FarSkies

Far Skies raised an eyebrow, "Don't believe me? So there I was, walkin' around the edge of the great Mt. Thunderhoof, right along where the base of it meets the forest. I was scrounging around for some volcanic rock, especially obsidian, which I could use to trade for all sorts of stuff. Just then, something caught my eye, a giant turtle! I swear the thing must of been five meters across, with a huge domed shell! And it was plodding right up the side of the volcano! I must've watched the thing plod along for an hour. And you wouldn't believe what happened next! The big lug takes a bad step! Can you believe it? At the pace he was going!" Far talks on as he leads them through side street after side street before emerging onto a busier street "I couldn't help but watch as he flailed his stubby legs tryin' to get his balance back, but the poor thing couldn't! So he fell over, not far, so he probably wasn't hurt. The problem was he was on the incline leading up the side of the mountain! So can you guess what happened next? He started rolling! Right down the slope - towards me!" Far stops his story for a second to watch the colt's reaction, taking a quick sniff to make sure they were still going the right way.

Far felt his smile grow as he watched the little colt cheer up. Closing his eyes, he lifted his snout to search the wind until he came across the tasty smell of omelette. Finding it, he pointed down a side street and said "That way!" Leading the way, he turned to Timid Star. "So, all the way from Gallopocus, huh? Been there once or twice myself, beautiful place, absolutely gorgeous! And creatures and plants like you wouldn't believe! I remember this one time when I visited that I ended up having to run for my life against the biggest turtle I've ever seen!"

Taking the tiny hoof, Far gave it a gentle shake and replied. "Jeez, that's tough dude. Timid Star, right? My name's Far Skies. I actually grew up around here myself, maybe I can give you a hoof in findin' where you're goin'?" Far's stomach starts to rumble as he releases the colt's hoof. "Heh, if you don't mind stopping for some chow first? I've been flying for a while and I am star-VING! How's about you Star?"

Far Skies drifted down to the town square and stretched his legs after a long day of flying. Taking a look around he drank in the sights and smells of home. Well, as close to home as he'll allow. As he walked about, his eyes fell upon a golden vase lying in the road. Approaching it, he found it to be a young colt and his dog, a blank-flank to be precise, crying in the street! Sparing a glare at the ignorant passing ponies, Far trotted across the street to the sad colt. "Hey, bucko, what's a colt like you doing crying in the street?" he asked, giving a kind smile.

The way I see it, there's a big difference between talking about what you do, and telling about who you are. Here, let me change it a bit to show that better.

Changed it to 'FINAL,' guess I'm ready for it to be critiqued.

I guess it's going well? I don't think I've gotten enough feedback to really tell though...

Welcome to the herd, brony! Hope you like it here!

Well, I've been wandering around the introduction forums for a place to post my third post for a while, but I can't seem to think of anything to say that hasn't already been said by the usual array of welcoming ponies and well-wishers. I think I'll just post this here and hopefully I won't get scolded. Haha! Pony emoticons are so fun! Fus Ro ! ...Okay I'm done now.

Thank you so much for the warm welcome! The last forum site I participated in was a disaster. It's good to see such a welcoming crowd! Then again, what else should I expect from proud bronies?

DERP Anyway, I'm pretty much a stranger to roleplaying and forums in general so I guess I'll go with the suggested introduction topics: Who am I? Nobody really, just a guy who wants to give roleplaying a pony a whirl. How did I hear about Canterlot.com? My friend, HighRoller has been really excited by the roleplaying he's been doing here, so I thought it'd be a great place to get some experience roleplaying. How did I become a fan of FiM? Not much to tell, I stumbled onto the brony memebase one day and decided to see what all the fuss was about. (Here's the secret: the fuss was about a really awesome show!) Who is my Favorite Pony? Luna. Definitely Princess Luna, I love her design, her character, her voice, and did I mention her amazing design? So, that seems to be all the suggested questions, I look forward to meeting all of you and roleplaying in the fantastic world of Equestria!