TMMDWCover

Not bad, but isn't the background a bit too aggressive for the eyes? :\

You may be right. I never got any real feedback on it. I'll need to make a better one soon as I get better at vectoring.

Remove the half tone background, as it detracts from the characters, the reason being is it is far too busy and serves no real purpose.

If you want to use navy blue over purple text, instead of having a shadow, have the text use a soft very light blue glow around it so it will stand out.

What would be even better though is to make the backdrop the same color as Mare-Do-Well's "eyes", that was the text and the characters will stand out and the background won't suffer from being too busy.

Very much appreciated! A basic redesign won't take too long and these are great tips. Thanks!

I agree with th background not working in this context, but I really like the effect by itself. It's like an eye-splosion x2.

That's an awesome description and I applaud you!