webkilla Posted April 15, 2012 Report Share Posted April 15, 2012 ok, first chapter is done and uploaded to FiMFiction - pending approval...What I had planned for the first chapter became the first two chapters - 20 pages were a bit much for one chapter... I'll post a link here when its approved for public viewing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arria Posted April 15, 2012 Report Share Posted April 15, 2012 I think your plans are great. You should stick to what you like and follow that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
webkilla Posted April 15, 2012 Author Report Share Posted April 15, 2012 http://www.fimfictio...-Exalted-PoniesAnd its up for public viewingchapter one is upAs soon as I proof read the second chapter I'll post that as wellany feedback would be lovely.I know my sentence structure tends to be a bit too long - I'm working on that, but its a quirk.Also, how well does the first chapter introduce the basics of the setting? Is the exposition done well, or is it too telling, not showing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
webkilla Posted April 17, 2012 Author Report Share Posted April 17, 2012 Third chapter is upthoughts anyone?I know its a bit gruesome - but I never intended to sugarcoat anything. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
webkilla Posted April 22, 2012 Author Report Share Posted April 22, 2012 Oh the last episodes were incredibly helpful for my storypony soldiers holding spears in their hooveschangelings feeding on love? Fits perfectly with exalted's fae that feed on emotions, will and virtues...This is awesome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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