Fluttershy fanfic (first one i wrote evar)

[ShyFluttershy]

hello everypony, i was wondering if anypony here would like to read the first fanfic i wrote. it is my take on how fluttershy and angel met. i would like some critiques on it personally because i am thinking of writing more and people said they liked my style of seeing multiple points of views, but that is just a few people of a large fanbase.

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/48280/An-Angel-in-the-Dark#page/2

if anypony could comment in here or message me with their personal oppinions, i would be very appreciative. i enjoyed writing it alot and thought it was good myself, but that is me being the writer of it lol.