Pegasus Comet

[Gemini]

[ Pony Related Character ]

Name:

Comet

Gender:

Male

Age:

Stallion

Species:

Pegasus

Pelt Color:

Moderate Orange

Mane/Tail Color & Style:

Strong Red with Brilliant Red streaks, his mane is cut incredibly short with his tail is docked because of his work.

Eye Color:

Luminous Vivid Orange Red

Cutie Mark:

A orange shooting star with a long blue tail coming out from behind it.

Physique:

Tall, thin and lanky but surprisingly strong wings.

Residence:

Born and Raised in Ponyville.

Occupation:

Fire Fighter.

Motivation:

Comet wanted nothing more than to take after his father and mother, who were Bakers by the way. Although it wasn't until his family's shop caught fire and he saw the distruction that a fire could cause. His sister was caught up in the burning building but by the time that the fire fighters arrived it would be way too late. So he mustered up all his courage and dived into the flames at full speed. Thankfully, he saved his sister and came out alright. It was then that he realized that his gift was to save lives.

Likes:

The Smell of a Camp Fire, Taking Leisurely Evening Flights and Reading by Candle Light.

Dislikes:

Seeing others being picked on, Bullies and Overly-Sweet foods.

Character Summary:

Since he was a foal, Comet loved to make others happy and help out whenever he could. Often at times he would go out of his way to assist someone even if it hurt him but he would never mind. Just as well, he idolized his parents how were very well known in Ponyville because of their gifts as bakers. When he was born it was sort of assumed that he would take after his parents and become a baker as well but time and time again he failed to help his parents. Often at times he would make a mess more than anything like for example, all of his cakes never turned out properly and it was obvious to everypony when Comet tried to bake as a large cloud of black smoke would rise out of the chimney whenever he used the oven.

Disappointed by this, his parents would often push him away at times when he tried to help them. Sad and depressed, Comet would often spend time in the market place until one day. While he was away from the bakery, it caught fire! The worst part was that his little sister was stuck on the second floor. Stunned and terrified, Comet was quick to shake his fears and saved his little sister from the roaring fire. It was then that he was called a hero but most importantly, it was then that Comet found his calling in life and since forth strived to become the best fire fighter around.

After realizing his life calling, he began to practice his flying daily. Performing tight turns and strengthening his wings so that he became faster but more controlled in flight. He kept practicing his flying because the better and faster he was, the more lives he could save more people and hopefully more things from the wrath of the fire. It was then that one of the local pegasus fire fighters took notice in him and began to train him. After that it wasn't long before he joined the ranks under the watchful eye of his mentor, who is currently retired.

[WillowWisp]

I would think he wouldn't like the smell of burning wood, wouldn't that mean there was trouble? And I'm not sure how the shoot star Cutie Mark ties in with him. Is it because he's fast?

[Meow]

Alright hun, you got a good start on history, but I think it needs a little more - go on a bit about what happened after the fire, possibly how Comet went about becoming a firefighter and I'd be more then happy to collaborate with you about him and Hot Shot partnering up. I'd also like some background about his previous desire to be a baker and why his parents were bakers as that seems an odd occupation for pegasus ponies.

[Gemini]

@WillowWisp

For the smell of burning wood, what I was trying to go for was for the smell of a camp fire, something that is controlled and used as a source of warmth rather than a blazing inferno. Also, yeah, I suck at making up cutie marks so meh! I tried and given his name is Comet, I rather like it . . .

@Meow

Fixed! Also, I like odd things so there is usually something odd with the character.

[Tam]

Looking good! Be sure to work more with Meow since she has the other Fire fighting pony.

Approved.