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Davroth

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  1. Aside Blindjester's suggestions, I would recommend to format the text a bit, to make it more reader friendly.

    Other than that, I would reconsider making reading a book the key moment in her life, but that's a personal opinion, not an inconsistency.

  2. You are doing fine. :)

    RPing is no necessity. But it's not hard to learn, and there are lots of helpful people about, if you ever want to delve into it.

    So by cartoonist do you mean animator or comic book artist?

    Also, welcome to Canterlot. It's save here.

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