DantonDamnark

Nice app and Lovely visuals!

You make me laugh.

If you want to read Books 1 & 2 - Click Here Ch 1 was slight changed so that it could seem a little nicer. Yulin takes over Danton's second Line. How the Clown met the Hermit Chapter 1 - At the Cafe It was an average day in Ponyville. The sun was shining, the streets were crowded, and Jiktin and Danton were at the coffee shop. Danton face was pressed against the table top while Jiktin seemed to be talking without end. "AndthatswhenIfoundthewheelofcheesebutitwasbluenowbutIateitanyway..." blurted Jiktin, who was wired on 3 cups of coffee. "ButIforgottoremembertotellyoutoforget... to..." Jiktin's speech started to slow, and he started to sway. "Jiktin!" Danton yelled, "Breath!" Jiktin took in a huge gulp of air and released it in a satisfying fashion. "Thanks, Danton" said Jiktin. "What would you do without him, Jiktin?" Yulin asked rhetorically. "I'll tell you the story!" said Jiktin. "No, Jiktin!" said Danton, "That's not what I asked!" "What didn't you ask me, Danton?" Jiktin asked with severe confusion. "To tell me that story" Danton answered. "What story?" asked Jiktin. "The story of how we became friends" replied Danton. "Okay, it was just a normal day in Ponyville..." Jiktin started. Danton realized what he just did and started pounding his head on the table as Jiktin spoke. Yulin leaned in and listened intrigued about the story. ------- So that you, the reader, has a chance to moderately understand this story, we will be looking at this from Danton's point of view. It was 6 years ago in the Everfree Forest. Danton was walking about the forest picking and studying plants he was to use in potions. Danton looked slightly different than he does now. His eyes were brighter, to the point where they glowed in the night. He also seemed to have eyeliner, yet he did not wear make-up. His pelt was also a bit darker and he had a permanent scowl on his face. The weather today, in the Everfree Forest, was dark and gloomy. "No... No..." Danton said to himself as he looked at the mushrooms growing on a dead log. "This will-" Danton stopped himself and backed up. Just as Danton had finished backing up, a strike of lightning hit the mushroom he was just about to pick. The mushroom, now having been struck by lightning, was now glowing blue with the energy of electricity. This was indeed what Danton needed! It started raining. Danton was about to pick it from the dead tree. But something in the sky caught his eye. Looking to the sky, Danton saw a green Pegasus with a long, luscious blonde mane. If you don't know by now, that Pegasus was Jiktin. Not long after Danton saw Jiktin, the bolt of lightning struck Jiktin and he plummeted to the ground below. Jiktin hit the ground at an angle, leaving a rut as he skidded across the dirt. To make things worse, Jiktin's mouth was open and all the dirt he dragged with him went into his mouth. Jiktin got up and spat out about 5 pounds of dirt. If Danton was close enough, he would of heard Jiktin say this: "Peft! Needs more salt" Jiktin then assessed his wounds. First of all, one of his wings was sprained but more importantly, Jiktin's hair was almost completely burned off! Jiktin got over the loss of his hair and started to walk off, but he tripped over the dirt he just spit out. Getting up, Jiktin looked around and saw a cave. He then entered the cave with the intention of staying there the night. Danton had seen the whole thing. "What an idiot!" Danton said as he facehoofed, "He just went into a Dragon's Cave!" Danton wasted no time in getting to the cave. Before going in, Danton looked around and picked up a fallen sign. He then replanted it in the ground near the mouth of the cave. The sign said: "Here be Dragons!" Danton cautiously entered the cave in search of the fallen Pegasus. Chapter 2 - A Debt Owed Danton walked down the long tunnel of the Dragon's cave. Eventually, Danton made it to the mane chamber. There he saw something that would amaze anypony. Mounds upon mounds of gold coins, jewelry and gems. Danton's attention quickly shifted from the gold and silver to the Pegasus trying to gather as much as he could in his hooves. "You!" Danton said with an authoritative voice. "Huh?" said Jiktin