StarStorm

((Okay scamps, we have two three new players!! Sketchy, Shadow, and Dawn (who is a stowaway and reveal herself shortly) who are all looking for a chance to hop in Oh GAWHD Licorice must be mentally deficient to leave all of these kiddos behind XDD))

[colour=#800080]"Heehee!!" [/colour]Shade found it hilarious when Slick put the sock on his ear, letting it just hang over his face like it did. "[colour=#800080]No-no-no-no-no, it goes on you hoof silly!!"[/colour] Shade was doing her best to control her laughter, but it just wasn't happening!! She bit her tongue to keep from being cracking up TOO loudly as Slick pulled her pink little sock up over his hoof. [colour=#800080]"Oh my gosh, Slick!! [/colour][colour=#800080]You're my hero of the day for this!!"[/colour] Her chuckles finally died down after another minute. [colour=#800080]"Violet!! We can't make him wear it the WHOLE trip.. What would happen when we go to the beach? But, you can certainly wear it and be part of our little group if you want to Slick! You should at least put ONE more on though, because only wearing one sock looks kind of silly." [/colour]Shade slipped her green one off, just in case he wanted to. [colour=#800080]At least a green one is a LITTLE more manly... Kind of...[/colour]

Right now if you'd like!!!

You can hop in too if you'd like, Shadow! Just pretend like you two have been there the whole time ^^

Davroth drew something adorable, and Tales has sent in her line!!

.....But, reading the posts above me.. I guess that that's already been said, eh? XD

[colour=#ff0000]Where IS she?! First block has started already!! Maybe I should go try and find her..[/colour] A frantic Wishbone started to reach for the music room's handle, only to pull his hoof back. [colour=#ff0000]No.. What if they don't like colts coming in?[/colour] Wish's ear perked up, hearing the unmistakeable hoofsteps of non-other than his first-block teacher, Mr. Fritter, coming down the hall. [colour=#ff0000]"Eep!!"[/colour] [colour=#ff0000]Gotta hide, gotta hide..[/colour] He reached for the handle at lightning speed, entering and closing the door behind himself so fast that his tail barely made it in. [colour=#ff0000]Wow!! Kinda crazy to think that this was once a music room..[/colour]

A new-to-her host, Shadow, had introduced himself to the three, giving each a polite kiss on the hoof. [colour=#008080]Everypony sure is pretty friendly around here...[/colour] It looked pretty routine for him, getting up from reading his book for introductions and after simply returning to it. He might be fun to get to know later, but for now, Licorice wanted to spend some more time with Soul. [colour=#008080]"So, Soul-" [/colour][colour=#ff0000]"Licorice!! There you are!!"[/colour] She was interrupted by a small, grey pony who trotted her way.[colour=#008080] "Bonezy!!"[/colour][colour=#ff0000] "Yeah, hi!! Did you not hear the bell ring? It's first period like, right now." [/colour][colour=#008080]"There's somepony I would like you to meet.." [/colour]Licorice started, completely ignoring her friends concern. [colour=#008080]"Wishbone, this is RedSoul Eclipse. Soul, this is my friend Wish. He's just a little nervous because he's never been in here before."[/colour] Wishbone blushed a bit. [colour=#ff0000]Well you didn't hafta tell him that..[/colour]

No worries Harrington ^^

Cool mug!! Besides, who doesn't love AJ?

Slick had used Shade as an example, putting a hoof on her shoulder and saying how harmless fillies, like her, were, and that he would trust her. [colour=#800080]Aww..[/colour] Shade found it really sweet how he was standing up for fillies like that, but didn't say anything about it out loud. [colour=#800080]"Do you like them?" [/colour]She held up her front two hooves- one pink, one green. [colour=#800080]"I guess that socks aren't really necessary, but they're kind of fun!" [/colour]Shade giggled, not surprised at all that Slick had never tried them himself.[colour=#800080] "Would you like to? You can wear mine!" [/colour]She started pulling one of her socks off- The bright pink one. [colour=#800080]"Cmon, Slick!! It'll be fun!!" [/colour]She giggled more, hoping he'd do it.

*Claps* Grimshy, this character is amazing!! You used plenty of rich detail, really giving us a feel for you character. She sounds adventurous, and like a ton of fun!! And who doesn't love a good tomboy?

Okay, so there are a few things that will need changed before I can send her up for senior staff to look over and approve.

