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Oo, you definitely got the "you don't want to mess with this >:I" look down! I like it. Not sure what you're seeing that you don't like, either, but it seems like a solid start to wherever you end up taking it.

Your style is interesting. Sharp, pointed lines give me the sense I'm looking at a structure rather than a living thing. It's certainly fresh, which is something you'll need for artistic recognition. Try something more lighthearted and in tune with the show, or a picture with clear movement. It could certainly give a very positive result.

Thanks for the feedback you two!

And thanks Zeal, I tend to use the pointed lines in my style because I draw a lot of action and superhero pictures, and I like the sense of movement and fluidity you can sometimes get with sharp lines. I will try something more lighthearted with my next piece, I'm sure. While I was drawing it, I just thought it would be funny to see what a grumpy or constantly irritated pony would look like X3