as he looked around, "Who me?" "Yes you!” said Danton, "You've got to get out of here" "But why leave when I have all this neat stuff?" asked Jiktin as he pointed out the gold. "Because, this is a Dragon's Den, and Dragons eat ponies who try to steal their gold" said Danton. "Let me think about it... Nah!" Jiktin relied as he went back to gathering his gold. There was a faint roar coming from the tunnel. Taking a look, Danton saw it was a Green Dragon. Thinking quickly, Danton grabbed Jiktin and hide behind a column by the tunnel to the exit. "Hay! What are you-" started Jiktin before Danton showed his hoof into Jiktin's mouth. The dragon entered the chamber and lay upon its hoard. Danton then dragged Jiktin out of the cave. Once the two were out of the cave, Danton took his hoof out of Jiktin's mouth. "Why did you lick my hoof?" Danton asked with annoyance. "It was salty" responded Jiktin as he licked his lips. "Ugh" grunted Danton as he wiped his hoof upon the dirty ground. "You’re welcome by the way. If I hadn't dragged you out of that cave, you'd probably be in that things stomach right now!" "You say that like it's a bad thing" Jiktin replied. "How can it be a good thing?!" Danton asked angered. "Well," Jiktin started, "I once found about 100 bits in a dresser drawer in a Red Dragons belly" Danton stared at Jiktin in shock and confusion. "My name's Jiktin. What's yours?" asked Jiktin. He then stuck out his hoof. "They call me Danton" Danton said as he slowly brought his hoof with Jiktin's. Jiktin grabbed his hoof and shook Danton up and down, rather than just his hoof. "Nice to meet you, Danton!" Jiktin said heartily. Once Jiktin stopped, Danton had to take a moment to gather his thoughts. It the rain had now turn into a down pour. Danton noticed Jiktin was in no condition to fly after that lightning strike. "No need to stay out in the rain, you can stay at with me in my home till it gets better" offered Danton. "Nah, I'll be fine" said Jiktin. "Trust me, the weather in Everfree always gets 10 times worse before it gets better" said Danton. Danton then show Jiktin to his home. It was once a library wing but it is mostly inaccessible. The only entrance is through a cave hidden behind a mound of white rock slabs. "Home Sweet Home" Danton said. His voice echoed in the hall they were in. "Coooooool" echoed Jiktin's voice. "ECHO!" Jiktin said playing with the echo. "Okay, that's enough" said Danton, "Now, do you want me to do something about your... mane?" "No thanks, I don't have one anymore" replied Jiktin, with a smile(for some reason). "I mean: Do you want me to make it grow back?" "You can do that?!" Asked Jiktin, in shock. Danton showed him to a room filled with beakers, flasks, tubes and more. Danton grabbed a few things and mixed them together. "This should work" said Danton. He gave it to Jiktin. Jiktin was about chug it until Danton grabbed it with his telekinesis and pulled it away. "NO! You put it on your head" barked Danton. Danton then proceeded to pour in on Jiktin's head. Jiktin's hair then exploded from what seemed like nowhere. "THANK YOU SO MUCH! I owe you one! A BIG one!" Jiktin said with joy as he hugged Danton. Though he felt awkward, Danton was happy for Jiktin. However, this 'one' was about to drive Danton crazy... Chapter 3 - Misery Jiktin insisted Danton come to Ponyville and see his home. Danton was reluctant to do so, but Jiktin would not let it go, at this point they were halfway to Ponyville. "Jiktin" Danton said to get Jiktin's attention. "Yeah?" asked Jiktin. "Stop hugging me" replied Danton, "Now!" Jiktin released Danton from his grip of awkwardness. He had not let go of Danton since he started hugging him back in Chapter 2. "I really don't want to go back to Ponyville, Jiktin" said Danton. "Why not? Ponyville is so nice and pleasant!" responded Jiktin. "'Why not'?!" asked Danton rhetorically. "I live in the Everfree Forest, inside a wing of a forgotten Library, even then I keep it fairly dark" lectured Danton. "On top of that: I don't look like the most approachable pony" continued Danton. "I should just wear a cloak or something" "I wouldn't do that..." said Jiktin, "The last time somepony from the Everfree Forest came to Ponyville in a cloak, it