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  1. NeoExlucky
    [colour=#ff0000]"Well then, the fate of me was much like Liesha and Luna. We were corrupted, but I was molded by it and became a torn, a chaotic Alicorn of Destruction, and with no redemption I became a Demon. The Clarion of Seasona sealed me into a Pocket Watch, the exact same one that Mr. Spinner picked up and put on. He absorbed the ability to use it but at a cost I became one with him." [/colour][colour=#000000]Time's body shivered in the new power and changed the aura around him started to glow. [/colour][colour=#ff0000]"They never excepted me back. My crown was worthless to them! I could never see my friends, my wife, or either of my daughters. When I got to Celestia, she said I wasn't needed. Her star pupil would be able to handle the new power. YOU TOOK EVERYTHING I HAD!" [/colour][colour=#000000]Deity moved a hoof forward but was immediately stopped. Time's body shook again and soon the aura died down. [/colour][colour=#ff0000]"Time has more control then I thought."[/colour]
  2. NeoExlucky
    [colour=#000000]Time was very defensive when Twilight asked him about this. [/colour][colour=#696969]"Yes because the great and powerful 'Princess of magic' needs to know every little detail about me." [/colour][colour=#000000]When Shimmer was curious about as well he sighed a bit and stood back a little drawing a circle in the dirt and a line straight down the middle. [/colour][colour=#696969]"Time magic is a weak magic that only the most gifted of Unicorns can truly pull off. The ability to stop Time itself is difficult but I can do for about 2 seconds. When you find an Artifact of Power, as your majesty knows, it changes you and can increase your power. Mine was a pocket Watch but the pocket watch was a double edged sword. All Time manipulators need another half in order to control time itself and normally to help them with their magic. The Pocket Watch was cursed with the spirit of a fallen Prince." [/colour][colour=#000000]Deity and Time were becoming one as he talked and you could see it too. Time's pupils were now gone and his mane and tail had red lines going through them. Finally Time's cutie mark looked rusted and destroyed. Except for a red aura this was how Time looked when Deity took over. [/colour][colour=#ff0000]"Perhaps your majesty has heard of [/colour][colour=#ff0000]Fierce Depart, the First Husband of Princess Luna?"[/colour]
  3. NeoExlucky
    [colour=#696969]"What did they mean? Did the mean the Sentinels? That can't be right I can't be an Alicorn. Maybe they meant the dead but why would they say that of all things? I know we can change time it's just a matter of magic. We also have the guardians but how does that make any sense. I have no clue what you would be and the only thing I could be is Time, which Sol and Equi already have...what could it mean?" [/colour][colour=#000000]Time asked thinking way too much out loud. [/colour][colour=#ff0000]"Perhaps you need to think about it, instead of talking about it. None of it even matters. I just need two more..." [/colour] [colour=#696969]"What was that Deity?" [/colour] [colour=#ff0000]"Your thinking out loud![/colour]
  4. NeoExlucky
    [colour=#696969]"Well it's different seeing them in the afterlife. It was better when I was a teenager seeing them. We...were a bit happier then being in the afterlife." [/colour][colour=#000000]Time sighed sadly then focused his attention back to Spitfire. [/colour][colour=#696969]"Did you see the World? Did you hear what they said too!?"[/colour]
  5. NeoExlucky
    Time smiled at the work he had done. [colour=#000000]He gave a look to Spitfire that was a bit concerned. [/colour][colour=#696969]"Spitfire...did you see... the thing too? The...world?" [/colour][colour=#000000]He helped her onto her hooves.[/colour] [colour=#000000](Time's mind.)[/colour] [colour=#000000]The clock ticked very loudly as the two ponies stood there. One was the demon Deity and the other was Time Spinner himself. [/colour][colour=#696969]"You helped us?"[/colour] [colour=#FF0000]"It seems that I did."[/colour] [colour=#696969]"Your not so bad after all."[/colour] [colour=#ff0000]"Just a fallen hero. Willing to sacrifice, Redeem, or to heal. Now all I am is the demon trying to be freed."