun! You can come back here anytime! Maybe we'll sing some mareoke together! Wouldn't that be great party?! Ha!"

Limelight gave a quick wink to Pinkie as she said this, he figured it'd be perfectly within boundaries to be a bit playful. As she, was seemingly playfulness and fun incarnate.

Rarity spoke, "But of course. Your parties are always nothing short of fabulous, darling. It might be something to consider, as our fine gentlecolt here does clearly have the passion and the voice for song!"

Limelight rolled his eyes with a playful smile If you only knew... he silently thought to himself. He was extremely happy to see Rarity in a comfortable mood, he was almost starting to feel worried by how nervous she seemed to be. However, this was no longer a problem of anysort. Limelight gave a quick glance down to his watch, which promptly read

The watch itself was a gift from his younger sister as something of a mere joke, however, Limelight took serene affection to it, despite it's innate uselessness. Though, he did realize that his cheaffer was still waiting on food, and that Rarity did have a prior appointment before he had met him. It was time to go. Limelight gave a final look to Pinkie, "Well, madame, this has been a wonderful time, however I do beleive I have somewhere to be, as does Rarity here. I hate to cut our meeting short, but it's been a pleasure!" Said the Stallion with absolute content. He gave a quick look to rarity, "Besides, I'd still love to see some of your work!" Limelight gave a slow turn to the doorway before giving a final wave to pinkie, however before opening the doorway his brain had a quick spark of an idea. He prompty reached up to his vest, and from a pocket, pulled out a small card and handed it to Pinkie. On it, it had his name, his agency, and his address if she wanted to send him some mail. "I hope to see you again in the future miss, your voice is incredible!" he said, before finally giving a final look to Rarity,

"Ready to go?"

Steven is Best Pony, regardless of poll question.

You still never cease to amaze me bro.

It's been awhile since I came here last, and as usual you deliver. You still give me hope for Dubstep

Noct

40: You're magical abilities cannot rival Twilight Sparkle's in anyway, even if it's only in one particular field.

Oh! Head's up listener's! I'm going to move every soundcloud File to the first page, so you guys no longer have to scroll through the pages to find them

I'm only moving the one's that seem to have been listened to enough to count, or one's that i personally like, Otherwise, old files have just been removed from my Soundcloud account, as you should all clearly see when you attempt to play them!

Anywho~

Fluttershy's "I love Everything" is coming up shortly

I put a small and un-revised section within her character summary, I feel it SERIOUSLY needs expanded upon though

I know I know

Oh, and by the way, all listeners, I DO like reviews and compliments/criticism

I suck at rap. My voice just isn't cut out for it.

I think he/she was tlaking to me bass

Though for now, the Smile Song's done! I'm actually rather happy with this! Finished it in a half hour

http://soundcloud.com/noctriix/the-smile-song

As the Energetic cotton candy pink Pony rambled off her list of delicious flavours, Limelight's mind slightly wandered. Although several flavours definantly stood out, he was more or less paying attention to the rhythm and meter of how Pinkie spoke. Everything she said in succession could be tapped too, as it almost seemed to follow it's own methodical beat. The Stallion was still coming up with his own names of cupcakes in the same speed and pattern after she finsihed, however he was also on the focus of trying to make the names rhyme. He didn't get very far,to say the least.

However, When Pinkie made a gesture about his own personal romantic life, his ears became pert. His practiced camera smile showing through. "I don't beleive a mare like yourself would be interested in hearing about my past endeavors, however... I am quite popular where I'm from... I have a certain affinity for dancers..." Said the stallion, almost mumbling the last phrase too himself, as it wasn't really something he wanted Rarity in particular to hear.

Speaking of Rarity.

The white Mare spoke and nodded to herself and Limelight, only muttering out a slur of rather unintelligible words.... she was trying incredibly hard to think of what to say. She looked as if she wished she could've been more content in any other place in Equestria right now. She spoke,"Indeed. You'll not find a pony quite like Pinkie anywhere in Equestria-- and it's quite far from an overstatement to say that her baking is every bit as bold, unique and unforgettable as she is..." The Stallion smirked at this remark. However,. he definantly understood that it was time to get Rarity out of here, before she went mad. The Stallion took a deep breath after the two stopped talking, and began to sing to Pinkie.