took an arrogant filly and some Poison Joke to show Ponyville she wasn't evil" "The difference would be that I don't< want to be there" Danton mumbled to himself. ---------- The day continued. Jiktin brought Danton to his apartment above the "Quill & Sofa" store. His place was 1 bedroom/living/room apartment, meaning he had only one room. He had no bathroom, but he said there was one down the hall. After seeing his home, Jiktin took Danton to lunch. Jiktin pulled Danton's chair out for him, paid of the food, and even offered to chew Danton's food for him, Danton obviously, didn't accept the offer. Jiktin also took Danton to the general store. Every time Danton picked something up to look at, Jiktin would immediately ask "You want that? I'll get it for you!", but Danton, again, declined the offers. Later as they were walking to go see a movie... "Jiktin, why are you doing all this?" asked Danton, who was wearing some pricey cloths Jiktin had bought for him without asking. "Doing what?" Jiktin asked with a grin. "This!" Danton replied as he showed off his clothes. "The clothes, the offers to buy me things, the offer to chew my food and also the fact that you laid in mud and told me to walk over you so I wouldn't get muddy" "That wasn't even mud, was it?!" continued Danton. "No..." said Jiktin with sorrow. "What was it?" Danton asked, egging Jiktin to answer. "Pudding..." replied Jiktin. "And whose pudding was it?" "Mine..." "Now, Jiktin" started Danton, "Why are you doing this?" "Cause I owe you a life debt for saving my hair" responded Jiktin. "It's just hair!" Danton answered with a bit of rage, "It would have grown back eventually!" "Yeah, but not that fast" replied Jiktin. "Besides, my hair is a part of me" Jiktin started. He then pulled out a book and a pair of reading glasses, seemingly from thin air. Jiktin put the glasses on and opened the book. "And the McRange family Code of Honor dictates: 'A part of a McRange's body is to be treated the same as the whole body'" continued Jiktin. Jiktin returned the glasses and book to Celestia knows where. "And on that note: I owe you a life debt" finished Jiktin. "Well how do '<i>you</i>' pay off your 'life debt'?" Danton asked, eager to end Jiktin's behavior. "Well, there are two ways" started Jiktin, "1. I can save the life of the one I owe the life debt to. You..." There was a long pause that seemed to go one for minutes. Danton was waiting for Jiktin to tell him the second way. Danton made a circle motion with his hoof as to Jiktin to "Continue". But Jiktin just made the motion back. "Ugh, what is the second way?" Danton finally asked. "Oh, that's right!" said Jiktin, who seemed to have forgotten what he was saying before. "2. The one I owe the life debt to, you, can exchange the Debt in return for being best friends with me" Jiktin said. Danton knew his choice. "I choose to be friends" responded Danton. "YAY!" cheered Jiktin as he hugged Danton. Epilogue "Woopwoopwoopwoop" sounded Jiktin as he waved his hooves in a worm like fashion. "Jiktin, what are you doing?" asked Yulin. "Ending the flashback of how Danton and I met and became friends" replied Jiktin. There was an awkward pause. "Soooo, that's how you two met?" asked Yulin. "Unfortunately, it is true" responded Danton, who was holding a cup of ice to his head. It was bruised from slamming it into the table repeatedly. "And I never regretted Danton's decision!" said Jiktin. "Most days, I wonder if I should have just jumped off a cliff and hoped Jiktin would save me" said Danton. "If he saved me, he would leave me alone. If he didn't, I'd still be rid of Jiktin" "Oh don't act like we haven't had good times" said Jiktin with a grin. "True, my life would be dull without you" started Danton. "And if it wasn't for you bringing me out of Everfree, I may have never re-met you, Yulin. Or even meet Lilly and Frilly" "Speaking of which, Danton" Yulin said. "Weren't you supposed to pick them up from school, like, 30 minutes ago?" asked Yulin. "Aww, crap. Your right!" Danton said anxious. Danton jumped up from his seat and ran off to the schoolhouse. Now it was just Jiktin and Yulin. "So, Jiktin..." started Yulin. "Yeah" responded Jiktin. "Do you have any plans later?" asked Yulin. "No, why?"