[/colour] [colour=#000000]Everything clicked inside of Time's head. His eyes widened and he knew everything for a brief moment. [/colour][colour=#696969]"The oath...you just gave off the oath."[/colour] [colour=#FF0000]"Yes I did."[/colour] [colour=#696969]"You weren't there...your just the thing in my head. How did you hear the oath?" [/colour] [colour=#FF0000]"Back in my younger years I heard [/colour][colour=#FF0000]it all the time. The legacy mentioned the 13 lights and 13 darknesses. They assumed that 3 were those."[/colour] [colour=#696969]"Slow down, what are you saying?" [/colour] [colour=#ff0000]"The life of a sentinel is hard."[/colour] [colour=#000000]Time was shocked. Deity was a Sentinel? [/colour][colour=#696969]"Your a Unicorn. You mentioned magic before you became a Demon!"[/colour] [colour=#FF0000]"Did you ever wonder why Luna was attached to you? Why she mentioned a wicked Husband? Where Dawn and Sundial's father was? He was right here. All in your mind."[/colour] [colour=#696969]"You were an alicorn."[/colour] [colour=#FF0000]"Alicorn means Harmonious ruler. I was a Torn, a corrupted Alicorn. Think Chrysalis[/colour][colour=#FF0000] but I never got a redemption. I realized I was Doomed and soon I became a Demon."[/colour]
  6. NeoExlucky
    Time was dazed for a second as Shimmer approached him. [colour=#696969]"Solstice and Equinox Helped me. She should be fine...I hope." [/colour][colour=#000000]What did they mean? Members of the dead, Sentinels, or of...whatever they were? Guardians of Death maybe?[/colour] [colour=#000000](Whoops! It's changed.)[/colour]
  7. NeoExlucky
    [colour=#696969]"Alright, here we go." [/colour][colour=#000000]The clock disappeared and the two of them had entered a room of darkness. They moved backwards from the light of Caelum. The two were pulled into an odd, dark version of the world. No pony was around them, the sky was red and a solar eclipse lit the sky and the Buidlings were destroyed. (Foreshadowing!) In a another flash Spitfire was brought back to consciousnesses and Time stumbled around. He felt light headed and weak. [/colour][colour=#696969]"Let's not..." [/colour][colour=#000000]He said as he fell to the ground and his armor made a metallic clashing sound and disappeared. [/colour][colour=#696969]"...Ow..."[/colour]
  8. NeoExlucky
    Time cast an aura like spell over Himself and Spitfire. Their body's started to fade.out of the spirit world as his horn started to grow hotter then normal. He felt themselves start to pull out of this world. A magical clock appeared on the ground under Time, Equinox, Solstice, and Spitfire. [colour=#696969]"We're almost done Spitfire. Now might be the time for goodbyes."[/colour]
  9. NeoExlucky
    (Well, Time was in the rebellion. Let's say they have met before! ) Time's eyes widened as he saw the two other ponies. [colour=#696969]"Solstice, Equinox, your both here?" [/colour][colour=#000000]He heard thei[/colour][colour=#000000]r offer. He didn't know what to say, but the clarions trusted the raptors. Seasona of time and Time's mother, Blaze Bolero of Fire would have wanted this. In fact...could Time see the Orange and Red Mare in the Hall? Time needed to hurry. It would only seem fit for them to work together. [/colour][colour=#696969]"This would be greatly appreciated."[/colour] [colour=#000000](Clarions were Unicorns with power, Sentinals were Pegasi with Power. Therefore they are allies!)[/colour]
  10. NeoExlucky
    [colour=#696969]"Carmus is holding me back from dying. Along with Liesha and Deity. I can give you more time. I can bring you back to life." [/colour][colour=#000000]He said with his calm voice. He looked to Flashbomb. [/colour][colour=#696969]"It is a joy to see you again as well, my friend."[/colour]
  11. NeoExlucky
