So, I finished editing "Cheerilee's Garden"'s DT&SS scene, humanized and name/gender swapped for a school assignment. My only concern is the gore factor. As many of you know, it has GRATUITOUS amounts of gore. I am expected to read it aloud in class, as well, so awkward for some, but not for me, other than the fact it's upward to ~4,000 words.

Would this fic be appropriate for a class of juniors? Remember that with it being humanized and using real people's names and personalities, it may have more of an effect. Normally I would upload the fic for other's to review and comb for mistakes in the transition such as still leaving "her" on a now male character, and on my previous forums, I would have been able to, however, here I am left alone to my own editiing prowess. I'll look through it one more time, but if you request the altered fic, post in the comments below.

Oh, and in case you are wondering, I have emailed my teacher, he said he would allow it, something about expression of free speech and it fitting our prompt.

I also edited out the hammer section, due to editing diffuculty and detracting of theme, pace, and overall feel. It would be too hard to change Cheer's personality to our teacher's.

So, in the comments below:

(1) Would it be appropriate?

(2) Encouragement for reading this?

(3) If you want, request the altered version, read at own risk, not held responsible for any anguish and/or repercussions. 18+ only.

But hey, I can't know for sure if you're 18. I mean, like Canada's policy that message boards must have an minimum age limit of 13 years, you can just lie and it's pretty pointless, you know?

EDIT: AH! And, in my previous entry I said that Kain would be Silver Spoon and Cameron would be Diamond Tiara. Though I didn't mean to, I have reversed this. It has no effect on the story whatsoever.