He sounds adorable! And I can see him having some kind of map as a Cutie Mark in his future (Fits Pirate and Adventurer). Maybe add an incident the two got in while traveling. Or maybe his father still has a bounty on his head or is wanted.

I do agree that was the process of her cutie mark's creation.

Yes I know. I just thought that the 5 rose pedals(like the 5 stars) and the Hexagram represented represented Magic(Twilight's Specialty) and the "link" between the 5 pedals. Besides this was all just speculation on circumstances, I know Lauren Faust would never purposely reference the occult.

Unfortunately, my University blocks the download site they use.

I was doing some research a long time ago, looking for symbols for Danton to use as a Cutie Mark. I eventually came across a symbol that reminded me of Twilight's Cutie Mark. Reading more, my way belief was further cemented. Twilight's Cutie Mark and the Occult Symbol The symbol supposedly represents Magic. Furthermore, between the late 1800's and early 1900's, the symbol was expanded on with the addition of "5 rose pedals" in the center representing the "Divine". The fact that Twilight's "Star" is surrounded by 5 other stars (her friends) just makes this seem too similar not to be a reference. The symbol is known as a Unicursal Hexagram.

Moved to Final. Also, modified Title to fit new standards.

Just one question involving Equestria Daily: Would these stories be a Multi-part Story or a One-Shot Completed Stories? A Multi-Part requires 3000+ words while One-Shot requires 2500+. Also, I'd have to edit Book 2 either way because it comes up to 2390 words.

So DE-evolution DOES exist!

I always look forward to your input and corrections! Thanks! It was actually supposed to say: "And that's when I discovered that I had my Cutie Mark..." but your revision sounded better so I used it. Also, I didn't really make a story about Jiktin's Cutie mark and I'm not sure how I would tell it. I mentioned his end of his Cutie Mark story as a way of showing what Jiktin did to pass the time. His Cutie Mark is a Golden Bow and Arrow, which is actually used in the show. As for Jiktin and Danton's backstory, I'm still working on that. I want it to be strange yet explain why Danton often finds him annoying. And incorporate a long standing attribute of Jiktin that will likely make many think "Wait, what?"

Chapter 2, 3 and Epilogue for Book 2 is done. Finished it all in one shot. Those who have read Frilly and Lilly's Bio can see I did very little work with Chapter 3.

Yet, another Dash Lover. Sorry, but the last 5 times I looked at new users' favorite Mane Mare, It's been Rainbow. Anywho, Welcome!

Added personality attributes. How could I forget those?

I've seen an App go from WIP to Final to Accepted in "4 minutes". Anyway, Welcome (back, I guess) to the site!

