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    Sundial

    By NeoExlucky,

    I said I wouldn't do it...
    I said I dislike Alicorn OC's...
    I said that I Time was a terrible Alicorn OC...
    I've done something Terrible.
    Okay so maybe it's not that bad but I did it. I made an Alicorn OC and I made her in a way that isn't too bad but is still kind of bad. She not only is the romantic interest to Gadget but is also Time Spinner's archrival. Due to this the Two HATE each other and for good reason.
    In Time's backstory he was promised by Luna that he would become a prince after Celestia and her took over. So in this way, He would become the Alicorn of Time control, However he was thrown to the future. (The day before the season 1 premiere to be exact.) Due to this anotehr pony would have to step up to hold Time together and cause all Time travelers to exist. Time traveling ponies are small in number though and in the legacy story, (My official Timeline of my OC's and holding the main story of MLP true as best as possible. I will release it soon.) In the Legacy story there is Time Spinner, Doctor Whooves, and Sundial. (That have been met.)
    Gadget can't ever remember his past and that's because Time took his memories with his time loop. However Gadget was romantically involved with Sundial and as a result she is looking for him. Now onto her. She became an Alicorn a few years after the diarchy began.
    Here is her as an application.
    Name: Sundial
    Age: Young Mare
    Species: Alicorn
    Cutie mark: A Sundial.
    Sundial got her cutie mark after discovering her ability to control Time.
    Backstory: After find out her gift, Sundial learned her powers should be used for good, and she often did just that. At one point in her life she was approached by Princess Celestia and was turned into an alicorn for her power to control time. She kept track of it and cared for it. Eventually she came into a battle before Nightmare moon took over Luna and was erased from history for 300 years. Afterwards she grew up along with Celestia teaching her what happened in her absence and discovering a few things about Luna and Celestia's past. As she grew older she met and Pegasus named Gadget and fell in love with him. Later in their life though something happend. Gadget disappeared from Time itself. Nopony but the alicorns and a soon met fellow Time traveler with a brown coat knew who he was at all. Now she hunts for him, trying to find a lover and wanting to destroy the pony who cause this to happen to her lover.
    and her looks:

    Anyways's Happy Friday!
  2. NeoExlucky
    Look before you sleep is an interesting episode That I really love. This episode is very close to being one of my favorites but it doesn't make it for certain reasons but let's cut to the chase.
    So let's get the little things out of the way. The writing in the episode is very well done as is the animation. The moral was one that children should learn as well. Now on to Character development. Applejack and Rarity act the way I think they should act in this episode. I love their fights and I love their comments to each other. My favorite line being 'Why can't you get an education for a minute!' I really think that they were portrayed well. Then theirs the other characters...yes Plural. WHERE IS SPIKE IN THE ENTIRE EPISODE!?! We know he lives with Twilight so why isn't he in the episode? He would have added a few seriously good points and comments to the overall episode that I feel like he was needed. Worse part of it is that wee don't even get an explanation as too where he is. Then there's Twilight. Why did she want a sleep over, which would need friends yet she never wanted friends? I never really understood this part of the episode. Twilight also doesn't really act like herself here. Despite this I do like the episode and I give it a B. This has been Neo reviews. Thanks for reading.
  3. NeoExlucky
    So...Dragonshy...I truly have no opinion on this episode at all. It teaches a lesson that Nopony ever actually cares about, the Dragon looked decent, the writing was just meh, and the song doesn't really do anything to me. This episode offered nothing positive or negative to me.
    Okay so now details. The lesson doesn't affect any of the mane 6 ever. Fluttershy goes back to being normal and doesn't stand up to anypony until Iron will shows up in season 2. Dragons don't cause any problems until late season 2 either. I also question what the lesson was. Was it about not losing faith in friends or was it about being bigger means being more considerate? We never really see anything to good here. The dragon here wasn't what I was expecting. The dragon did look really good but here is a question, "Why didn't it speak in the first place?". Also why the ponies didn't just try to copy Fluttershy and maybe not attack the dragon. This is literally the only episode where all the characters are unappealing to me. So I guess there is a slightly big negative here. The writing here doesn't seem to spark anything truly good. It isn't anything that I would remember. The song here is okay, defiantly not something I would listen to while working on something. This episode is quite sad considering I really like the next two episodes but that's for later. This has been Neo reviews. Thanks for reading.
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    This episode is one I really enjoy. The relationship between Trixie and the mane 6- Oh I'm sorry I mean Dashie, Rarity, applejack, and Twilight. Pinkie's there but she really doesn't do anything too memorable and I don't even recall Fluttershy being there, is well played and this episode's message is good. Though I can't tell if it's don't lie or don't show off. Anyways let me go into detail here like I normally do.
    The animation for the magic is really good and I love the way the ursa minor looks. This is what truly added to the way the episode looks and feels. Trixie and Twilight both are really good here. The other characters do add to this and make it really good. We also see that Big mac isn't the only guy with a speaking role here, which is snips and snails but they are just so Idiotic! Anyway the dialogue is good except for the ending where Twilight asks spike if she should give them mustaches. I don't understand why she would do that but I gave up trying to figure that out a while ago. Trixie is an interesting character and I truly wish she appeared in more episodes besides this and magic duel. She really could have added to a few of the episodes and would have made a great enemy for Twilight when they aren't doing premieres/ finales. It also would have added a lot more to magic duel's ending as we would finally see the ending of the rivalry. Trixie is a character who I love to hate and yet I hate to love at the same time. This episode also made me like Twilight a lot more as well as start liking Rarity for a bit until her hair turned green. (Green's my favorite colour.) Character development here really only shows how powerful Twilight is with magic and why she is the element of magic. That also should have been said in the episode, but then again having an episode with Twilight just saying 'Hi there! My name is Twilight Sparkle, element of magic and the destroyer of Nightmare moon, who are you?' wouldn't really have a good message to the kids. I also wonder why everypony else was so into the magic Trixie did. I also do have a question though. What is Trixie's talent? The moons don't really tell us anything and I don't think they would represent being a show-off or being a traveling performer. The only other time we've seen a moon cutie mark was with Luna. We haven't really see another Star cutie mark so what if the moon actually is a magic Cutie mark and That Trixie earned while doing magic but thought it was about some type of special effects as she was setting those off with here magic? I just really want to know what Trixie is talented at. Anyways this episode is still really fun to watch and I truly enjoy how everything looks. This episode also causes me to wish another character would make more appearances so that's a great thing. I give the episode a B+. It's a good episode but I feel like they wasted a bit of potential with Trixie as a character. This has been Neo reviews. Thanks for watching.