"Well, madame I must say to you, that every flavor here is great! Though, I am quite starving, and my cheauffer doesn't like to wait. So if you wouldn't mind, I'll spare your time, because I'd like to plaaaace an order. I hope your listening well, otherwiiiiiise I recommend grabbing a recorder!...

I'd... Like... To... Buy...

A baaaker's dozen of your Hazelnut millet cake, I hope you have some fresh because I don't really want to wait. I would also like to buy a couple octochocolate goo supreme, I'll even tip you extra for my gal here Rarity. Because you seee.... Pinkie..... What we have back home is something unlike you here and I won't lie.... I'd like too buy.... just one, only one, and exactly not one more. An super duper sweet, and impossible to compete with a delicious Apple Amour!!! I'd like to buyyyyyyyyy..... and say thanks for my very first tiiiiiiiime!"

The Stallion's voice rang out as a clear Baritone with a precise vibrato and bright harmonic resonance. He kept his eyes open, and a bright smile on his face the entire time, as he dropped several dozen's of bits onto Pinkie's Counter. It was a short, jovial tune, and wasn't necessarily one of his best works, though for making the rhyme's up on the spot. He was rather content. He looked at Rarity with a smile, "I'm sure you won't find that around here quite often either!" He said, giving her a playful nudge. "Can I get those cupcake's to go please?" He said, smiling at Pinkie.

I've been busy for the past bit, not any set-in-stone progress. However, I'm absolutely content on the progress I currently have. All I've left to do is the summary, which will hopefully be no longer than three paragraphs.

Typing out my Senior project has been kinda killing my libido for typing lately. I'll get on it when I can.

Also, as a request by my Co-workers, I'll be adding a rap to the selection.

Since my name's Brady, they now know me as "The Real Slim-Brady" So... you should have an idea what's coming next

-edit-

OR I can do Chris Brown's version of N****s in Paris, which I already have 100% memorized, I'd actually prefer doing this one

After he had rung the bell, and the Pink mare had made herself known to all the world and beyond. Limelight stood and stared, with his mouth slightly agape, in a bedazzled, hysterical, and confused mix of emotions. He didn't speak while the two mares were busy conversing, and while the Mare known as "Pinkie" was finishing her meditation for the day. He just, stood, stared, and took it all in, almost in a daze...

"A NEW FRIEND!"

Limelight made sure to give the appropriate groans and winces as Pinkie collasped out of her meditation pose, and fell into a heap on the floor. He didn't know how she made it out seemingly unscathed, however, that really wasn't the main thing on his mind. Before he knew it, the Pink frosting covered Mare was trotting his way, sugary hooves extended, and eyes lit up brighter than the majority of his shows. He was immediately struck by a warm feeling, as an ecstatic smile grew across his lips. This was the type of goofy, oddball, and out-of-the-normal pony he began his trip to find. Not to mention that her coloring alone was remarkable, Limelight had never seen a mare of such vibrant Pink.

"Howdy do, welcome, bonjour and hello, pal of Rarity!"

Upon Pinkie extending her frosting laden hoof's to meet his, Limelight immediately took a small tip of his forehoof, and rather than shaking the mare's hand, he instead swiped off a small peice of the frosting from her. In which, he quickly gave a smell, and then proceeded to taste it. "Hmm......... Strawberry" Said the Stallion aloud, before Pinkie began her next barrage of words.

"He's not really your type, but he'd be fun to go out on the town with!"

It was a lucky thing that Limelight wasn't eating an entire cupcake, but only a morsel of frosting, as he was starting to crack up. He was doing his best to restrain his laughter, as Pinkie continued her questions.

"Are you ticklish or allergic to walnuts?"

