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" wow! " said grey in awe of the monster. he keeps up his pace running at the monster and leaps onto its face. wind currents aiding him with his jump, he lands with his short sword firmly in its cheek. ( anybody want to rp the giant? )

( nice idea. you are accepted. ) Tenshi quickly catches up to grey. they find a giant made of stone holding an old lady by a bonfire.

" your welcome. now get out of here. it isn't safe. " said shadow putting away the weapon.

shadow waves the phoenix over and cautiously cuts open the bag with a collapsible shurucin.

after finishing his business on the ceiling shadow swoops down and kicks the unicorn. chipping his horn and knocking him out.

( the hostage or the gunman? )

that's when shadow made his move. he launched a grappling hook at the remaining 2 robbers first at the one who was attacking with his gun. the devise attaches itself to the gun then fires another hook to the hostage takers gun disarming them both. after that he swoops down from the ceiling and wraps up the hostage guard choking him out and attaching him to the roof.

a young fox who looks like the old man comes from behind a hill with a bag of cabbage. once he sees his dad he runs over and says. " what happened? " the old man stubbornly says. " I'll be fine. I have Dalton to protect me. but I am not the one in danger. pleas just go. "

( I was talking about grey. )

( you'll find out how he keeps his grip on the gun later. )

" thank you. I can make it back to my home by myself. my son will be home any moment. but pleas save Ariel I can't go on with out her. " to the west was several craters leading off. grey nods and runs off after them faster than any normal fox could ever try to.

most of the men drop their guns. except one who was wearing gloves who fired a burst from his assault rifle.

" ok. but they dragged her off that way. " he points to a high hill to the west. " you got it. " grey fetched some knee sized sticks. " will these do? "

( some kind of background would be nice. also you may want to reconsider how he uses his power but that's your decision. ) " I make them myself. plus I take all of the money out of villains bank accounts. a quarter for me all the rest goes back to their victims. inside man as in he is posing as the staff. if you need my help than use this radio. I will do the same for you. " shadow scales a wall and vanishes. waiting for phoenix to get the next move.

( whatever injured him is gone. he has been crawling for a while. ) " giants attacked us. they broke my foot and took my wife away. pleas how does it look? " ( hint: badddd.... )

" ok. let's go. " after another small journey they arrive to a hill were they can just see the village. an old man lies on the ground with a crushed foot. " help! "

"hmmm... I have a nice car, detective and marital arts skills, and about a million jib lets hidden up my sleeve. " he stops the car in a back ally close to the bank. " ok. so here's the plan. you go for a frontal distraction. either an assault or negotiation. while I free the hostages. he is said to have 4 armed gunman and an inside man so look out. " he flips his voice modulator back on. " any questions? "

( your accepted. but pleas brake down your paragraphs into sentences. this will make it easier to understand you. )

" thanks I designed this car myself. I think I have some video on the maniac... " said bronzeshine as he flipped through screens like an ipad. " oh here we go. " it shows a video of dr chaos battling a meta human. the hero is losing until he shot him with his laser eyes. dr chaos explodes. just as the hero is limping off dr chaos jumps on his back and stabs him with a knife. the screen goes white and a video lost symbol appears across the screen. " that's who we are dealing with. what do your powers consist of? "

" you can call me shadow. but I'd rather keep my true identity a secret. " shadow flips open a panel on the dash and a small computer screen appears. " dr chaos. his file doesn't show his real name. he appears to be insane running a criminal organization with untold wisdom and ruthlessness. sounds like a.p.s.d to me. it's were people compulsively defy authority. he cannot die and as such has an increased pain tolerance. no powers mind you but a mind built for well... chaos. "

bronzeshine closes the roof by hitting a button. then presses another button on the neck of his armor. his voice returning to normal he says. " so you just do that all the time... ok. good luck pulling one over on me and I am new to the hero scene in Manhattan at least. I wish this robbery wasn't going on at three in the morning or I wouldn't be revealed at all. but this guy is to nasty to ignore. "

a voice can be heard out of the intercom. the sound distorted by an auto tuner. " the brick was corroded. the worst you could have done was chip a tooth. " the roof slides back to form an entrance. bronzeshine sat in there wearing a full suit of black body armor. " now if you want to help me take care of the bank robbery on first street. then pleas get in an explain yourself. " said bronzeshine auto tuned trying to be overwhelmingly hostile.

( cool! your app is accepted. but this is the first time shadow has gone out to fight crime. ) a beeping noise comes from the computer console. " attacker detected. " bronzeshine frowned. he didn't expect opposition on the way there. so he keeps driving until he is about to hit a wall and slams on the brakes in an effort to throw the passenger from his roof. he was driving very fast.

the year was 2045, deep within Manhattan. a bank was being robbed by the foul dr. chaos. his criminal organization had gone to far. hurting innocent pony's just for bits. but no more, it was time for a new group of heroes to stand up for justice. it was time for super hero's. ( essentially a dc spinoff. ) application. super hero name: the shadow age: stallion secret identity: bronzeshine. a lovable stallion who owns his own smithy. powers: a custom made toolset including a grappling hook, smoke bombs, and a tranquilizer pistol. plus his mastery of marital arts. ( essentially bat pony. ) alignment: pure good. backstory: he grew up in a family of thieves and murderers. he was given special training and as such he was expected to follow in his fathers footsteps. when told to assassinate a detective who was getting to much information on them. he refused, developing a mental barrier to killing people. that was 13 years ago and he hasn't spoken to any member of his family since. the time was 3:05 when bronzeshine heard the call. he was suppose to be working from 9 to 5 today but pony's lives were worth more to him. he set out from pony Ville in an armored car. painted black. it was time to dawn the guise of the shadow.

his throat and lungs return to their normal size. grey stands up leaning heavily on the tree. he was pale but a lot better. " I owe you a great debt. now lets see if anyone at that village knows who we are huh? " said grey as he took a tree limb and used it as a walking stick while walking towards the smoke. they were still always away. but now they weren't in danger. ( were is monochrome? I don't want to leave the forest until all of our players are in play. )