  5. NeoExlucky
    Griffion the brush-off is a good episode to me. Not only does it show some of the bonds our friends have made, (In this case pinkie and Dashie.) but it also has some good humor to it and some fairly good writing.
    So let's start with the episode as a whole. I would give it about a B. Like last episode the animation is good but nothing to special. We are introduced to yet another creature in the world of Equestrian, that being the griffion. This episode also shows us a few other things such as Rainbow's love for pranks which we see again in luna eclipsed. Pinkie pie is just being Pinkie pie here and part of me wishes she didn't act like that here but I digress. Rainbow acts the way I think she would have acted which is good and the whole moral here is something that I think would happen to some kids. I'd also like to point out the way Gilda acts in this episode is something I would have loved to see Babs act in one bad apple but I guess we'll cross that bridge when we get there. On another note this is the episode where Fluttershy becomes my favorite, even though she isn't even part of the episode. When Gilda starts yelling at her, that really reminded me of when I was bullied in elementary school, which somehow ended up with Fluttershy becoming a favorite of mine. Plus her adorableness that makes my heart explode twice adds to this. Another thing that might be interesting is if they brought Gilda back in season 4. They brought Trixie back and made her a friend but I think if we got Gilda back it might be a bit interesting. The only real problem I ever have here is the animation not being too spectacular and one other little thing, the party. Why was the party there at all? I know it's pinkie pie but why would she throw a party for Gilda when she was being mean to her and Fluttershy? I know it was to end the episode but maybe it could have ended in a different place without the party. The episode overall is a watch as I feel like the episode is missing something that future episodes had. I defiantly wouldn't put this in a list of favorite but it's not a bad episode. This has been Neo reviews, thanks for reading.
  6. NeoExlucky
    (Waring you are about to read a post written by the pony; Time Spinner. This is important! XD)
    Huh it's been a while. Sorry guys, Neo's been wanting my help with the reviews and then we got sidetracked into another Dimension and it was just really weird. Anyways I'm here to talk about Equestria girls. Now what do I think might happen here? Well I think it might be a good thing. Let me explain.
    Equestria girls is basically the girls as humans in an earth-like or maybe even actual earth setting. Now this could go a multitude of ways. It could be just the characters if Equestria was full of humans, or it could be the mane 6 get sent to earth. (My Favorite being the latter.) If it is the second one this could be a very good show and indeed might be an addition to bronies. However even if the first option is chosen it could still be really good. Imagine Lyra as a human 0.0. This might be a good show. The show itself might be something that the brony community could survive on if the real show ever dies. (Hopefully it doesn't or I die too then. D:) I personally would like to see the girls come join the fun here on earth as I think it could be really fun. While it does seem to have the look of some type of fanfic or perhaps something of that sort I've read really good fanfics before. (Of course none of the good ones were written by Neo.) I know Neo and I are going to give it a chance as it might work upon building the characters a bit more than the main show does. The characters Kind of look cool and maybe the picture used as the Entry image is just beta for other things. I have seen the other picture and I noticed Unicorns don't have horns but the pegasi and alicorn have wings. This is a bit interesting but I wonder if they will have either hide the wings or if all humans have wings in this series. The show will be interesting and I would recommend you to watch the first episode. I mean all of you watched a show made for little girls and now you're all here. (This goes for you too Neo!)
    Anyway Let me check the internet for anything I have missed. Let's see friendship is witchcraft, marshal lee, legend of korra, and...DOUBLE RAINBOOM! Sorry I have to go.


