augercorn

lol, the chat room isn't as good as it was before the update anyway.

someone should really post so we can get off the citadel so these 2 dont have to wait anymore

in respect for air force we will not post till his banishment is complete

Im told it takes a week

exactly do it for the art,

do you know the band areosmith?

multiple times they have stated that there best and favorite song is "crazy" despite the critical and fan hate of that song they still proudly claim that as there best work. I acually met steven tyler and he said "look I know the song sucks. but is you listen to it really hard you can all tell were trying our very best for this one song. say what you will but thats why its my favorite"

be like steven and be proud of your work even if everyone hates it you can be proud

so Carmana asked me to tell you all, that everyone who has preveisly posted there rp is approved.

now its just a matter of story pacing till you can join

Spear gritted his teeth, and held his thoughts in“this kid’s gotta have an altered mental status, and he’s too young to have any real experience.”

After quickly adjusting the sergeant on his back he took a deep breath and said “ I’m your new Platoon leader , Chief master sergeant Spear Mcwingtip, E.L.F. right now me and my men are your only hope for survival. You better get a bandage on that arm, go see one of my men, if they can’t help you I can as soon as I’m done with your sergeant here.” Spear walked past the purple kid and said “Ill let it go this one time, if you talk to me like that again I’ll discipline you old school.” And walked off.

He’s a boot, but he’s got that potential, I can tell. But first he needs to learn the ropes and get broken in. I want him for E.L.F

I thought it was good for what it was, (a hour and a half side story, not meant to touch cannon or effect anything) animation was good, songs were good. and the plot was o.k.

it had a lot of stuff that made it essentially a love letter to Brony's including lots of memes and ideas explored in the fannon but not the show.

yes, it was too quick to understand yeah the development was skipped over, but in the end I thought it was a fun romp. that maybe will open the gates for exploring more fannon integration

that said I would of enjoyed more action and development

Spear nodded and flew off even though he knew he should of chewed out Ruby for talking to him like that, not that it ever helps.

Spear flew up and watched his men slowly flank the panicking forces. And Spear landed right next to the curled up leader. He quickly inspected the combat gauze and the resettling job. It was good, "a real bye by the book kid egh, Twilight would be proud" he said as he fixed the dressing and put him in the trendelenburg position. Spear then pulled out his own med bag and quickly pulled out a needle and tubing after quickly finding a vein he and inserting the needle, {letting some blood flow out of the catheter to make sure he got it} he quickly attached a special magic mix concocted by the unicorns back in base, it combined epinephrine (adrenalin) and hextend into one all purpose extremely useful mixture.

He then finished his care on the young airman (splint, and treating the other bad cuts) before flying a few feet above the ground with his assault Rifle in hand. in a loud voice that commanded the discipline of all around him he said "I ..." he waited till everyone noticed him “am Chief Master sergeant Spear McWingtip! Former equestria air force, now E.L.F.” he gave his men the signal to move in thru the cover and reveal themselves “I AM ASSUMING COMAND, of this operation! Our new mission objectives is to get you all to base camp alive. Followed by immediate enlistment of E.L.F. Any one who refuses my leadership and help, will be stripped of there weapon and coat, and will be left behind to face the planet alone! …. “any hostile actions will be met with immediate execution! Equestria has abandoned you, I am the only help you will get!”

Spear landed and threw the Sergeant on his haunches in a fireman carry “you did good kid.” he whispered to him “but we need to band together as friends if we want to survive”

"... if you can hear me were getting your guys to safety. also ...just ignore the depressing lesbian pony who's going to be your driver"

Spear gritted his teeth, she was a strange one sergeant Ruby. he quickly took a look at his squad then back down at the wounded leader of the E.A.f and the young army stallion trying to help "Come on, you should know how to treat that!" he said to himself. he knew he couldn't wait much longer.

"RUBY! GET VITAL SUITS MOVING, EVERYONE ELSE START YOUR WAY DOWN THERE AGAIN! SURROUND THEM AND STAY UNDER THE SNOW COVER MOVE OUT TO REVEAL YOURSELVES ON MY SIGNAL, AND HOLD FIRE UNLESS THEy ACT AS HOSTILE! there in way over there heads and need help."