    Time felt liesha's magic surround him as he pulled out the element buried deep inside her. The world around Time was changing as he pulled a small red orb outside of Deity and small blue one out of Carmus. He next added the orbs to the element he found causing a large swirl of astonishing purple to surround him. He started to falter a bit as the magic was too strong but took a deep breath as his magic stabilized again. He felt his powers start to increase as his body flashed and glimmered. His body now in ethereal purple armor that seemed to give off a calming aura as Time continued on with his plan. Everything was in place and soon the world around him faded as he sat in a darkened room that was lit by a solar eclipse above. He saw the body of Spitfire and the shape of Carmus and Deity behind him. The floor filled with light and revealed a large clock Time, Deity, and Carmus were in the center but every number was different. 12 was Celestia, 11 was Liesha, 10 was Flashbomb, 9 was Shimmer, 8 was Velocity, 7 was Gadget, 6 was Luna, 5 was Cloud, 4 was Horizon, 3 was Twilight, 2 was Rainbow Dash, and 1 was Soarin. Time felt a large amount of pain as he got rid of each and every one of the images and replaced with the numbers they were supposed to be, to make sure no power was drawn from them. He felt the hands of the clock that almost ticked upon 12 be turned back, he pushed them back as much as possible, to about where the 7 was. He let go and the hands were now set in motion, he pushed himself forwarded and now required the balance element. Everything darkened as Time approached Liesha, or a form of her. He felt long string be tied upon him and then he moved forward. Past Liesha and towards a never ending darkness. He felt tired when a shadowed version of Lyria appeared in front of him. [colour=#ffa500]"You cannot save her!" [/colour]He tried to take a step forward but felt nothing as he suddenly fell through an unwelcoming Darkness and landed upon a glass floor which shattered under his weight and made him feel warm and comforted. He opened his eyes as he was now in a lovely place he could only imagine was Caelum. He saw spitfire and several others, including Flashbomb, velocity and the real lyria. [colour=#696969]"Hello everybody." [/colour][colour=#000000]His voice sounded calmer then normal and a bit more ancient.[/colour] [colour=#000000]In the real world, all they could see was a purple aura surrounding Carmus, Liesha, and an empty spot that could only be assumed as Diety. In fact some may have been able to see a transparent version of the Demon Pony. Time Spinner stood in the middle and wore his purple and gold armor. His horn was brightly lit a silver colour that led to Spitfire and made her look different.[/colour]
  12. NeoExlucky
    [colour=#696969]"Healing and adding time are two different things, candy cake. It wouldn't work." [/colour][colour=#000000]He looked at Leisha. [/colour][colour=#696969]"That's the thing Liesha, I just need the necklace after which I can attach it to a host...or, I could use the element of balance." [/colour][colour=#000000]He gasped as he said the last part. [/colour][colour=#696969]"Liesha, I need you to be the host for balance! That means I need two opposites, we have magic, royalty, soldiers, hatred, love...wait Carmus loved Spitfire! Deity would you be able to work off of that?" [/colour][colour=#000000]Diety looked Time straight in his eyes. [/colour][colour=#ff0000]"I may." [/colour][colour=#000000]Time looked back to the body. [/colour][colour=#696969]​"Deity stand to the left of Spitfire. Carmus stand to the right, when they are ready Liesha I need you to shoot me with magic. That should act as both the catalyst and as the equilibrium, with that I should be able to kick start a Time spell and bring Spitfire back." [/colour][colour=#000000]He turned back to Shimmer for a second. [/colour][colour=#696969]"Shimmer...I love you." [/colour][colour=#000000]He made the precaution as he knew what the effect would do but not what the backlash was.[/colour]
  13. NeoExlucky
    Time looked to Twilight, his eyes glimmered in as he heard what twilight said. [colour=#696969]"You forget one thing, [/colour][colour=#ff0000]your majesty." [/colour][colour=#000000]Time shook his head as he regained his composure. [/colour][colour=#696969]"She lost her time, she only has a few minutes left. Time can be taken and reduced as long as we have a Time Unicorn at the peak of his powers. I...I might be able to go into overdrive and save her if I can do that...the risk is small, I'm not even sure if we can but...I just might be able to. There is one problem with it though. I don't have everything I need. I need a large burst of magical energy to be able to shoot me into my limits, I won't be able to do it on my own." [/colour][colour=#000000]He looked to Deity who gave a small nod. [/colour][colour=#696969]"And I'll need..." [/colour][colour=#000000]Time knew this would be hard but he had to come out and say it to save Spitfire. [/colour][colour=#696969]"I'll need a fallen artifact of power. The only two I know of is my pocket watch and...the element of Kindness. Those are the main components."[/colour]