    Sincerely,



    Time Spinner

  7. NeoExlucky

    Mlp season 1 Ep 4

    By NeoExlucky,

    Huh it's been awhile...alright let's get to it.
    (Warning short review!)
    So Applebuck season...ugh. This episode really feels like a filler to me. Already I have started to dislike her but this episode made me dislike her more. First of all, Applejack's claim of the loyalist of friends...Isn't that Dashie? I mean that's why Rainbow has the element of loyalty and Applejack has Honesty, right? Anyway the episode was really too bland for my taste. It only really told us about Applejack and how she can bite off more than she can chew. The Characters have moments where they don't really act like themselves like when Applejack is baking and Pinkie Pie isn't watching her at all. The humor here wasn't really all that good except when applejack tries to do the catapult with Rainbow. That scene kills me everytime. Further more, the writing here wasn't all that good and this may be my least favorite episode. If you wanted somepone to watch Mlp tell them to skip this episode because honestly this really does nothing to further any true character development. While the concept of the episode was good I think it might of just been the execution that threw it off. Also Big mac talking the way he does in the beginning is really weird to watch now. A lot of people actually like this episode which really surprises me. If anyone can tell me why in the comments below that would be really helpful considering I've rewatched the episode several times and so far I've still go the same reaction to everything. My last thing I do want to say as this review is kind of short is why more Unicorns aren't harvesting fruit. I mean did you see Twilight near the ending, she got the fruit from like ten trees at once. Overall the story was good, The writing was mediocre, Character development was alright for some and kind of bad for others and The humor here really isn't all that good, except for the falling...that's funny. This has been Neo reviews, thanks for Reading!
  8. NeoExlucky
    This episode was great to start in the first few episodes. Mainly because the grand galloping gala was the season finale here. The episode in general was okay, though it did have a few problems here and there. Before we get on with this though I would like to point out the episode came out on April the 21st. Why does that matter? When spike reads the letter for the gala it says that it will happen on the 21st of some date. Just thought I'd share that.
    Okay, so the reasonings. For applejack, the barn looked fine in the first episode and it looks fine in the fourth episode. Why does it need repairs? We don't see the plow until winter wrap and it looks fine there but truly we can't say anything about it's condition at the moment. Granny smith's hip bone...I got nothing. Rainbow dash interrupting the wonderbolts show would probably get her banned from going to any other show...just saying. Pinkie pie wants to party...okay. Rarity wants to meet prince blueblood. While we're here let's talk about that for a second. Who is the mother of blueblood? Can't be luna, and there's no other alicorns at this t-...wait, Cadence? Uh...actually I don't want to think about that...lets move on. Fluttershy wants to see the gardens. So who do I think should have gone? Spike. I like Spike. That's it.
    Also I'd like to point out a Disney princess reference with Fluttershy. She was singing with animals while cleaning. That seems to be a trademark of Disney characters but that's just my opinion. Anyways it should be noted that at this moment the only character I liked was Twilight and Spike. The others seemed well there. I didn't really have an opinion here until this episode. First Pinkie pie and her songs. Giggle at the ghosties was good but both of the songs here are just annoying. I think this was where I started to dislike Pinkie Pie but that'll change in future episodes. Then there's applejack's line here: "Ain't that just like a boy. Can't take the least bit of sentiment." While this line is sexist and doesn't seem to fit here that's not the reason that made me dislike her and this line. It was the beginning of the episode. Applejack has clearly seen spike burp up a letter already so while did she confuse that with his 'just like every other boy' moment. This really makes me wonder about her and it's due to this that I dislike her and that wouldn't change till apple family reunion where I only tolerate her then. The other characters are just there still.
    Overall the idea to the episode was good and I'm pretty sure Celestia was either being a troll here or was wanting to give Twilight a friendship lesson. The idea was good and this episode and art of the dress both show that they are preparing for the grand galloping gala. I'd like to see some more episodes of them preparing for it but that's out of the question now. The episode isn't my favorite though but what that reason is I can't say why. Maybe it's because of how trivial it is or something. I don't know. Anyways the episode is a must watch only because of the season finale and art of the dress. There are a bit of questions here and there but overall this episode is good with me on some days. This has been Neo reviews, Thanks for reading.
  9. NeoExlucky
    If you don't like to read but want to see my review, you can check out my video of it here: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1i0dgbpEktc
    History ladies and gentlecolts. This is what we have here. I might be a bit biased when it comes to this episode because of how much it changed my life but here we go. I love this episode. If not for the plot then for the characters as a whole. The animation looks good, the voice acting is great, and the writing is good. This is a nice episode that I'm sure almost every brony/pegasister loves. I am no exception. There are a few things I do find a few things that seem to be problems. For one, applejack. When Applejack told Twilight she was going to let go, to be exact. That isn't honesty and I don't know why Twilight would consider it that. I feel that is more trust than honesty but that's not the point. Why wouldn't applejack just tell her that rainbow dash and fluttershy were going to catch her? It would still be honesty on her part. It should also be noted that at this time the only pony I liked was Twilight. I feel like this episode also makes some of the characters seem stupid. When Rainbow cleared the clouds, how could she not tell Twilight was playing with her pride? Seriously my little sister who's three know that was happening. Luckily later on down the road RD doesn't seem so stupid. Also pinkie pie for the entire episode seems high. Rarity seems...I don't know. All I know is that I didn't start to like her till a dog and pony show. Fluttershy really doesn't do anything that makes me start to like her a lot as well as Applejack. There is also no subtly here! When Twilight reads off the elements of harmony they show each pony corresponding elements. Not to mention each pony practically says their element while in the forest. All I want is a bit of subtly here. *Goes off and cries in the corner for 15 minutes.* Anyways I still love the episodes and they are one of my favorite episodes of the entire series. This has been Neo Reviews...thanks for reading.
  10. NeoExlucky
    I know a lot of people have done this but I think I'm going to do this. There are moments of boredom I have and I really want to rewatch the entire show so...why not? I don't know. Expect the review of episode 1+2 season 1 of Mlp possibly tomorrow. Not much else to say...Waffles.
  11. NeoExlucky