Limelight settled himself down a bit, just so he had enough air to give a clear answer. "Well..... eheh, I am most certainly ticklish... but I'm not allerigic to walnuts, though I'm definantly more of a hazelnut guy myself." The Stallion began his erratic laughter again, only to barely hear the mumbled words and awkward laughs of his current partner. She eventually spoke again, with word's he could actually clearly make out.

"Limelight," She said,as she looked towards him. "This is my... uh... spirited friend Pinkie Pie. She works here at Sugarcube Corner..."

The stallion erupted, "Splendid!" he said, finally giving his first real eye-to-eye look at the Pink mare, who had almost effortlessly garnered his full attention. Limelight lifted his hoof to the mare and shamelessly shook it, paying no attention to the remainign frosting. He spoke, "I've been looking all over for the wonderful smell of these cupackes of yours! I'm so glad Rarity brought me here!" He said, giving a wide grin to the white Mare beside him. An unconfortably loud rumble sprang forth from limelight's stomach, reminding him as to how truly hungry he was. He looked back at Pinky, "What are your flavors today!?"

Upon arriving to Sugarcube corner, limelight was immediatly intrigued with it's architecture. The frosting laden shingles, the cupcake spire, the intricate (Almost germanic styled) siding, the candy cane pillars, and the nutty chocolate rooftop all came together in such a strinkingly impeccable manner. Yet, somehow, it still managed to fit in within ponyville, it managed to stick out less than Limelight's own trailer, but Limelight still felt that he could have found the place without rarity's help. In fact, he could've probably done it with his eyes shut, the smell was more than enough.

The duo arrived upon the front step's of the complex, Limelight could feel the heat of the oven's from inside, it was warm and heavy, and smelled of frosting. Suddenly, his accomplice seemed to stop short, as if caught in a nervous daze, she looked at Limelight and said,

"Umm... actually I think she might be busy... with things... and stuff... I... er... wouldn't want to trouble her..."

Limelight could tell the mare was nervous, she almost seemed to have a nausous look, with a slight twitch in her eye. He gave her and then the building a sizing up, before realizing that he could plainly see an "Open" sign on the construct. Plus, Limelight himself couldn't hear any overly loud noises going on from within, no astoundingly powerful vibrations. Everything felt normal in his opinion. Was she trying to hide something? He doubted it, Rarity didn't seem like the type of Mare who would hide things.

Limelight took a step forward and started to push on the doorway. It gave way under the force of his strong forelegs as he said "Well, sign says open, I'm still starving, and she's a friend of your's isn't she? I'm sure she wouldn't mind us coming in." Said Limelight with a calm tone, as he held the doorway open for Rarity. They both entered the building, Mare first, Stallion second; just as he was always told to hold a door for a lady. Initially there was nopony working the front counter, however a silver pushbell could be seen. Limelight promptly stepped forward, "Here goes nothing" and pressed the button.

"Helloooooooooooooooooo???~" Called the Stallion, who was taken aback by the dreamy interior and wonderful smells of the close-bye kitchen. Several Clanging sounds could be heard nearbye. He was genuinely excited for what was to come.

"It is my upmost pleasure, my good sir,"

Limelight nodded towards the mare, before giving his own small bow "The pleasure's all mine madame." Limelight enjoyed how polite and educated this Rarity character behaved. She almost reminded him of his own mother in a way, always making sure to be as dainty as possible, while always making sure to make it sound natural. Limelight liked that, he felt anormally comfortable already. "Maybe it's just an effect the town has on people.", he wondered. Or, it could've been those delcious cupcakes... Limelight's stomache gave a small protest at the thought. Yeah, it was probably just the town.

"I had no idea I shared my company with a pony of such distinguish and nobility! Allow me to formally welcome you to this humble little town. I do so hope you enjoy your time here!"

If there was one thing Limelight always adored doing, it was coming to the point in a conversation when the other realized his status. Sure, he didn't own enough land to be known as a duke, nor was he a prince, and related to her highness herself. However, he achieved his title doing what he loved, and working hard at it. Money could only buy so much, otherwise, he actually would have been a duke had he decided to splurge on property. The whole heirarchy was rather confusing at times, he could only imagine what Luna, Cadance, and Celestia must go through.