  14. NeoExlucky
    Time felt the pain all to quickly it was much worse than when he stopped time, which felt like the bottom of his spine was tingling. This was much worse, it felt like his horn was being cracked and his mind was being destroyed. His vision blurred for a few seconds and came back to him. He held his grip on Shimmer tighter as the feeling continued and the pain intensified. Deity glared at the gem and soon Spitfire moved forward. [colour=#696969]"Ms...fire..." [/colour][colour=#000000]He said as the pain worsened. He took a few steps back as the pain continued and as it ended he looked to Spitfire who fell to the ground. He let go of Shimmer and moved towards Spitfire. He flip her onto her back and quickly did an examination. Her main body functions had just stopped. This caused time to try and find the source. His horn lit up as he checked her body. The source seemed to come from her stomach of all places. It was her time, she had lost a lot.[/colour]
  15. NeoExlucky
    Time looked at the gem in disgust. Just how much Time did he have left? Eventually the time he skipped would come back to him. If his theories were correct, his life span is shortened when he uses Time magic and when time is affects him. 2000 years is a long time, the kickback would be very rough. He felt deity try to jump out of his throat but he kept him contained. Deity took a shape to his left. (Can only be seen by Time, ghosts and alicorns. Everyone can see Time talk to the air though.) [colour=#696969]"What is your problem." [/colour][colour=#FF0000]"She is my Problem!" [/colour][colour=#696969]"I know we don't like her but you could have contained yourself!" [/colour][colour=#ff0000]"That was all you, I just saw an opportunity." [/colour][colour=#696969]"Your not exactly innocent there. I didn't want to go that far!" [/colour][colour=#ff0000]"Well we did!" [/colour][colour=#696969]"Why can't you just behave?" [/colour][colour=#ff0000]"Asking a fallen Royal knight turned into a Demon to behave is like asking a royal to not ask for Tea and scones, like asking a pegasus to not fly, like asking a murderer to not kill. It does nothing!"[/colour]
  16. NeoExlucky
    [colour=#000000]Time was fueled by anger, making deity smile at the thought of fresh blood. [/colour][colour=#ff0000]"How dare you speak to an ancient of Power like that!?! In one spell I could end your miserable existence! I believe you were made a princess because you were so Perfect! Because you displayed all the qualities of Harmony! Is mercy and truth not considered part of that? Royalty can never be Trusted! First Discord, then Sombra, then Leisha, it's all the same with all of you! Each and ever-" [/colour][colour=#000000]Deity looked to the pony who put her hoof onto his shoulder. His cold, dead, pure white eyes started into Shimmer's warm ones and in an instant, Time returned to control and appearance, his eyes staying on Shimmer. His normal Blue and intelligent eyes returned and had a very apologetic look to them. Not to Twilight but to Shimmer. [/colour][colour=#696969]"I'm sorry..."[/colour]
  17. NeoExlucky
    [colour=#000000](Teleporting Time to the front of the crowd...)[/colour] [colour=#696969]"Your a fool Twilight Sparkle! You always have been and you always will be!" [/colour][colour=#000000]Time yelled in anger. [/colour][colour=#696969]"Why won't your little precious [/colour][colour=#ff0000]Elements of Harmony protect us?" [/colour][colour=#000000]Time, for just a split second looked exactly like Deity but quickly it subsided. [/colour][colour=#696969]"This Gem might even be a lie, this Gem [/colour][colour=#ff0000]may even call upon evil [/colour][colour=#696969]instead of deflect it. [/colour][colour=#ff0000]Why should we trust [/colour][colour=#696969]you?"[/colour] [colour=#000000](I'm going to go off on a limb and say that since he proposed already, Shimmer's family, rainbow dash, spitfire, and any pony who has seen Time change knows who Deity is and what sparks him. So Angel, Leisha, Celestia, anyponies I'm forgetting.)[/colour] (EDIT: Also remember that unless Time lets him, he can't take over. No Pocket Watch.)