    Theory on Alicorns

    By NeoExlucky,

    (You are about to read a blog written by the pony; Time Spinner. This is Important. XD)
    As many of you know I stand against alicorn OC's as many of them are so super overpowered. Now while this is true, could anypony become an alicorn? Well...that might be true. So I;ve been reading a few things about alicorns and a few new things did show p. For example Cadence became an Alicorn a lot like Twilight did except with love instead of friendship and Cadence used to be a pegasus. Well this has taught me that one could become an alicorn just by learning about a specfic thing and perhaps having to be watched by one of the princesses. Now would this mean a Unicorn with Oh I don't know...the ability to control Time be able to become an alicorn. I HATE THAT! Why would that make any sense. I could see Twilight being the first unicorn becoming and Alicorn but Cadence used to be a pegasus? Actaully...I don't doubt that. Some of that does make a bit of sense for Equestria standards. Not to mention I've done some crazy things I shouldn't be able to do so here is a theory I want to think about.
    Can A pony become an alicorn because they know a lot about something? So...I could become an Alicorn, since I know how to manipulate Time. I mean I wouldn't but could like an Earth pony could become an Alicorn because they know a lot about like...justice? I don't know, I think they might as long as one of the current alicorns could become an alicorn. I also wonder if Celestia and Luna were born alicorns or if they were some other species? That's all I've got for now...I'll probably come back to this after Neo and I learn more about the Alicorns so yeah.
    Don't forget to app into a kingdom hearts crossover that is actually part of My backstory right here; http://www.canterlot...interest-check/
    (Also can anypony tell Neo how to make a character log? He's being stupid...)


    Sincerely,



    Time Sinner

  12. NeoExlucky
    (Warning you are about to read a post written by a pony named Time Spinner. This is Important. XD)
    Okay so it's safe to say that hasbro has had some disappointing moments in the history of Mlp. I don't want to do this after the show is over because if that happens I might be dead so...that's disappointing...anyways, We're going to talk about a few that strike out to me the most. So let's start.
    Derpy- Sigh...as a pony it's really hard to see another pony fall into such problems. Derpy was truly a sad moment for the bronies and I remember the Neo being kind of angry and sad at the same time when she didn't show up in an episode. This also happened after the voice change and censorship. Derpy was a great character and I side with pro-derpy side on this. In what way was derpy offensive? I know that some descriptions say that it says something else but Derpy always meant to me the mistakes and times we messed up and the moment when you just smile and say 'I'll try again tomorrow.' I know that's been said but It's kinda true for me.
    Crystal empire/Cadence: On the plus side, we got shining armor and we got some great songs. (Favorite is failure song and this day aria.) On the down side, we get this kingdom noponies heard of, The OC of sauron, and we got cadence. While Cadence is okay the one question in my mind is why? We have Celestia who raises the sun and Luna who raises the moon so what does cadence actually do? I like Cadence but I think we could have gone into more detail with her...Maybe tell us she controls love or something. I don't know, I'm just a unicorn. Either way I think Cadence needs a bit more work as would Sombra if he wasn't dead...I think.
    Ali Twi: For so long Bronies either hated the concept, loved it, or didn't care. What did I think? I was on the fence. On the one hoof this could lead to a few cool episodes like maybe Rainbow dash teaching Twi how to fly. (Dang you ending scene in mlp!) Possibly even some episodes of making Time for friends. You can tell Cadence was for the pink celestia's but what about Alicorn Twilight? I've yet to figure out if this was lauren faust's plan or if it was hasbros...Neo is rewatching the series and will probably do some type of review or whatever somewhere else but as far as we've seen in season 1 it looks like things she would need to know in order to become a princess but...I'm kind of confused...Let's move on.
    Fighting is magic: WHAT THE HAY HASBRO! THIS WOULD HAVE BEEN A GREAT GAME AND YOU GO AND CANCEL IT! WHY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    ahem. Anyways I'm a little upset at this. The game would have been great and the music and demos looked amazing. I would have loved to beat Neo at this. Many other bronies have acted like this and a few have acted like it was nothing but...I want it. I really liked it's ma- oh wait nevermind. Anyway We should change the subject before I explode.
    Overall Hasbro could Have turned out worse and Some of their decisions made Mlp better...right? Nothing too bad happened...Except maybe Alitwi...and FIGHTING IS MAGIC. RAHHHHHHHHHHHHH! oh and derpy...


