A thing I am working on

[Parker_Izing]

I got tired one day of SPA ponies clop, and put together some words toward a Fic with the Spa ponies in a non-clop way.

Bubbles in the tub.

A SPA ponies fic with no clop

Ponyville, early evenning, 60º F, clean skies, weather, fair, but with chance of ra.... Ok Ok, I got it

Behind the doors of a certain establishment, we find a nice Ikea style decorated waiting room, between

Some stock posters picturing cats on crazy set-ups, there's a small office window. Behind, whe see a pink Mare, blue mane with a somewhat dated white maneband, she whore too a same-style necklace, with a small oval gem. She was obviously busy with pencil on mouth filling out some establishment

forms, the medicinal Dr. Clobputt's mud have quite the deal for SPA establishments. And now, the Doctor's mud reaches Ponyville for first time!

The Pony, under ectasic-like revelation, canters towards the private area where her sister Lotus currently should be plastering some badly youth needy mare...

"Sis, sis, look at zis brochure of Doctor's mud!"

Aloe giggled up an down like another certain pink pony... with joy-joy eyes to fullfill the 'filly at a toy store' meme.

"Doctor who?"

Some brown stallion opens slightly a sauna door with ringing ears, after realizing nopony looks for him he just closes back "Whiny Mares, cannot live with them..."

"... Neither eat their muffins!" Seconded a gray pegasus mare at Doctor's side.

"Dr. Clobputt's mud! sensational novelty of the century" Told Aloe.

Lotus put that 'Don't quite follow you' face "Dr. ClopBu..." "Clobputt! Get your mind out of ze gütter!"

Lotus giggled, turning away her head of her sister's ironic remark. (while thinking on Aloe's roll on hay with the whole Stalliongrad's Dancing Chorus)

"Just teasing you sis. I supose you want to talk about order that putt mud..."

Aloe glares with beady eyes, a wild 'squee' appears.

"Order for 200 bits"

Aloe explodes. "Oh yes,yes,yes! Ze bestest sizter in der welt!" Hoppin happily she leaves the private bath, the door swinging before closing.

While Lotus gets back to work, remomoving the Cucumber slices from a patron's eyes; a certain white unicorn."And there, looks like those impending wrinkles are gone"

"AGGGGG! My eyes what you done? Cannot open them, I'm blind!"

*Giggle* "Technically not, your eyes still work, are your pristine smooth eyelids that now won't fold the problem"

Rarity using catlike hearing homes herself towards the Spa attendant, choking her with her forehooves. "Technically my plot! now fix this before I show what's 'smoothing a pony' " Lotus with a hoof grabs the used towel vase and repeatedly uses it to beat the alabaster unicorn's noggin between Rarity's repeated sailor like and unladylike swearing.

Back at reception, Aloe is filling the order form when she hears a series of dry blows followed with a noise of earthware breaking to pieces. "Girls! Cut it up before I call ze guards!"

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Act 2------------------------------------------------------------

The entrance door opens with a bell sound, a weird Stallion walks in, a sight to behold, an average pony frame holding about five times more of the healthy amount of muscle, blonde tail, and really short mane, small creepy red eyes, and a towel over him with the "BedLam Motel" logo emblazoned, not even near of Lady Rarity's works.

Aloe blinks a couple of times, putting a business grin "Hello, eh... Sir! Wellcome to Ponyville SPA... Can I serve you in any way?"

The muscled pony slowly approaches the counter, when he reaches almost tongue distance to Aloe's muzzle

he wisper "Erm, yeah, mare, I got a dire problem requiring competent attention" Aloe blinks again, "Not sure to fully understan you sir..."

"You can call me Snowflake, look, I got this problem I expect to be treated silently..." -"Silently?" "Yes, we got anyplace discrete to talk and treat my... Condition?".

Aloe exits from counter and hints Snowflake to follow her, they enter to an unoccupied private sauna.

Snowflake feeling uneasy, noting that Aloe opens the steam valve, the loud hiss muting their speech. "Well Mr flake,what's the issue?" - "What? I don't quite understand you with that whistling"

Aloe, getting quite annoyed, closes the steam. "Now you hear me!? -Whats your issue?"

"Geez, not schriek, I'm not deaf!" "Look, the other day I got exposed to Poison Joke, and..." He removes

his towel, the small 'Do not steal' label visible for a moment, and another small things, two diminutive wings, more belonging to a chicken than to a grown stallion (or any pegasus) The stump like appendixes bobbing slightly, completing a creepypasta worth spectacle of bizarre.

Aloe tries hard to not laught, and put her most professional mug "Aw! Mr Flake... Can call you Snow? Thanks, Snow I understand how important is for stallions the size... of wings... pegasus stallions... wang, I mean wing, not wanted to say wing-wang! You like big wangs! Wings..." -Beet faced in embarras, Snowflake idly

grinded a forehoof on floor, watching at it quite absently...

"Look miss, I'm understanding this situation is, hard, I mean tought, to both, so I release you of talking anymore"

Aloe quickly sprung "Aww, I'm soo sorry Di... Snow... You're Snowflake, big and strong Snowflake... Feeling better?"

"Hardly..."

"Well, your case is not isolated, we got the means to heal you, in no time you gonna be beating pegasi into pulp in Cloudsdale!"

"Why everypony thinks that from me? I'm just myself..."

While he was moping on his monologue, Aloe, set up the bath. "There, it just need to temper, last we want is cold shrinking those things even more..." -"Very smooth Aloe..." - "Aw! Sorry sorry sorry" *hugs him trying to cover her last gaffe* "Anyways, I appreciate it, never liked cold baths, uhmm Yeah!"

He entered the tub, flapping his wings to try to balance himself.

"There! now just relax and let the bath make it's work" Said aloe from the door, while watching at the tub and the bubbles rising. "I'l be back in 10 minutes" *Thinks: I did turn on the bubbles?*

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I need to expand/add plot (not that way) argument to make it presentable. Please, don't forget i'm non english natural.