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*sigh * fine I will be right there. " the doctor grabbed a pistol, a knife, and a hostage and began his slow stroll towards the mall.

and thus the plan fails instantly. thought bronzeshine. he decided to help phoenix and trap chaos later. he used his wings to fly up and hid in a low cloud. he would wait for the right time to strike. dr chaos looked at the emence wealth in the safe. he was stealing it not out of greed but to help bankroll his organization. " a god like me has little use for this wealth. but the mortals below me need it a grate deal... now were is that air support!? "

" ok then " said dr chaos. doing what he was told to do. " ok lets go! " said shadow as he pulled a rip cord. it sent him flying out of the vehicle and all the way to the roof. were he entered by skylight.

( I don't know. I guess he is just smart like that. ) " ok lets go. they are leaving right now. I will eject out and hide. then you can attack them. that grenade will take out ant electronics from fifty feet away so use it wisely. " dr. chaos speaks to gene. " hold on dear. we cannot forget what we came here for. we must hold out until the helicopter arrives to tow away the safe. "

" hmmmm... well taking out chaos is out of the question. he cannot be knocked out or killed. the changeling seemed to have tech powers. " shadow searches his car for a grenade. " take this. it's an emp grenade, use it if she uses electrical technology. you attack gene wind while I sneak up on chaos and trap him in the bank vault. "

great. so this is oc. how many people do you want before we begin?

APP: jac600

NAME bronzeshine

CALL SIGN dark shadow

SPECIAL AIRCRAFT MARKINGS a black tornado

AGE stallion ( 22 )

GENDER male

SPECIES Pegasus

COAT COLOR yellow

MANE COLOR yellow

MANE STYLE simple. crew cut.

PREFERRED AIRCRAFT TYPE (Attacker, Fighter, Bomber, Multi-Role) attacker

PERSONALITY loyal to the end. will stick with his morals until they kill him.

LIKES animals. people who are down to the point. helping others, Alfato sauce

DISLIKES unnecessarily mean people, nuclear weapons, arrogant commanders.

ANY ADDITIONAL INFORMATION while his childhood is a mystery he finished top of his class in training. can fly planes fast than normal pilots. ( btw is this anthro? also is it set in modern times. )

" yeah totally. but what I meant was witch entrance do we use, who will we attack, and how we do it. "

" Of course. " he takes his father who was leaning heavily on him. " go after my mother. monster attacks have been getting really dangerous as of late. " they begin to leave towards a log cabin in the distance.

" thank you dear. could you take care of this other pest? " he points to the dj.

" yeah. I don't think I'll lose any sleep if the hostages take a dirt nap. I made up the plan last time. what do you want to do when we go back? "

shadow meant no offence by what he said. but he was actually panicking a little bit. he floors the accelerator and just as the doctor was getting up he gets hit again. the car burst explosively through a wall and drives in a long ark back to the bank. " the knock out gas dissipates in one minute. hopefully it will do it's job. but I doubt it will be that simple... "

" I know that! " said shadow as he furiously typed away on his controls. knockout gas grenades spill out into the room covering every inch with the awful stuff. " get in here phoenix! "

with the vibrations the pony laugh's. " you cannot kill me! I am immortal. " his ribs all gave out at the same time and crushed his organs, he fell back with a smile on his face. suddenly shadows car rams gene wind as fast as it could. shadow speed limps into the cockpit.

they needed a distraction. so grey rotated his sword with inhuman dexterity as he gained speed a vortex appeared around it sucking everything nearby except his friends. the gaint almost loses it's balance and roots itself to the earth. the tree's derooted themselves. and walked towards the trio.

grey joins in on the group attack to and they all rush the monster. when the connect it blows one of it's legs of into shrapnel. the old woman was tied to a stick above the fire. the giant roars for help and the tree's shake.

the sword makes bitter progress. but makes it threw, the giant falls on one knee and smack's Tenshi away with its hand.

it had no visible weaknesses. though moved slowly. grey got batted away from the face like an ant and flew all the way to Xara. " oww... could you give us a hand? "

shadow slowly came to. he crawled for cover and pressed some buttons on his suit. " I hope this works... "

( not to bee rude. but my character doesn't have guns. also his is knocked out. ) the Mohawk guy comes back unfazed by the attack he leaps on the dj and stabs him with a knife. " I see someone's all about the money... "

( I say you may want to alter your powers that way you can better use them in combat. like defining your enemy's or blasting them with sound. maybe he was hired by the police or the doctor. )

" ahhh! " says the bad guy as he hits the wall. dazed but still in the fight. a pony with a Mohawk jumps from the ceiling and tackles phoenix to the ground. * gasp! * it was dr chaos!

( is he out or just injured? )

" yeah I don- PAHHHHHHHH! " said shadow as he was electrocuted into unconsciousness by the bank manager. who had thrown a bolt of lightning from his hand. " right here! " he said as he fired another at phoenix.

a small cute little rabbit comes out of the brush. it was running very fast from something...