    Sincerly,



    Time Spinner

  13. NeoExlucky
    I'm pretty sad today. I was all fine earlier but then I was watching a video on youtube and one of the links in the description made me all depressed.
    http://mareodomo.com/index.php?/comics/letters-to-an-absent-father/
    As Time has said I am an avid gamer and pokemon was one of the first games I played. After reading these I got seriously depressed and started crying. Mostly because both Ash grew up without a father and I had a few of these moments with both of my parents. The one where he yells at his mum in front of his friends really got me because I did the same thing to my mum when she said she was dating my now stepfather. They are really good and they all made me remember moments from my younger years. I'm going to go cry a bit more...


    -NeoExlucky

  14. NeoExlucky
    (Warning: You are about to read something written by the pony; Time Spinner. This is Important. XD)
    So with Neo really bored we have only one option of things to do. Well technically there's a lot of things but this one is our favorite, Gaming. While going around the brony community we have seen a lot of things. A lot of the time Bronies and gaming are connected. While there are other things like Music, animation, and hipsterness, Bronies seem to enjoy gaming a lot. So in this blog today we are going to talk about Gaming, our history of games, and even some games Neo put me in! So let's start with the big three companies, Nintendo, Microsoft, and Sony.
    Sony: I do much with sony. Neo used to love the PS2 and all it's games like Romancing saga, Radiata stories, soul caliber, and Neo's favorites Kingdom hearts 1 and 2. However when push came to shove for the PS3...we didn't buy it. Honestly Neo had an older brother who had an xbox 360 so we really never thought about a PS3. It just wasn't all that appealing until later when Kingdom hearts 1.5 was announced. (That is going to be so awesome We have to buy a PS3 for it...unless it's for PS4.) I never really cared for the PS3 and all it's stuff. I was still waiting on Kingdom hearts, which was released over to Ninendo!
    Nintendo: Mario, Legend of zelda, pokemon, metroid, oh and my childhood. Nintendo started making games just in time for me to play them. Neo still remembers the first time Neo walked into the great deku tree in Ocarina of Time and the first Time he finished a castle in Mario just to get the infamous 'Thanks, but our princess is in another castle.' Nintendo holds plenty of memories that Neo will never forget...but WHAT HAPPENED TO THEM NOW!!!!!!! That is mainly for kingdom hearts. Neo played re: chain of memories but then after My DS broke and Neo said we didn't want another one, boom. All these Kingdom hearts games come out for it. Also while I do enjoy Ocarina of Time 3D, why does anyone need hints? Especially in the original and not in masterquest. Then there a few things here and there but most aren't that bad. Hopefully Neo will get a 3DS and then we can play all those games again. (Neo played Ocarina of Time on his Brothers 3DS.)
    Microsoft: A little tidbit, Neo's first FPS was Halo. We normally play that since we do own an Xbox 360. Borderlands 2, Halo 4, Resident evil, Assassin's creed 3, Sonic generations, and a few others. You may have noticed I didn't say black ops 2, that wasn't a mistake, Neo and I both HATE black ops 2. We'll get into that later though. (We also don't enjoy battlefield.) There really isn't much else I can say about that. I mean I could talk about some of the older games we played like Mirror's edge or Left 4 dead, but there isn't much to talk about.
    Gaming in general: I've been a gamer for most of my life and I always get excited when a new game is announced that looks good. (Still waiting on Dragon age 3. *sigh*) Remakes of my old favorite games also are exciting too, like when new super mario bros. was announced. Overall I'd say I've played my fair share of games and I enjoy plenty of them. I also like pony games as well such as Mlp rpg or the very much anticipated my little investigations. Games just interest me so much! (Though there hard to play with hooves...) Now here's a question what is your favorite game? Oh but look at me sounding like an attention wanting girl on facebook. I guess if you want to talk about games at all you can always message Neo or comment below. Anyway game on Bronies!