Name: Frilly (A.K.A. Frilly the Filly) Sex: Female Age: Filly Species: Pegasus Pelt Color: Dark Blue; Hex: 2164ae Mane/Tail/Markings Color & Style: Mane Style: Like the Spa Ponies, but spiked in the back, wears an Orange Band(Spa Ponies wear white ones) Tail: Shorter version of Spa Ponies Hex Codes: Hair - Whiteish Cyan - d0f5fe; Band - faa115. Eye Color: Pinkish Purple Cutie Mark: N/A Physique: Normal (for her age) Origin: Birthplace: Unknown; Left to be a Street Urchin in Fillydelphia(See Summary) Roleplay Type: Mane Occupation: None; Assistant(See Character Summary) Motivation: Get her Cutie Mark, Become the first Mare Fillydelphia Flyer. Likes: Skating(roller and Ice), Hockey, Contraptions, Mischief Dislikes: Overly Decorative Things, Impracticality, poorly formed plans/ideas Character Summary: Frilly is a bit abrasive at times, but she is also very kindhearted. When she is focused on something, you could set off firecrackers in her ears and she would not notice. But if you somehow did get her attention, she would likely be quite irritated for being interrupted. Frilly, despite her name, is a bit of a tom-colt. Much like Scootaloo and Rainbow Dash. She loves all kinds of sports. She found her love when she was watching a hockey match between her Family and another Foal street gang. She loved how good her team looked as they skated onto the ice against the other street urchin family from across town. But at the last minute of the game(now tied 2-2), the team's goalie twisted his ankle. Without even thinking, Frilly jumped onto the ice and took his place. She amazingly deflected what looked like a 55 mile per hour slapshot back at the other team's goal and scored! Since then she has made it her goal to become a Fillydelphia Flyer. Frilly does not remember much from her time before being abandoned. Sometimes she has vivid dreams of living in a luxurious mansion. But the last thing see really remembers of her parents was when she was abandoned. Abandonment Story(WARNING: Sad) Frilly, like all the ponies in the Family, had a job involving the family. Her first job was to distract the adults while the others stole food and bits from them. Frilly was quite effective at this, she did everything from "accidentally" tripping ponies as she skated down the sidewalk to creating large, elaborate plans. Frilly's "Box-mate" was Lilly. Lilly had already been with the gang for about a year before Frilly came along. And it didn't take long for Frilly and Lilly to become best friends. Frilly now lives with Lilly and Danton. Frilly's life changed dramatically when she met Danton after the Family stole his bag so they could use his potions to save their leader. She and Lilly asked if they could go with Danton. The two fillies did mind leaving the family, this was because their leader, Maximilian, said that "Everypony must leave the family eventually". Normally, ponies would find it hard to leave their friends behind, but Lilly was really the only friend she had. Danton agreed and now they live with him in the Everfree Forest and attend the Ponyville Schoolhouse. Despite their street smarts and knowing how to avoid danger, Danton does not let them walk to Ponyville on their own for obvious reasons. Frilly and Lilly also are having difficulties adjusting to the "new lives". That being, they tend to forget to pay for things like food and often get caught because they are not in the "coordinated teamwork" state of mind. Because of this they have a negative reputation among most adults around town. Fortunately, this is not extended the the foals of Ponyville who instead see them as "troublemakers" than petty, young criminals. They have, on several occasions, been caught by the guards. The guards normally let them off with a warning, thanks to Frilly's silver tongue. Frilly is also very mischievous. From water balloons to loosing salt shaker tops to getting others in trouble for no reason. She is quite smart about it, too. Frilly knows how cover her tracks and how to get out of sticky situations. Many ponies of Ponyville know of her 'ways' but have difficulty pinning it on her. She also draws up elaborate plans and contraptions she wants to use as pranks, she has about 30 some blueprints that she is saving for a "rainy day". "It's either steal things or do pointless but mostly harmless mischief. Your choice" is what Frilly said when her adoptive Big Brother, Danton, asked her to stop. Frilly also has a knack for tailoring though she does not embrace it as an interest. She does, however, like to make things for his friends and family. She makes blankets, shirts, sweaters and more. They are not overly decorative, just practical. However, she is known to go all out when it comes to costumes and disguises. Image of Frilly

Finished Character Summary with what is occurring in her life now, rather than the past. Moved to FINAL. Edit: Renamed "Cutie Mark/Name Story" to "Name Story". Don't know why I called it Cutie Mark...

I have made a few freebies(and I plan to make more) of things I think ponies here would like. Pony Templates I only have this 2 at the moment but I plan to make more. Earth/Unicorn Stallion 01 Earth/Unicorn Stallion 02 - Buff Earth/Pegasus Filly 01 Cutie Marks After reading Kite's App, I thought I might share this. Shield Cutie Marks More will come in the future.

Edit: Changed 2nd "requested" item because aether is far too complex/confusing. Danton looked around in slight confusion based on the 'crappy day' comment. He had hardly noticed the weather as it seemed so similar to the Everfree Forest. "Oh uh, yes!" Danton said snapping out of his confusion. "I'm looking for a specific herb and my friend pointed me here" he continued as he, telepathically, placed his note in his backpack. "And, if you have any, I'm also looking for quicksilver. Though, I won't be surprised if you don't" Danton said with a bit nervousness while his eyes wandered.

Danton stood outside the door Kite had entered not too long ago, though he did not see that. Danton's legs were weary, not only because his backpack was a fairly bit too heavy but also because of how long he had been walking. "It's always a journey just to come here to Ponyville" thought Danton as he remembered all his times walking to Ponyville from his home in the Everefree Forest. "But it's worth it for the isolation..." He looked at a small piece of paper he was levitating in front of him. "This is the place. I think" said Danton as he looked at the address. Danton then proceeded to knock on the door. *Knock knock knock*

Just want a little more input before I place her in FINAL.