Destined for Chaos [Reviews, suggestions, etc.]

[ChaosknightRB]

Alright, so here's how this is going down. Below is the link to my story, Destined For Chaos. It's a human in Equestria story -I know, creative right?- that's meant to be a touch ridiculous. So far people have had pretty positive feedback, but nothing really constructive. I'd like some more thorough reviews from anyone willing with some more detailed points, such as means of improving or what don't you specifically do/don't like about it.

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/6099/Destined-for-Chaos

Thanks in advance for anypony who takes the time to read it

FYI: There is a rather gory scene in the most recent chapter. So any younger viewers, thou hast been warned