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  1. Left Behind (Apply in OoC please ^^)

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    (( I hope no one is getting mad over Pocket's drunken rage. It's nothing but harmless fun!! "Then the short pony who came out of Shade's bags. [colour=#800080]"Oh someone save me I'm so small and Can't do anything."[/colour]"

    :scream: I'll destroy you!!))

    "<<Dawn! Are you alright? Did you hurt?>>"

    Dawn found herself being lifted to her hooves.

    "<<Oh...we left you there...please don't be angry, we were just so excited about going to the forest, we didn't notice that you wasn't there>>"

    [colour=#FF0000]"<<Y- yes, I'm fine. A bit frightened, yes, but I'm ok. Thank you Violet.>>"[/colour]

    She stood there, trembling slightly. The forest? Are these ponies crazy? Why in Equestria would they ever want to go there, let alone, be excited by it? Older ponies never make any sense...

    "<<It's so late yet, so I think...I will go back to the cabins and Dawn, well, you should go with me. Also, I don't think that the others will stay so long. Knight? Would you like to come with us or you will stay for a while.>>"

    [colour=#FF0000]"<<What are we waiting for!?>>"[/colour]

    Dawn bounced up and smiled. A choice of staying in the forest or heading back to the cabins? No contest!! The filly was ready to get the hay out of there!! She attempted nudging, tugging, pulling, and pushing Violet in the direction that she believed to be the exit. Though her efforts were futile, as Violet seemed not to budge, waiting for a response from the colt who appeared to be named Knight.

    Growing frustrated, Dawn spoke up.

    [colour=#FF0000]"<<He'd love to come with us, Vi. Now let's goooo!...>>"[/colour]

  2. Left Behind (Apply in OoC please ^^)

    in Free For All Roleplay

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    ((Kinda forgot about this and my posting has become slightly limited :blush: sorry!!

    not like I was interacting with anyone anyway lol

    ))

    Dawn, who had unknowingly been in the process of being Left Behind, stood in the cabin, watching as the older fillies made their way out of a window. And once everypony had left, she tried to follow suit. Unfortunatly, the littler pony was too small to reach the window. Leaving her in a bit of a pickle...

    She stared at the window, devising an escape plan. Though turning her head, she noticed a perfectly functional door...

    [colour=#F62817]<<"Oh, duhh...">>[/colour]

    She exited the structure and circled around to where the window was. But upon her arrival, she found that everypony was headed into the forest. Dawn, scared out her wits, took a few steps in the opposite direction from the tree filled place that may or may not be filled with potentially dangerous creatures. She continued to shy away from the forest until a flower gently brushed against her flank. Sending the filly into a panic and dashing straight into the forest, hoping that she would run into a bigger pony that could protect her.

    [colour=#F62817]<<"Somepony save meeee!!">>[/colour]

    And through the brush, somewhere a bit farther ahead, music could be heard. Along with the sounds of splashing water and other ponies!! Dawn beamed and tried to run faster. However this only resulted in her tripping on her own hooves and rolling into somepony (Violet) who appeared to be leaving.

  3. Left Behind (Apply in OoC please ^^)

    in Free For All Roleplay

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     <<"Is this yours?">>

    [colour=#F62817]"Well, -"[/colour]

    <<"It's so beautiful...I wish it would be mine.">>

    [colour=#F62817]"It's not-"[/colour]

    <<"Would you be nice, and take care of it?">>

    [colour=#F62817]"Ok, but it's-!!"[/colour] -Dawn fumbled as Violet practically shoved the pearl in her hooves.

    <<"I need to do something...">>

    [colour=#F62817]"This conversation is feeling very one sided..."[/colour] -she spoke as Violet exited the cabin.

    The filly let out a sigh of frustration and looked at the pearl. She placed the jewel in her tail as a substitute for the lack of a saddle bag. (I hate how ponies don't have pockets sometimes!!) Dawn was heading over to a bed (any bed not taken?) to retire. She hadn't a reason to stay up, plus it was quite dark outside, so sleep seemed reasonable.

    She had only begun to climb up the bed when Shade burst in the room.

    [colour=#800080]<<"Okay, okay, so I'm sorry but Dawn, Bluemoon, I really gotta tell you what just happened!! And you too cuz you're here!!">>[/colour]

    Dawn groaned silently and retreated from the bed, now walking over to Shade. [colour=#F62817]"What is it, Shade?"[/colour]

    The older pony burst into giggle fit. Never getting a chance to tell everypony what had her so giddy. But slowly regaining her composure, she resumed.

    [colour=#800080]"Okay, okay. So, what happened was.."[/colour]

    Once more, Shade had stopped her story short. This time interrupted by the sudden appearance of Miss Licorice.

    And Dawn, who wasn't supposed to be seen, quickly hid in Shade's tail, having not many more options.

