My reaction after reading your entire epic post. It's my pleasure to welcome you, Asta, to the friendlies forum you'll see on this side of the internet! I'm Tenkan! You can just call me Tenkan (without the exclamation), and quite frankly, I find your writing awesome! (So awesome, that I'll grant you the full honor of correcting my grammar whenever you please!) On a side note, I don't make the rules here, but I think you're free to post your writing/artwork in the Creativity section of the forum as long as it's pony related. I'm not fully sure, so maybe you should ask a moderator or something.