I apologize in advance because this but this first edit will be kind of a biggie. The cutiemark story really isn't going to work how it is now. As they show us in Sonic Rainboom, each snowflake has to be hoofmade. Even though I really like the story, accidentally creating a blizzard just isn't a possibility. The mark itself looks awesome though!! You did a great job creating it :3

http://youtu.be/Wmj6...?t=9m56s[/media]

This video goes on until the end of the episode, but if you watch just the first part, they gave us a peek into part of the weather factory that snowflakes are made.

Also, even though the divorce was a big event in Blizzy's life, the history section focuses a little too heavily on it. It would be awesome to hear a bit more about Blizzy and a bit less about her parents. Later in the app you say that Blizzy liked to be along as a foal. Maybe to get more about her into the history, you could tell us the story of when she started becoming more social? You don't have to if you don't feel like it, but that's just an idea on how to expand on that a little c:

Okay, so just one last little thing- Cloudsdale's rain factory should be changed to Cloudsdale's weather factory, but it's totally cool to have her mum work in the rain section

Blizzy's character summary is looking awesome!! Reading about her favorite bands made me giggle.

The fog manipulation that her father did raise some question, but thinking about it, I don't see why a pegasus wouldn't be able to manipulate fog just the same as any other weather. I actually think that it's a really cool idea, and it seems extremely fitting for Haze to be from Las Pegasus!! It just really sounds like the kind of show that they would have there

I know that it may seem like kind of a lot, but besides those it's looking fantabulous as far as I can see

[colour=#800080]"Eeep!!"[/colour] Shade squeaked, quickly raising her back hooves from the now greener, stickier floor and up over Bluemoon. [colour=#800080]"Gearlock, I think !!" [/colour]The purple little pony listened as Slick asked if Violet and herself would like to sit by him and Knight, but not TOO close to Knight. She looked down at the apple flavoured, slushie filled floor. [colour=#800080]"Suuurrreee.." [/colour]Shade accepted the invitation, hoping that it was a good move. [colour=#800080]"I guess if Knight sits by the window we won't have to be RIGHT right next to him, only kind of."[/colour] She plopped her plot down next to Slick. Something about sitting by him just made her smile. It was Flashbomb's turn to ask somepony truth or dare, but he seemed distracted. [colour=#800080]I guess I'd prolly be kinda distracted too if I had to somepony I really liked..[/colour]

-More review, the first one being at the top of the page-

There is a giant game of truth or dare going on. Because of dares and questions, Puzzlebeat admitted to his crush on Shade, and then later Pocket was dared to kiss somepony by the end of the trip. Pocket revealed that she only liked girls, although is now questioning herself on that. Pocket dared Shade to kiss either kiss her or Puzzlebeat, Shade's choice of who. She chose Pocket, causing Puzzlebeat to grow cold with depression. Shade and Pocket both tried to comfort him, but it didn't work so well.

The group stopped at a gas station, but not much notable happened besides Slick daring Knight to try and hit on the group of three filly fillies- Shade, Bluemoon, and Violet. As we're all still little kiddos, Knight is still in the "girls are icky" phase, which isn't good for Violet, because she has a crush on him. Still, he tried to copy his dad and said something like "Wanna sit on my lap and talk about the first thing that comes up?" causing Shade to run out of the station screaming "Eww!!" and Bluemoon to actually accept the offer. Shade ran into Pocket, who was talking with a large group of ponies outside the bus, and Pocket asked to talk to her. They started to, but when Shade admitted to liking the kiss Pocket ended up kissing her again!! Also, while they were in there, Shade and Bluemoon bought socks from a sock machine, and so Shade Bluemoon and Violet all decided to trade and miss match with each other

Back on the bus, Flashbomb and Blizzy started crushing on each other. Due to a dare, Flash just kissed Blizzy and they both liked it!! Gearlock is being more social, moving to the back next to Slick and Knight. Bluemoon actually DID sit in Knight's lap, causing him to push her off thinking it was gross. She teased him and sat up next to him again and he backed up into Slick, who teased him about being afraid of the little filly and he got upset and called Slick mean and left to a new row. Shade and Violet were plotting for how to date Slick and Knight, (even though Shade kissed Pocket she's had a crush on Slick since the beginning) and decided that their first order of business was to get Knight to like fillies, so they took it as an opportunity to be nice and apologize for what'd just happened. Everypony else was apologizing, too, and Knight and Slick resealed their friendship with a bro-hoof. Knight is still pretty upset, though. Pocket tries to comfort Puzzle, which doesn't go so well.