Spear glided over to Ruby who was fixing the V.S, "can you jury rig the v.s's to steadly carry there wounded and get down there in time with everyone else?"

count me in!

so here is a quick questions, will t-eng be a important part of the plot? or just regarded as something they need like fuel and food? what do the V.S look like? are they bipedal like the game or will they be more pony like?

finally will there be snow pirates or is that the e.l.f's job?

so

choking

dragon

“hegh ha” chuckled spear as he looked thru his scope. “keep the Akrid off the survivors! we are going to keep them alive and when there cold and starving they will join us, Give us updated info, and radio codes” Spear leaped off into the cold air flapping his wings. They were some of the weaker long legged akrid that took down the ship; Spear dived down in between the closest one’s long legs and opened fire on its glowing weak spot! (SPLASH!”) the beast roared its death knell before it’s body turned to ice.

Spear quickly harvested a little bit of the thermal energy it released and pulled out his disk grenades and threw 2 at the surrounding Akrid. When the smoke settled 3 Akrid were dead and spear calmly hovered with a smile on his face. There were a few left. But Spear gave his men the signal to fall back and let the survivors take care of themselves

"don't let them see you boys" he said as his men fell back to there hiding spot "now, lets see how the equestria trains its troops these days" as he pulled out his binoculars

"hmmm" said the large pegasis as he dipped his cigar in the snow. "chief, we should be able to take them!" "I know ... I know" he got on the radio "this is chief master sergeant Spear mcwingtip, command do you copy" Spear could hardly understand the crackles over the radio, but he continued on, "we got e.a.f coming down we will not engage, I repeat we will not engage. request a few extra troops to standby at base camp. we will follow e.a.f but we will not engage."

Spear shook the snow off his wings and picked up his trusty assault rifle, and looked to his men "lets see what there doing. Also we can take bets to see how long it takes for the akrid to kill them!”

we can have it like the real mass effect and before a mission Carmana can pick 2-3 guys to go with him!

I think thats a great idea and it can give us all proper screen time

ok, we should add service branch as a new bullet, do you want to edit the sigh up questions?

this looks like it could be fun, I loved the first lost planet, but missed the second one.

sorry if I messed up any of the required info

Name: Spear mcwingtip
Age:

35
Gender: (male

)
Species: Pegasus,


Affiliation: ELF [Equestrian Liberation Front])


Rank: E-6


time in service 15 years most of his lifetime in rank 6 months


Squadron: lol "boss i'm a military stallion thru and thru you but me where you need me!


Mane/tail style- high and tigh military regs, his mane grows fast in sort of a natural mullet so near then end thats what it will look like
mane/tail colour - yellow like applejack' colour- dark navy blue
 eye colour-rather bright gold


Biography- Spear enlisted right out of school eager to work hard and prove his might, starting off in a few small jobs working patrolls at random bases, he made the plunge and joined the equestria emergency combat and rescue team. spending most of his career doing intense rescue missions and quick fire fights. after becoming a seinor member, Spear thought he was going to quit. after having being unable to transition to civilian life Spear re-enlisted forced to take a dead end job at a base near hoofington. spear did well training his green troops on flying and advanced fighting techniques and received commendations. Spear eagerly volunteered for this mission claiming "I go where I'm needed, and we both know i'm needed here"


Personality- having spent most of his life in the military Spear is highly disciplined and reserved. Spear holds a lot of his feelings back and prefers to focus on his job at hand. that said Spear is a extremely hard worker and always focus's hard on his current work. he has a bit of a random/weird sense of humor often making strange comments "well sir, there's nothing else we can do here. ... everyone go home and eat nutella" Spear deeply cares about his men and mission particulary younger enlisted.

that said when Spear left the armed forces for a short peroid, he developed a deeply designed resentment for the politicians in charge towards the world in genral. "my whole life I never questioned, never ... allowed my self too ... .... sorry. sometimes I just question whether or not its worth it to do what we do nowadys, it feels like they don't want us."

what are your thoughts on amy,

be honest

i dont think we will have to wait much longer, next time I see him on xbox I can talk, until then we can explore the citadell and have charecters bond?

yes! problem is our 2 guys in charge, hundashter and Carmano are unable to post, Hundashter being at brony con, we are intrested in another player, tell us who you want as a charecter

since no one is playing blood we should kill him off in a epic respectable way. like the illusive man himself shoots him in the head or he jumps on a reaper and fights his way to the core and causes self destruct. or getting shot by sheperd?

posted in wrong forum sorry. still getting used to the page and rp in general

class; vangaurd

so he wont have equipment till later, but when his time come i would like to lean to pistols

right before he teleported he was sleeping in a cave searching for a lost artifacts in the snowy area around the crystal kingdom, and was transported to a duct where the whole time he was trying to escape and upon hitting a duct fan discovered he can heal.