FlutterPie

If she needs anything else added, let me know. If she is fine, then great! I can’t wait to use her as soon as she’s accepted.

I added the suggested things, so I really hope she is ok now. I had fun making her and hope she can be accepted.

Roleplay Type: Crossover Name: RubySpark Sex: Female Age: Filly Species: Unicorn Eye colour: Ruby Red Coat: She has a sparkly red coat that shines a bit like the milky way in the light. Mane/Tail: Her mane is medium long and flows a bit in the wind as does her tail. Both are a midnight black and are as beautiful as the night sky. Physique: Her body is a bit small and she is slim but this makes her have a perfect figure. She never gains much weight on account of her high metabolism. Residence: Canterlot Occupation: None at the moment Cutie Mark: Has not gotten hers yet. History: RubySpark was born and raised in Canterlot, her mother and father worked in the library and this reflected back to her, she began reading many different books, many of them being about magic or different styles of art. She grew up in a loving and comfortable environment..but was always abit different ever since she was a foal. Her mother and father worried since she had such a hard time making friends on account of her shy nature and outward look. When she entered Princess Celestia's School for Gifted Unicorns she got picked on almost daily. This had a major effect on her as shenow is very quiet and mostly keeps to herself. Her talent with magic was noticeable even when she was just a foal, she could do many tricks with her magic that none of the other kids her age could. Her parents gave her the courage to take the test to be accepted and she passed it with flying colours (actually literally, as beautiful sparks were everywhere when she became so happy and had a small magic spark explosion). Character Summary: RubySpark is a very talented artist and enjoys painting the scenery of the many places around equestria, she would make these paintings so impressive and much like the actual place that when other ponies saw it they would stare in awe at the quality. She loved her little talent and would practice it more whenever she had time to do it. Her favorite places to be are Canterlot, Sweet apple acres and ponyville. When she was very young her parents took her to a trip to ponyville and she loved to play around sugar cube corner and the beauty salon. When she was in ponyville, she had gotten lost and ended up in sweet apple acres where she met many kind country ponies who helped her find her mum and dad. She is very shy and quiet and tends to keep to herself..but don't let that fool you, for when you earn her trust and become friends with her, you'll see she has a very big heart. She cares for those she loves and would do anything in her power to help them, she was always bullied so when she sees others in that situation, something in her sparks and she protects them instantly. The reason for this is because her parents showered her with so much love..that despite becoming very shy and closed off when she gets to know somebody, she pops out of her shell and you can meet the real her. (I hope this is acceptable now, I made the changes that you recommended as much as came to my mind on the ideas. I really hope she can become a full fledged member of the community now. =) )

[colour=#ee82ee]Fluttershy hummed softly as they approached the small wooden bridge before her tree cottage. "I am so happy that we can hang out again~ I really did like our time spent together before." She giggled gently as she looked at Discord with a smile. [/colour] (Hey, I gotta get some sleep..I'm still a bit sick and I'm really tired. I'll be on when I can tomorrow! Night~)

[colour=#ee82ee]Fluttershy seemed much happier and smiled sweetly. "P-Perfect! Let's go to my house for some tea then." She bumped Discord playfully with her flank and began trotting at a calming pace to her tree cottage with him following.[/colour]

[colour=#ee82ee]Fluttershy slowly moved the flowers from her frightened face and felt her fear slowly fade away. "O-Oh Discord..I'm so sorry, I-I was just so scared that I didn't realize it was you." She frowned and looked at the flowers then to sugarcube corner and shook her head knowing Pinkie would already have plans anyway. Her beautiful blue eyes turned to Discord and she smiled cutely. "U-Um Discord..would you like to hang out?"[/colour]

[colour=#ee82ee]Fluttershy sniffled but then her eyes widened more at the red eyes before her. "P-Please don't hurt m-me! H-He was a g-g-griffin!" She whimpered and hi[/colour][colour=#ee82ee]d her face behind the pretty flowers trying not to fall to the ground, apparent from her shaking knees.[/colour] (She assumes they are, that's where she usually thinks Pinkie is.)

[colour=#ee82ee]Fluttershy had just reached sugarcube corner when she spotted a griffin in front of the place. "Ah!" She grew scared at how angry he looked and quickly hid behind a tree with the flowers held close to her chest. "N-Not another o-one.."[/colour]

[colour=#ee82ee]Fluttershy was carefully picking some pretty flowers from the nearby garden to give to her favorite friend Pinkie. She smiled softly and began arranging the flowers beautifully in a bundle and wrapped them carefully with a pretty pink bow. "I-I hope she'll like them." She whispered to herself shyly as she turned, she then began heading to sugarcube corner.[/colour]