Broken has recently joined the story, but is already taking part in truth or dare and being social.

If you have any questions, feel free to ask!! Welcome welcome welcome to the rp, Zora!!

No worries, Weesh!! I will totally start posting and letting everyone know once someone has sent off their line or drawing

I would love to be your helper, Grimshy!! ^^

I'll have to wait until you write some more on her before I can give you a thorough review, but you're off to a great start

[colour=#008080]They take colts!![/colour] Licorice knew that her friend Wishbone would be excited to hear that. As a yaoi fan, Licorice was pretty happy to hear it too!! An exciteable little scribbles had seen the poster she held in her bangled hoof. [colour=#008080]"It sure is, little one! It has both you and Steel on it! The brother that you never had.. Oh you two are just TOO cute!! Have you two known each other long?" [/colour]She gave Scribbles a big, big smile. Looking at that adorable little pony, it would be hard NOT to smile!! Licorice was happy to see Soul come in as well. [colour=#008080]"Hey you!" [/colour]She turned her attention to him, her grin still widely present. Soul was so mysterious, so bad, and oh so dreamy!! He had her interest. Licorice had made up her mind that she would request to sit with him again next time.

Sketchy sounds adorable!!!!! I have a mute friend who is just the sweetest guy, and he kind of reminds me of him already Also, jolteons for the win!!!! When I first started on Canterlot, I had an umbreon and an espeon as my picture XD Welcome to Left Behind!! Do you need a short summary on what's happened so far or would you like to just jump in?

((Wait, who's passed out on the floor? WHAT DID I MISS?! O//o))

Shade was too distracted watching Bluemoon and Knight to notice the kiss between Knight Flash and Blizzy. [colour=#800080]"No worries Vi, we'll figure something out. Besides, we still have the whole rest of the trip!"[/colour] She turned her attention to the general group and spoke up. [colour=#800080]"Hey, are we still playing truth or dare?! Who's turn is it?!"[/colour]

((Short reply is short ^^))

((You're so welcome!! Nopony taught me how to use spoilers until prolly my 500th post XD Good job getting Gearlock in on the action, Www! C: Sorry mate, didn't see your post at first!! I'll add a bottom part ^^))

Licorice stood and faced the class for only a moment, letting them know how much longer until arrival. [colour=#008080]"Okay kiddos! We have only about 2 more hours before we reach Red Rock, so we'll have some sunshine left if anypony would like to play on the beach after we get settled!" [/colour](The schooly part will be the next day ^^)

Shade felt so bad for Knight! He had pleaded for mercy, but it was to no avail as Gear also joined the row, pushing him even CLOSER to the filly!! Shade could see that Knight wasn't far in front of them.[colour=#800080]"Now's our chance, Violet! We could try and cheer him up and maybe if it works he'll realize that fillies aren't so bad after all." [/colour]Shade tapped Knight on the shoulder gently with her pink sock-covered hoof.[colour=#800080] "..Hey Knight? Are you doing okay, bud? I'm sorry about Bluemoon.. She can get a little excitable at times."[/colour]

Slick came up, apologizing to his buddy so much that he even went as far as to give him back the lollipops that Knight had bought him, saying that he didn't deserve them.[colour=#800080] Aww, poor Slick!! He looks so hurt..[/colour] [colour=#800080]"I'm sure he didn't mean anything by it, Knight. You guys are good friends, and friends like you two always find a way to make up. They're there for each other through thick and thin, through good and bad, and sickness and health, and for better or worse, and.. all that kind of stuff!"[/colour] [colour=#800080]Please be besties again, please be besties again..[/colour] Shade watched eagerly.

I've pm'd ping, and have decided to move him down a couple of spaces on the list, which means that it would be imaginations turn I'll send you your line if a second, scamp!!

Omg monster trucks! Yuuuus!!!

Monster Mutt and Gravedigger for best pony *Totally not going off topic here at all*

SPOILER LESSONS!!!!!