  18. NeoExlucky
    *Shocked face* I knew that...*Goes to edit everything*
  19. NeoExlucky
    One thing that I do love about wiki pages is that you can really flesh out a character. I learned this a while ago after Neo had joined the Sonic fannon wiki and started working on characters in that universe. As well as serious character development but we may talk about that later. While the Character Apps that Canterlot has for us are good, I just feel like it's missing something but I can't figure out what...Anyways I fell in love with how it worked and all the lights, sparkles, the razzle dazzle, all that kind of Jazz. So here we go...I made myself a wiki page! Over on the My Little Pony wiki, which also has RolePlays, (Canterlot implements them better!) I made the Time Spinner page. This is for anyone who wants to know the exact moments of me! However when Neo sorts the RolePlays he sometimes has the backstory changed a bit. Here's the link! http://friendshipism...ki/Time_Spinner I have several things here that should be mentioned. Such as the legacy timeline consisting of the Academy series, Hearts and hooves day, and some other roleplays. As well as my Cutie Mark which the drawing was credited to Frosty137 so I think I have everything in order. My theme song: Live and Learn by Crush 40 is also there and my connection to the lyrics. Anyways this was just something I wanted to share. Carry on with your day citizens of Canterlot.com! Sincerely, Time Spinner
  20. NeoExlucky
    Time smiled at the band. [colour=#696969]"It's very nice." [/colour][colour=#000000]He looked at[/colour] [colour=#000000]the happy couple. [/colour][colour=#696969]"I heard Soarin was gonna propose to dashie, you two know if it's true?"[/colour]
  21. NeoExlucky
    Time smiled. [colour=#696969]"Thank you, carmus...So how did your little plan go?" [/colour][colour=#000000]Time smile turned into a sly one. [/colour][colour=#696969]"I heard about your proposal plan to spitfire."[/colour]
  22. NeoExlucky
    [colour=#696969]"Well...Shimmer and I have been dating for a while and...I was wondering if I could have your blessing to propose to her." [/colour][colour=#000000]Time said sitting at the table and sipping at his coffee.[/colour]
  23. NeoExlucky
    Time looked around the room at the ponies around him. He noticed the buffet and took some hay fries along with a very welcoming, warm, cup of coffee. He downed the cup and looked at the ponies around him. He made a realization about carmus...he never asked for his blessing! Normally it was her father but Carmus seemed to have that spot for Shimmer. He got up and approached Carmus, Rainbow dash, Soarin, and Spitfire. [colour=#696969]"Ummm, Carmus?" [/colour][colour=#000000]Since Shimmer wasn't going to tell him for a bit he might as well ask permission now. Better late then ever. [/colour][colour=#696969]"Can I ask you something?" [/colour][colour=#000000]He was going to ask in private but...why not. He wasn't ashamed and besides, it was just them.[/colour]
  24. NeoExlucky
    Time walked in with Shimmer on his arm. [colour=#696969]"Well, this is the place, Candy Cake." [/colour][colour=#000000]He said calling her by her pet name. The room looked spectacular and Time noticed pinkie pie was here, wait...would twilight be here? He hoped not, it could get bad.[/colour]
  25. NeoExlucky
    (That works! But i'm tired, so it's bed time.)
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