SonicBoom01

((Ugh, I hate it when that happens. I hate it even worse when you hit "Reply" and it sends you back to this screen with your whole thing deleted. That's High Octane Rage Fuel right there. Also, sorry for the delay, I was working on my fanfic over the week.)) "I sure did!" Gingersnap replied to Frostbite, and he chuckled as she tried to give him a noogie. When she gave him the punch, he made a big deal out of it, spinning in midair, then plopping onto the ground, "dead." He swiftly got back up after a few seconds, though. "Ya know, you're really cool Frostbite. Most grownups don't really like me that much. They always say stufflike 'not now' or 'maybe later.' It's so boring." Frostbite chuckled before replying, "Yeah, we are like that a lot. Although, I'm not a stick-in-the-mud like the rest of them." He chuckled, and hovered in the air, "Though, that might be because I haven't been an 'adult' for that long. I only graduated last year."

You know how in human genetics the male determines the gender? In pony genetics, the female determines it.

Frostbite swallowed his mouthful of lettuce, with some difficulty, "I 'unno." Frostbite said to Re-Roll, shrugging his shoulders. "It was just sitting on that table over there-" He pointed behind him with a hoof to a table filled with food, albiet the customers not there. The waiter was not impressed, and gave a small scowl at the icy pegasus. "Sir, those were for the other customers."

((Sorry for the delay, couldn't get my hands on a computer. I could only use my iPod.)) Frostbite was lounging on a cloud peacefully, after getting all the clouds together for his house. It wasn't fancy looking yet, but in time... "Frostbite?" The sound of Gingersnap's voice broke his thoughts, and he poked his head through the bottom of the cloud, "Frostbite, where are you?" Below him was Gingersnap, albiet her face covered in crumbs of various pastries and walking backwards. He jumped off the cloud and fluttered silently to the ground behind her, causing her to bump into him. He chuckled, "Miss me?"

Alright, give me a day or two and I'll have it done. I don't have a tablet so it'll be a morere traditional sketch, but my friend can digitize it if you wish.

No prob, it only took an hour. :3

No problem then. I'm glad I could help. You may want to check the rules for applications, they might help out a bit with trying to get him to fit.

It's alright, all kinds of people have a tendancy to skim stuff. Let me apologize if I burst your bubble, though. I know how hard it is to have your ideas shot down. I've had it done to me. A lot. You're welcome, for pointing it out, by the way.

This app's pretty good, if I do say so myself. You need a bit more in the Character Summary, but you explained why in the post, so I don't need to get into that. Contrary to what Cherry says, I think its better if the Motivation's a bit like the Character Summary, as it shows that you put the extra effort into your character.

First, I'd like to just warn you (because I'm honestly not too sure myself) that the rules say you should not include relationships with the cast members, and that the fact that your character is a part of the Apple Family may be a problem. Not saying it's bad or anything, just that it might affect if your character gets accepted or not. Not too sure, though. Other than that, this is a brilliant app. This should be accepted, no problem (unless the Apple Family thing factors in- which I hope not, this is an awesome app). Nice work. You may want to get a new picture, though, the Pony Maker isn't easy on the eyes, if you know what I mean. I'm willing to draw one if you want me to, it might take a bit to finish, though.

You're not bothering me, I'm just trying to point out stuff so you can improve the application as a whole. Also, if you weren't trying to sound militaric, you kinda failed at it. You're character's job is basically an ancient infantry role, his cutie mark is a sword and shield, 2 ancient military weapons, and he's sad that he's not a real knight. That's pretty militaric, if you ask me. .-. And I did acknowledge your explaination of a Free Knight;

Alright, this looks to be a pretty good app, but I'm still going to check it over to make sure it's not bad. Few things, we don't really use a number to determine age here, the 'Stallion' part is just fine by itself. I dunno if they'll look at that and say to take it off. Second, Equestria has no real military outside of the Royal Guard. That being said, your pony is a "Free Knight". I don't know what a "Free Knight" is, but it seems to be some sort of militaric position, and the only real military in FiM is the Royal Guard. Third, your English is a bit off and it's hard to really tell what you're trying to get across at times. The second sentence is a little confusing, as you use "have" instead of "has" and leave words out at some parts of the sentence, "some visible near" should be "there are some visible near", and I have no clue what "somehow old" is supposed to mean, nevertheless figure out how it ties into the sentence. Fourth, a lot of the stuff in your bio is a bit out-of-universe here. You say he ran away as a foal, but foals are babies. He'd have to be at least a colt in order to runaway. You explain that a "Free Knight" is just a different title for "Mercenary", but I'm pretty sure that mercenaries don't fit into FiM. If you want some sort of militaric character I'd suggest doing a Royal Guard or even a Town Guard, I'm pretty sure the towns need some protection.

Guys, the answer's right in front of you. It's obviously Cupcakes, so sweet and tasty~

Frostbite had already finished his sandwhich, and was tearing into a salad as Re-Roll and Aurora tried to decide what to order. A waiter walked up to take the group's orders, and he became very puzzled upon seeing Frostbite. "...Sir, where did you get that food at? I don't believe I came over here to take your order beforehand. "The brown unicorn asked, staring at Frostbite, to which Frostbite just shrugged, and resumed tearing into the salad. "Well then," The waiter turned to Aurora and Re-Roll. "Are you two ready to order?"