    Sincerely,



    Time Spinner

  15. NeoExlucky
    (Warning you are about to read a post written by a pony by the name of Time Spinner. This is Important. XD)
    So in my last entry I told others about sending your apps into world of equestria. Soon I will be in as well. (Though I'm much more snarky.) While that is all find and dandy a thought came to Neo's mind. He said he wanted to tell the origins of the OC's he plays as and to give tips on designing new OC's. While I'm sure other people have done that, Telling you all the origins of myself and my friends will be interesting. So here we go!
    Time Spinner: Hey that's me! Well, where do I begin? I started a very long time ago. I think if I remember correctly it was around a year ago when I was first imagined. Some where from december-march Neo was watching the show and I know it was a few episodes before super speedy cider squeezy 6000. Neo thought it would be a great idea to make a pony version of him. As such he went to the internet to see if he wasn't the only one and sure enough yaplap had shown up on youtube. If you don't know Yaplap is a hilarious brony on youtube and has an OC named solrac. Anyway Neo started writing ideas down and he made me. Except it wasn't me. I started as an alicorn, with the ability to control Time and Space and used magic to hide my wings. Terrible idea right? Luckily Neo came to his senses eventually got rid of the wings and space part, as well as limiting my time magic but still letting me keep it. Then there were differences in backstory and a few other things and eventually I was a mare.It wasn't until later that I went back to being a colt as I was a ponysona for Neo. Eventually Neo found pony generator and drew me there and started to write a fanfic about me that would soon become hated and rewritten and re released twice and rewritten again but not released once. Right around when Neo quit fanficing he found canterlot.com and well here I am.
    Echo forte: If I ever need to have a wingman or a bro by my side, Then it will probably be echo. As seen in the entry pic, Echo is a red Pegasus and is the OC of Neo's best friend. Echo started as being able wonderbolt who quit but that was too awesome so he became a normal Pegasus. Echo actually went through very little changes after that. He will soon appear in a series Neo is starting on youtube along with me and my brother gadget. He will also play a big roll in a soon to be series Neo is starting here on canterlot. (Also expect another blog by him.)
    Gadget Spinner: As I am the ponysona of Neo, Gadget is the ponysona of Neo's brother. Gadget only really exists due to a temporal loop I started with a Time spell that went horribly wrong. Not much to say here except the fact that he is an inventor and used to be called gizmo...That's it.
    Pocket: Pocket watch is the thief of equestria. In her original back-story she is part of a group called the collecters, who steal objects of interest and sell them to a client. She is a master of infiltration and is actually Bi-sexual. (though at first she was a lesbian.) Anyway, Pocket is a rival/romantic interest for me. However she causes me a lot of problems through out the series. She was inspired by a picture of a thief. Not much else to say...
    How to make an OC:
    One of the great things about an OC is the personality. While yes, being powerful and being a genius would be nice, Even I am not a genius and am not too OP. (Though I can be in some cases.) The main thing though is the personality. One of the nice things to do is too base an OC off of a person or even an Item. Neo, Neo's best friend, Neo's brother, and the picture were all inspirations to make the OC's Neo has. Another good idea is to give the OC a set personality or traits. That way if your character goes against these with there own purpose then it will show a lot of pain or growth. Another thing that Neo did with me was he made me rich with detail. Give your character a lot of detail. Make us feel like we could know how it is to hang out with the great and powerful Time Spinner, or the Silent and smart, Echo forte. Your OC can be a lot of things and often times other RPers won't object to it. (Unless your in World of Equestria.) Also it can be really fun to hide references in the backstory of your OC. I am a combination of Samurai jack and the Legend of zelda: Majora's mask. Neo says making an OC is really fun and I would reccomend it to anypony but please no alicorns. If you ever need help with a backstory feel free to message my owner Neoexlucky or even comment below.