  5. Left Behind (Apply in OoC please ^^)

    in Free For All Roleplay

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    She went out to gather rocks and sticks to Make a camp fire. Upon finding her ingrediants she went back to the Camp Center And began making her camp fire << [colour=#40e0d0]there we go. Nice and toasty[/colour] >>

    ((is anyone else thinking about seabears now? Srsly, I'm just waiting for a bear to come charging through the clearing and attacking everypony whose not in a circle

    this is why I don't do mane RP, I would totally do something like this and get kicked

    :lol: ))

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  7. Left Behind

    in Out of Character Discussion

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    Question!!

    Who exactly is getting left behind at RedRock? :o

    I cast my vote for who ever has started a love triangle, because that's always fun!! Also, for my OC only because she's a natural leader and maybe she could get her cutie mark? You don't want her to stay a blank flank, would you? :shifty:

    Idk, but seriously, who are we going to ditch accidentally leave behind?

  8. Left Behind (Apply in OoC please ^^)

    in Free For All Roleplay

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    ((The feels...This strangely makes me smile.

    Also, I literally had no idea what to say, so behold one of my terrible, poorly thought out posts :/ ))

     <<"Excuse me?">>

    The little filly angled her head to face the pony who had just entered.

    <<"Is everything alright? Your mane is a bit...sooty? I didn't see you on the bus...Who are you?">>

    Dawn turned her body to completely face to face the older filly. [colour=#F62817]"Oh, I'm Dawn! It's a pleasure to meet you. Oh, and the reason you didn't see me earlier was because I was hiding. See, I'm actually not supposed to be here with you older ponies. I kind of snuck here with the help of my friend, Shade.[/colour] She smiled nervously at Violet [colour=#F62817]"Oh! I didn't learn your na-"[/colour]

    THUMP

    From one of the beds, the blue box fell to the floor, bursting open and revealing a pearl that rolled over to Violet.

  12. Left Behind (Apply in OoC please ^^)

    in Free For All Roleplay

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    Please be aware of the several other RP'ers / me possibly falling behind. Please try not to roll ahead of them / us. The pace of posting should be kept to where everyone has a chance to keep up.

    Also, be careful when changing time. Perhaps our OP, StarStorm, had things planned, or someone could fall way behind and have to somehow reinsert themself into the RP. I know you're only saying it was getting a little late, but still. You never know.

    Thank you. :)

    Or you can ignore what I say because I really have no authority :P

    But would that be morally wrong to completely disregard somebody else's opinion?

    That's right, this has just become a moral issue / internal conflict. Lol

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  13. Snowdrop (Fan Animation)

    in Pony Chatter

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    I actually saw this a few hours ago...It's in just about every recommended section for each pony video on YouTube.

    Anyway, I can't say it was good, but it wasn't terrible. I've seen plenty worse animated fanfics, and this is by far the best for me. Does anyone else think some of the ponies just look like OC's at a glance? Or is it just me?

    The animation was great for the most part, slightly choppy at a few instances. And while the little fillies and colts are exiting the classroom, (around 3:45) you can see a few of them vanishing before they completely go off screen. That's what is bothering me the most about the entire video...It's very upsetting.

    The voice acting could have been improved. It sounds to me as if someone should step back from the mic ever so slightly. Or get better recording equipment. Or, what ever is in their budget.

    The story, while touching it was a bit Mary Sue-ish...Blind girl does something inspiring / touching / feels inducing and becomes instant best buddies with Luna AND basically gets her own celebration of sorts. :roll: I do not approve. Seriously, that is one *Pinkie Pie is best pony* of a speech for a foal.

    Show analysis time!!

    So according to the teacher, Celestia and Luna have been in power for 100 years already. Assuming that's 900 years before the canon date, that's impossible. Luna should have been, IN THE MOON!!

    Unless of course this wasn't canon dated at all or it wasnt using anything canon for that matter...

    On another note? Is that Surprise, the original character design for PinkiePie, walking alongside HoityToity at 0:27?

  14. Left Behind (Apply in OoC please ^^)

    in Free For All Roleplay

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    He placed the present onto the bed with the flower attatched. It sparkled and emmitted a puff of cold air. Flash smiled and snuck out as to not awake the pony asleep across the room. He shut the door and left.

    Leave a priceless, wrapped up, softball sized pearl in the same room as a curious, little, "sleeping" filly? :smug:

    I'll be sure nopony lays a hoof on that precious object. ;)

    Also, what type of building(s) do we live in? Log cabins? A motel? A log motel?

    I need to know if it's flammable :)

    Awoken by a not-so-sneaky-somepony, Dawn groaned. She was having an amazing ice cream dream, and now it's over...The filly took solace in the fact it was probably going to end soon anyway and lifted her head, gently rubbing an eye with her hoof attempting to clear her slightly blurred vision.

    She slowly rose to her feet hooves and slid off the side of the bed.

