LightningStreak

( I'm just going to hop right on in... if you don't mind )

As she looked through the peephole she saw a white pony with a orangish to yellow mane.Delilah knocked again and Sunrise opened up the door just a crack."Good Morning to you."Delilah smiled at her warmly then handed her a basket full of goods."Today's the day that I moved here so, I decided to give everypony a present, so here you go... and hope you enjoy it... and oh, by the way, my name's Delilah, what's yours?"

"So Angelsnapp... how long have you been in the academy for?" Delilah asked him.

Thunderbolt landed next to AngelSnapp and Delilah."Sorry I had to leave for a short time so abruptly... Flashbomb dropped a packet of cocoa and it hit me, so I flew up and gave it back to him.""That's very nice of you." Delilah warmly smiled then gave him a short,and fast little hug."So..."Thunderbolt said.

As the hot cocoa fell from the sky, it happened to just hit Thunderbolt smack in his face,then it dropped."Hey!" He yelled out angrily then neutralized himself.He looked up and saw Flashbomb flying up to Cloudsdale,"oh, looks like Flashbomb dropped his Cocoa... guess I better go catch up to him and give it back to him,be right back."He pulled down his goggles,prepared his wings and took off,"Just a little faster!" he said to himself.He finally caught up to Flashbomb,"Hey, you sropped your Cocoa." He handed it back to Flashbomb then started back to the Sweets shop.

"Yup." They replied. "So you're low on bits?" Thunderbolt asked with a little hint in his voice.

"Uhh... yeah, and how'd you get all of those?"Delilah pointed at his scars and looked back up at him."Not to be mean of course... just--"Thunderbolt cut her off,"Curiosity... but if you don't want to tell how, that's fine." Thunderbolt nudged Delilah then whispered in her ear,"be nice." "Iam, and stop treating me like a child Thunderbolt, and you're not my dad, so stop,please."Delilah whispered back angrily to him."Okay...sorry for my attitude."He whispered back to her."Anyways..."They both turned back around like nothing ever happened and said that both at the same time.

"No, you didn't interrupt on anything... oh, by the way, hi i'm Thunderbolt,and this is my... my girlfriend Delilah... it's nice to meet you."Thunderbolt looked down at his hooves then back up at Flashbomb."So how are you?"Thunderbolt asked.

"So... want to start heading back to sugarcube corner?" Delilah looked back at the shop then at Thunderbolt."Sure."He replied. They started to head back to the shop when Thunderbolt saw a pony then yelled out 'Hello'.The pony looked around to try to figure out who had yelled out 'Hello', so Thunderbolt waved a hoof in the air to get his attention."Who are you waving at?" Delilah asked him."Him, Angelsnapp, I know him,from the academy, he's a photographer."Thunderbolt informed her.Thunderbolt and Angelsnapp's eyes caught eachother then they started to trott towards eachother."Hi," Thunderbolt said cheerfully,he looked over and saw somepony behind Angelsnapp,"Oh, is this your sister?" He asked.Angelsnapp nodded,and Thunderbolt looked behind the two of them and saw another somepony that he didn't know,but Thunderbolt judged by looks just for the moment and thought in his mind that the pony couldn't be that weird,mean,or strange.

(Okay, and thank you for the advice... how do I resume on th rest of my RP, do I just keep on writing it out, like it's a reply or what? Do I use parentheses in my RP or just when I'm not in role play?And also what are your characters personalitys, how would/do they act?Ex: One is funny,outgoing,and not afraid to take a challenge.what are their personalities, Outgoing,shy,passionate,jumpy,athletic,crazy etc.?)

(Thank you, and my Characters Thunderbolt and Delilah are both wonderbolts, Thunderbolt started at a young age, and Delilah had only been in the academy for a mere couple of weeks.)

(And I like your charcters too, they seem very interesting and your writing is exquisite, you grabbed me on like a fish to bait, and I wanna read more!!! )

So how did I do for a first timer???

As she walked down the road, her orangish-yellow mane swayed in the wind. She met up at the Sweets shop with her friend, Malia."Hey Delilah, what's up?" Malia asked her." Seeing you is what is up."Delilah stood straight and was able to see who had just walked into the sweets shop."Hey look, it's Thunderbolt!' Delilah said excitedly."Oooh, is he your boyfriend?" Malia made a weird face as she said that to Delilah."Stop it Malia, seriously, grow up... please."Delilah gave her a very neutral look."Huhh, whatever."Delilah shrugged off what had just happened and gave Thunderbolt a polite welcome."So, how was everything at the academy?" Delilah asked."Oh, it was alright... just like usual, training."He replied than he looked at his hooves, his two coloured blondish mane swepted across his face."What's wrong?" Delilah asked him. "Oh,um, nothing, i'm fine... really."Thunderbolt gave her a reassuring look."Okay, whatever you say... so what should we do now?"Delilah asked."Oh, actually I have to go home to go so my chores, nice seeing both of you, bye!!" Malia orbed out of the Sweets Shop and back to her house."Okay... I guess that leaves just the two of us."Delilah was delighted to finally have some alone time with Thunderbolt.

"So... is there anything that I should know?"Delilah was sensitive and calm while asking the question."No, I'm fine... really."Thunderbolt looked up at the blazing red sky and smiled."What are you so happy about?" Delilah asked and raised an eyebrow."Nothing but being with you." Their hooves touched and stayed where they were placed at, while their eyes gazed into one another's... (To be continued.)