Earth Pony Arctic Blossom [Final]

[Fluttershy1990]

Roleplay Type: Mane

Name: Arctic Blossom

Sex: Female

Age: Foal

Species: Earth Pony

Eye Color: Pink

Coat Color: Dark Blue

Mane/Tail/Markings Color & Style: Pink, long, straight, with a yellow ribbon on the mane

Physique: Slender, short, thin

Cutie Mark: Blank Flank

Origin/Residence: Manehattan

Occupation: Student

Motivation: Wants to be like her sister one day

Likes: Butterflies, cute baby animals, and nature in general

Dislikes: Evil ponies

Character Summary: Arctic Blossom is the baby sister of Arctic Sun. She love her sister a lot and want to be like her when she grows up. Whenever Arctic Sun come to visit her parents, she and Arctic Blossom plays all kind of games and have lots of fun together. Arctic Blossom and her sister are the best of friends, and are always happy to see each other.

Arctic Blossom dislikes any pony who hurt her sister. In the summer, she and her parents go to visit her big sister, and she helps her big sister with the shop in anyway that she can. She live with her parents in Manehattan, while her big sister lives by herself in Hoofington. Arctic Sun takes her sister around Hoofington whenever she's not busy with the shop.

Arctic Blossom attends Manehattan Elementary School. She is a good student, eager to learn, gets good grades, and helping the other students with their schoolwork, as long as she help with it. After school, she attends the nature club where she and other students who likes nature takes nature walks with their teacher, and learn about the outdoors. Since she loves nature so much, she wants to teach other ponies about nature when she gets older.

Her parents approve of their daughter's love of the outdoors, and support her anyway they can. Her mom and dad love her very much, and support everything that she does. Arctic Blossom loves nature because nature, to her, is beautiful and wonderful. In the spring, Arctic Blossom love to see the pretty flowers that come out and the cute baby animals that were born during the previous winter.

Arctic Blossom is a kind and gentle pony who had many friends. Her friends and her always have fun together and loves to go on nature walks together. In the nature club, she made friends with everypony in the club, and hang out with them after school and on the weekend. She is really outgoing and friendly with everypony that she meets. One of the flaws that she have is she can be a little rude to other ponies, though she didn't mean to. But she is determined to overcome this flaw.

Because of her interest in nature, she does well in classes that deal with nature. She doesn't know everything about nature, but she listen to the teacher, and write down notes so she can look at them if she forgets something. She has difficulty with math, but she does the best that she can do, and she does pretty well with math. Her grade in math are a little bit above average, and she proud of it. When she gets her cutie mark, it will probably a leaf or flowers.

Here is her picture.

Image created in General Zoi's Pony Creator.

[Pony_Sage]

Hay there, just wanted to stop by and lend a helping hoof. First off there are a few spelling and grammatical errors that another read through will most likely catch, but that is neither here nor there. Little Arctic Blossom here seems like and interesting foal, but what does she like to do? You spend an exorbitant amount of time speaking to her relationship with her sister, Arctic Sun, but little Blossom here seems to be a wee bit anemic on the development scale. I know that making foal characters is difficult namely because of the short span of their lives and lack of a cutie-mark, but there is always room for some little tidbit that makes them a more dynamic character. You say that she likes the nature and animals, maybe you could expound upon that and tell the reader how she came to like these things. Does she attend any special after school activities that cater to a pony with a penchant for the outdoors? What is her relationship with her mother and father? Do they approve of her outdorsy nature, or are they skeptical? What does Blossom want to be when she grows up? What might her cutie-mark be when it comes in?

All these are good questions to ask yourself as you craft this character, they will make her more playable for you and more interesting for another character to interact with!

~Sage AkA Freddie Freewings

[Fluttershy1990]

Thanks for the advice, Pony_Sage, and this is just the beginning of the application. I will add some more information soon, and write a post when I do.

[Fluttershy1990]

Added some info to the character summary.

[Fluttershy1990]

Having a writer block, I guess you can called it that, with the story behind why she loves nature so much. Can someone give me help and suggestions on how to get started with the story?

[Fluttershy1990]

Pony_Sage, when you said "little Blossom here seems to be a wee bit anemic on the development scale", you meant anemic as in her development is a bit weak, right? I just want to know if I got it right because I went to dictionary.com, and look up the meaning of the word, anemic, and it said that the word, anemic, means weak.

[Fluttershy1990]

Added a paragraph to Character Summary. I think that I did a good job of answering most of the questions that Pony_Sage asked me, but the question about the story behind her love of nature is still unanswered, and I need help getting started on it. I have added some additional information that I decided to add to make Arctic Blossom seem more like that a real character. Changed the application from Work in Progress to Final, but will still take any last minute suggestions.

[Pony_Sage]

For a little filly, she seems pretty well expanded upon, it can be hard because of her young age I understand. The only thing that I would suggest is that you think on what her cutie-mark might be when it comes in! Other than that;

"Assessed!" Thus spake the Sage.

[Skye]

[Fluttershy1990]

Thank you for the approval. Arctic Sun is a character that I have adopted from Augie Cakes, but Arctic Blossom is a character that I made myself. You can say that Arctic Blossom is my own original character on the forums. Arctic Sun's name, cutie mark, and picture was made by Augie Cakes, but her origin/residence and character summary I created myself. Made some changes, but very minor ones. Changed a few words in the last sentence of the 3rd paragraph of the character summary, and removed a sentence from the second to last paragraph. The changes are probably not even noticeable, but just wanted to point them out. Added to the mane description. Added her picture that I created in General Zoi's Pony Creator.

[Skye]

The changes are Ok.