    [colour=#F62817]"Hello? Is somepony here?"[/colour] Dawn poked about the cabin. Searching under the beds, in the closet, under the sheets, inside of a pillow, inbetween the cracks of the floor boards, and inside of Shade's luggage. But she found nothing, save for a bright blue box on somepony's bed. But there's no way a pony could be hiding in there. Right?

    Disregarding this,  she resumed her search. She stuck her head inside of the fireplace and looked up the chimney. [colour=#F62817]"Helloooo? Is there someone there?"[/colour] She pulled herself away from the chimney, unaware of large amounts of soot clinging to parts of her mane and coat. 

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  15. Left Behind (Apply in OoC please ^^)

    in Free For All Roleplay

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    Finally, I'm able to RP...Short post is short.

    ((One long and painful trip of being dragged around in a suitcase later ))

    After what seemed to be forever, the suitcase in which Dawn was imprisoned opened.  The filly poked her head and front hooves out of the opening then sighed deeply, glad for the fresh air. "Free at last. Sweet Celestia, I thought I'd never get out of there." Dawn presumed to hop out of the suitcase and sprawl herself on one of the bed without interacting with anypony quickly falling asleep.

    interacting with others in RP's is overrated :lol: ((seriously, who wouldn't want to sleep after doing nothing on a long bus ride though?))

  17. Left Behind

    in Out of Character Discussion

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    Silvie!!! Of course you can join, scamp!!! I love Dawn, even if she tried stealing Star's girl when the janitor attacked :D

    RP's in the FIM Free-for-All aren't canon unless you want them to be. (I think, I'm probably wrong. I do know that Mane RP can be considered canon if you want it to though) Doesn't even matter anymore anyway lol.

    Umm, please don't catch the bus on fire and be sure sure to ask if you can set somepony's mane on fire ahead of time, but you can TOTALLY be a stowaway if you'd like!!!! Would you like to be in Shade's luggage? XD

    In Shade's luggage? Sure! While we're on the side of humor.

    And what will happen when the teacher finds out!? She could get...Detention!

    *insert gif here*

    I'll post when I can, or you can write me in when Shade goes through her luggage if you want. I'm fine with either one.

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  18. Left Behind

    in Out of Character Discussion

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    Name: Dawn Sunrise

    Gender: Female

    Race: Unicorn

    Brief History: TL;DR :

    Born -> Raised -> Celestia's School Gifted Unicorn -> ??? -> FIELD TRIP!!!

    Looks:

    Coat colour - Splashed White

    Mane / Tail style - Dawn's mane falls slightly lower than the length of her neck, the lighter shade being orange and the darker colour being a light red.

    Her medium/long tail has the same colour scheme as her mane.

    Cutie Mark: Unavailable

    Personality: Dawn is your typical, happy go lucky filly. Always having tons of energy and seems to be ready and excited for anything. She loves making new friends and is very friendly, even towards ponies that may seem a little inconsiderate towards her or other ponies. She is very loyal and will stick by her friends like glue. Oh, and she is also a leader, trying to lead others when ever she gets a chance.

    Likes and dislikes: She enjoys the light of day and warmth of the sun. Reading.

    Candy, sweets, sugar, etc.

    She doesn't like the night much, she finds it has a chill and unsettling air to it, but it's still welcoming. She's not a fan of rude ponies that don't have any concern for anypony but themself.

    Random fact: Dawn is a pyro-maniac and often sets herself on fire without realizing it. Also, I'm pretty sure Dawn is the youngest on this trip! She turned *insert age her* a few days ago!! :kissy:

    Anything I left out..? ^^ : Yes, Stormy, you left out the adorableness rating. So:

    Adorableness (1/10): On scale of one through ten....Eleventy-Seven and four. (1174)

    Curious question: Can I be a stowaway!? :D It's always been my dream since a few minutes ago to have my little filly skip school to get an education!!

    Also, am I allowed to "accidentally" have the bus catch fire, endangering the lives of many students, a bus driver, and a teacher? :)

    And if not that, can I set other pony's manes ablaze?

    Actually, the fire questions were jokes by the way, I don't want to purposefully singe another pony.

  23. A Compendium of Curiosities (Apply here!)

    in Out of Character Discussion

    Posted

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    Everypony wants their ship to be 20% cooler, too bad this 20% is flyin solo. Or not...

    I'll just fly solo until I land upon some RANDOM ship and then I'll sneak to the captain's quarters and challenge him/her to a dual. I which I win, I stay and run the vessel, or I lose and is thrown overboard and basically quit the RP or repeat this process...

    Wait, what type of ships?

    Like actually boats? Or awesome gliders and blimps and stuff? :P

    Because if this is actually on the water, I want no part of this. :roll:

    I hate the ocean...I have a bad past...I once took my pet goldfish to the beach, and well....Yeah....

    :lol:

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