Bellosh Posted January 19, 2014 Report Share Posted January 19, 2014 One last thing: do you best to avoid clumping up your text into giant paragraphs. If paragraphs get too big, all the text can get jumbled up by the human eye, and certain details can be missed by readers. Case in point, the cutie mark story should be two (or more) small paragraphs instead of a single large dump of text. If you fix that, I'll feel confident in moving this app up along the chain. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dravocn Posted January 19, 2014 Author Report Share Posted January 19, 2014 i separated the paragraphs a bit if that works Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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