The stallion observed Rarity stepping back, and giving a barely noticeable laugh. Was she that nervous? He considered that maybe he had given up to much information too quickly. However, it was too late to fix that. The unicorn nodded sharply in response to his final question.

"Yes, but of course! Follow me. I'd be delighted to introduce you to my dear friend and the storied patisserie where she is employed!"

The stallion beamed, "Alright! Lead the way!" He said, catching her eye contact a final time. He felt Rarity was still a tinge nervous, though he really couldn't understand why, besides from the original reason, which seemed to be less obvious. He didn't really put too much thought into it however, he wanted some cupcakes, and he wanted them now.

A new thought came to him as they were walking together, side-by-side. He had yet to ask what this owner was actually like. Though, he was also rather tempted to leave her identity a surprise. If he could meet a pony as intriguing as Rarity within only being in ponyville for roughly 20 minutes, he really couldn't wait to see what kind of other gem's he could find as well. He wanted to meet a whole spectrum of new talent, and new material. He definantly didn't want the same cookie cutter options found back in Canterlot, which was maybe why Limelight already knew he'd enjoy his stay here. He gave a quick look back at Rarity, and gave a wide grin.

"I hope she isn't boring..." Said the Stallion, who was in a rather ecstatic mood.

"Well, my dear monsieur, the name is Rarity, Ponyville's elite couturier and rising star in the greater world of high fashion!"

The assertiveness of the mare slightly suprised Limelight, but also rather amused him. He already knew what her name was, had she assumed he was asking for a re-introduction? This made the stallion give a small laugh, before saying, "Yes, yes i already know your name my lady; and by that exquisitively styled mane, flawless purple colour, that snow white mane, and those gleaming pearls of eyes you have. I can tell your an educated pony of high fashion, and beleive me, it shows! You're clearly the most stylish pony In this town, and I'm sure even from where I'm from, youd'd still be top teir!" Said the Stallion, being as complimentary as possible. doing his best to try and soothe the rather formiddly assertive mare. It was cute though, he respected a woman with power.

"And might I ask for your name, sir?"

It had actually just hit Limelight that he had yet to give out his name. Generally this was a decent thing, however, most of the time his fans already knew him by name. This was a new kind of scenario for him. The stallion grinned, "Well Miss Rarity, my name is Limelight... however, I guess you could add a "Sir" to that as I am technically a royal, but I don't really feel the word suits me well, it doesn't roll of the tongue. So I just prefer to be known by my real and stage name, Limelight." Admitting his royal staus wasn't something he did on a regular basis. However, he felt that if he was going to say it out loud, it might as well be to the most regal of ponies from the area. This was Ponyville after all, mare's of Rarity's calbur were sure to be incredibly... rare. "What a fitting name..." thought Limelight to himself. After he spoke, the mare raised her hoof to his own, which he prompty gave a light kiss, as was standard a greeting in Canterlot. He looked back at the Mare and smiled. "Shall we be on our way then?"

I'm glad you really like that Trilobite

Also, I want this to be understood for when this is finalized, SHE WILL HAVE NO REDICULOUS MAGICAL POWERS.

1. Basic telekinesis
   
2. Teleportation (I.e. from soundboards, to backstage, to costume wardrobe, etc.) She's better at this than Limelight, but only a little. It slightly winds her when done repeatedly.
   
3. She also has the ability to whisper to other ponies through magic. Since headsets and stage mic's don't really exist due to technological reasons. This is her only special trait which is why she's got the "Headset" on her flank.
   

I would at least hope that #3 is suitable, as it isn't domination in any way shape or form. It isn't over abusive, and isn't overpowered in my opinion. It's the same concept as sending a whisper to another player in any standard MMORPG, or sending a private message through facebook. Nothing fancy shmancy, but still unique.

Typos should be fixed for now