Cherry's atempt at a Fanfic v2, feel free to laugh

[CherryRie]

SO! After some wrestling with myself I've started to write Morality once again. Heaven knows where this will endup, probably as just another damp squib. But I'd like to hear from anyone with an opinion.

For the moment I'm working through introductions and scene setting. I've also worked on lightening the mood. What I'd love to know is 'if I were to carry on with this stile of writing and bring in mane characters, would this begining intrest you enough to cary on?'

At present the story is OC focused and could be tagged as 'normal' with a tinge of comedy and dark. Later parts of the story will be darker, but will incude far greater deaph of character, mane cast apperances and additional tags of adventure and romance.

Its roughly baced on the Heart of Equestria consept, but has no relation to that upcoming plot line.

Morality

Its only around 2K words atm, so don't expect anything much. Think of this as a test run to see whether the waters are worth travercing.

[Armony]

I like what you've got so far, and I'd definitely be interested in seeing this continued. That said, I recommend doing some editing, or finding someone who can edit for you, as there are a few spelling and grammar mistakes throughout.