Right here, right now!! You scamps get to learn how to use spoilers

Okay, so take whatever text you want to be in the spoiler, for example "OMG scamps! Flash is totally gonna kiss Blizzy!!"

and then you just surround it with these bracket thingies- [] []

So then, it looks like.. []OMG scamps! Flash is totally gonna kiss Blizzy!![]

Then you fill the frontal bracket with the word "spoiler" and the end with "/spoiler" which then would make it look like this.. (only without the kk in the middle)

[spokkiler]OMG scamps! Flash is totally gonna kiss Blizzy!![/spokkiler]

And when you post, it looks like this:

OMG scamps! Flash is totally gonna kiss Blizzy!!

You may have spoilers in your spoilers, and it doesn't matter if you capitalize Spoiler or not so long as it's set up correctly.

Happy spoilerinating!!!!!

It looks like it's Ping's turn! I'll message him and let him know :3

[colour=#800080]He's such a goofball! [/colour]Shade couldn't help but to smile at Slick's silliness, being seated upside like that. His curious eyes had caught her peepers before she sat.[colour=#800080] He saw me!! [/colour]She could see his tail and back hooves bent over the backrest. Shade turned to Violet frantically with a hoof over her mouth.[colour=#800080] "I think Slick just saw me checking him out!!"[/colour]

Shade watched the row next to her. Bluemoon wouldn't budge! [colour=#800080]I tried, Knight..[/colour] She couldn't help but giggle a little while watching him back away from the small filly in terror, even though she felt bad for him. Shade listened inventively when Violet spoke to her.

The way she spoke about wanting to be his friend so badly, and how the difficulty of obtaining that friendship just made it more desirable reminded her of somepony she once saw at a concert. [colour=#800080]Was it Jackleapp who made that epic speech? No..[/colour] Shade started trying to remember, but when Violet said that she thinks that she likes Knight, Shade smiled real big and whispered excitedly. [colour=#800080]"Awh!! Violet, that's so cute!! Let's see if we can't get him to like you by the end of this trip. You could have Knight, and I could have Slick. It'll be perfect cuz they're best friends and so are we!! Oh my gosh this'll be so great!! I think that firstly, we need to try and get Knight to like fillies. How do you think we can get Bluemoon to stop pestering him?"[/colour]

((I'm so sorry, scamps!! I meant to post yesterday, and I ALMOST got to, but I when I clicked my computer was all like, "Site's down, your post is gone!! Bwahahaha!!" and I was all like, "Noooooooooooooo!!!!" But anyway, here's my long awaited post ^^))

[colour=#ff0000]"Thanks!! You really think so?!"[/colour] If not anything else, Fresco could certainly be loud enough to be one. She trotted on over to the cynogriff, an excitable grin spread across her muzzle. The creature already seemed to have quite a few other ponies around him, but the curious little unicorn didn't mind one bit. Besides, that just meant that she got to meet even MORE new ponies, and in her mind, the more friends the better!! She bravely approached the feathered child alongside her new friend. [colour=#ff0000]"Hey everypony! My name's Fresco, and this is Silt!"[/colour] She eyed Fleet for a second, then smiled up at him warmly [colour=#ff0000]"I've never met a real life griffon before!! Aren't griffons usually bigger? Are you like, a midget griffon? You could probly get around REALLY fast with those wings.." [/colour]Only having met ponies before, Fresco had never met another being with wings like Fleet Paw's before, and found them fascinating. [colour=#ff0000]"If I had wings like that, I would travel all OVER Equestria!!"[/colour] She had stars in her eyes, imagining the possibilities. [colour=#ff0000]"Have you been to many places? Oh!"[/colour] Fresco had asked plenty of questions for him already, but had neglected to ask the obvious. [colour=#ff0000] "...What's your name, bud?"[/colour] Fresco tilted her head to the side a bit, awaiting his response.

Hooray!! This app looks good to go, Neo!! I'll have senior staff come check it out.

Can't wait to see you and Time in mane!!

So guys, I'm thinking about bringing in my other OC Spin Art.

She'll be an art instructor.

So about worrying on staff order, she'll just be in the same post as Jigsaw. Just like SRBG's ponies.

That'll be awesome!! I'm excited to see Spin Art Also, I'mma post here in a minute, so we can keep this moving everyone! Sorry that I didn't just post yesterday, I got invited to a sleep over!! I had a lot of fun, though, and my friends and I even scored free tickets to a monster truck ralley!!

No worries Frost! Everyone procrastinates at times Speaking of which, I need to reply to Camp Little Lake!! *Goes and does that right now*