Okay, this looks like a cool, creative idea for an OC pony and I'm looking forward to seeing Epithet around the RP forums. Since you asked for a review, there's just a few things I'd like to mention. Firstly, it is mentioned in the guide to applying for a character not to colour the writing. While it's not a big issue, I just thought I would let you know that the best colour for text is black, and the best font is the simplest when it comes to applications. Next, I'm just going to point out that you haven't filled out the name field. Probably just one of those silly mistakes we all make. Next onto the layout of the application. This isn't a specific rule, but I tend to put blank line gaps between each field. It makes it easier to read and looks neater. Next, another point on the presentation, it looks as though the bolding of the field titles (e.g. "age") hasn't worked properly. Instead of seeing bold writing i can see the . Forgive me if i am wrong - it may just be my iPod. But you may want to look into that. I know how Epithet looks because of the picture, but where you've said the colour of his mane and tail, why don't you go into some more detail about the actual style? I don't think you've mentioned that he's a unicorn. How about giving us some insight to Epithet's magic skill; is he bad at magic, what does he use it for? Finally, and this is just me speculating now, but you did say he didn't fit in well with "upper class ponies". If this is the case then what about lower class ponies? Does he have any friends at all? Cousins he likes maybe? Hope I've helped and good luck!