    Sincerely,



    Time Spinner

  16. NeoExlucky
    (First of all First post! Second of all while I haven't been an RPer for long I have noticed and learned a few things.)
    (Warning you are about to read a post written as Time Spinner not Neoexlucky. That is important! XD)
    So one of the things that is really common with Bronies and pegasisters is an OC. Yourself or a character you made as a pony. Making an OC can be very easy lately as all you have to do is google a few things and play with the Pony generator then *poof* you have your OC but how do you know if your OC is a good OC. Granted some of the rules about it are obvious like No alicorns or something but there are some things. Your OC/ RP character has to be able to be presented in the world of equestria. How do you do this? Well here in Canterlot all you have to do is submit an application and wait for the Mods to say something. However I have seen some OC's that would make you think' Really'? Now while those were made by a close friend of Mine *cough* Neoexlucky *cough* but I don't want bronies and Pegasisters to learn this. I have noticed that eventually I will probably be hit with the OP hammer as I am pretty powerful. I mean I can stop Time granted it's only for twelve seconds and I can't control it but still I am powerful and will probably end up being re-made again or stay in the FFA/Crossover section for that. If I had to suggest anything to any RPer looking to send in an APP to world of Equestria it would be this. Don't think that it will be approved as soon as it is in. Often times when you send it in, it will need work. Now that's not saying the character is bad mind you and in fact might be great as a main character of His/Her own series but this is My little pony and the mane six are the main characters here. World of Equestria would be like an adventure of normal ponies with normal powers. Just be open to the ideas the mods and helpers give. It's not bad advice and could truly help your character. They might (Hopefully not with me.) Suggest to make a new OC just for WOE. While this is good advice, just submit to the changing of the character if you really like that character. Also unless your character is like the ultimate good guy then their personality should remain the same as I don't see a reason the Mods would object to it. Also a dark background (Which I have. .-.) probably won't fly in the world of equestria. So if your character saw his entire family die in some gory way, your probably going to have to change that. Remember that equestria never has anything too dark. I should also mention to stay out of Time travel. (Leave it to the professionals like Me and doctor whooves.) It gets really confusing and unless your really good at it the reader will be confused. Not to mention that even if your good at it, the mods will probably still say no. (:'|) Truly it is difficult to be accepted into WOE and I would recommend you to have a few posts under your belt. I would say maybe parasprite or 20% cooler. (About 400-500 posts.) That's all I really know. If you have a comments, concerns, questions, or etc. Post them below and Neo will get you favorite Time traveler to answer them. Have a good adventure RPers.


    Sincerely,



    Your favorite Time Traveler: Time Spinner

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