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  2. More information about "Celestia"

    Celestia

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    Your anatomy is improving! Somethings you may want to work on, though, is that Celestia's mane is supposed to be flowing. I can tell you tried to fit the mane on the screen, but because of that, you lost that "flowy" (made up words ftw xd) effect. Something else is her eyes. They look a little...... Well,derped. The eye that isn't really facing the screen looks as if its a little higher on the head, and like its not looking the same way as the other one...... I hope this all helps! :)

  4. More information about "Applejack"

    Applejack

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    Drawing without outlines is a rare thing for me to see and I find it tends to be hard to pull off well.

     

    For the shading, some of your previous pieces did it a bit better, namely this one: http://www.canterlot.com/gallery/image/6572-luna-dreamscape-galaxy-mane/

     

    Look around the eyes, the highlights and shadows are a bit much, especially with the smoothing style. I can see what you're going for though and I say keep going at it. Have you tried practicing shading from real life objects? Such as doing still life? I know that sounds rather boring for some, but it can be a big help in learning how light illuminates things from various angles, etc.

     

    You can definitely use some work (I wish I could give you some better pointers, while I did art (mostly 3D) back in the day, it's not my forte.) You're not bad though, and it looks like you have an idea of what you want to do, you just lack the skills to fully realize it. Looking through your art, there's clear improvement as well as experimentation like this piece here. Keep going with it. :)

    I thank you for taking the time to write all this up! ^.^ Its rare that I get comments.

     

    I was kinda tired while drawing this, and really annoyed as well, so I didnt put as much effort into this drawing as I probably should have. I just finished a drawing of Trixie before reading this, but it should be a little bit better. It was my first time ever using multiply layers, and I was getting a little frustrated with how it was working out, since it wasnt working out too well.....

     

    Thanks for the feedback! ^.^ You made my day!

  7. More information about "Kyubey"

    Kyubey

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    @rose and @rariry thank you! I tend to like canterlot more when. It comes to uploading art, since usually I get more feed back. ^.^

    @sleeps ok. If you ever feel like suffering for the sake of the universe, call me!

  12. More information about "Pastel lines"

    Pastel lines

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    oh my gosh i love the colors. you did an amazing job! would you care if i redrew her in my style? 

    No not at all! You are free to draw her! I had a hard time thinking up stuff..... I didn't want to make a pony oc close to everything else you see and all (But then again, over 75% of mlp oc's are alicorns. And their practically supposed to be gods)

     

    It looks good. A little improvement and Pastel will be looking like a pony that would look like she belonged to Hasbro.

    Eh, my braids are horrible x3

     

    (I literally smiled when I noticed people comment... The only thing I ever get on dA is favorites, and normally I dont get anything here x3)

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